ON HOLD MG ff : Aansoon Part 21 Updated on Page no 55 on 28th November - Page 38

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 20

emotional update.... well written

of cos Maaneet are shocked and helpless

dadima likes Geet.

hate Tayjii! she is so mean.

feeling for Geet.

dadima is unwell.

at least Maan saw Geet's condition.

he knew she was upset.

great that they spoke

Maan and Geet agreed to get married cos of their families


thanks for the pm and update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very nice update dear

Dadima and darji fixed their marriage and maan and geet try to break the alliance but tayiji took geet with her and scold her

Geet is very hurt with tayiji word

And dadima health is also not good

Both maan and geet decided to accept the alliance for elders

Watting for update

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Posted: 4 years ago

I see there is a new chapter. Off to read.

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Posted: 4 years ago

What is the past Geet is worried about? She should tell Maan about it. She thinks dadi knows, but tayiji hid it and lied to her.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi, please post Part 22

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Posted: 4 years ago

MG FF AANSOON

Part 21

Maan said- Geet see tum ek bahaut achi ladki ho or jis bhi insan se tumhari shadi hogi vo bahaut lucky hoga mujhe problem tumse nai hai mai phle bhi keh chuka hu ye baat ki mai shadi ke liye he taiyar nai hu fir chahe vo tum ho ya fir koi aur the thing is mai abhi shadi nai krna chata hu lekin dadima ki health ki vjh se mai unhe mana nai kr skta isliye mujhe tumhari help chahiye… tum meri madad krogi na plsee…

Geet said- Pr mujhe krna kya hoga?? Sir dekhiye mai apni family ko hurt nai krskti so plse kch asa mat kahiyega jisse mere pariwar walo ko dukh pahuche mere liye meri family he meri sbse pehli priority hai and i knw apke liye bhi apki dadima or family bahaut important hai..

Maan said- Geet mai samjh sakta hu ye cheez or mai kuch bhi asa nahi kahuga tumse karne ke liye jisse tumhari ya meri family ko hurt ho pr mere hisaab se iss situation me yhi krna best hai because dadimaa ki health ko dekhte hue mai unhe stress nai deskta or agr maine iss shadi se manaa kiya th vo bahaut zadaa he stress legii.. jo ki mai bilkul nai chataa hu… geet kya tum mujhseee shaadi karogii???

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Geet was too shocked to reply what Maan said. She did not uttered a single word she was just seeing Maan.

Maan said- I know it's shocking bt Geet maine tumhari saari baate sunii and tumhari baato se saaf dikhata hai ki tum ye shaadi sirf apne ghar walo ki khushi ke liye karna chati ho or mai apni dadima ki khushi ke liyee jabki naa he tum iss shadi se khush ho naa he maii.. so let's make a deal hum ye shadi sirf apni families ki khushi ke liye karege or vo bhi sirf 6 mahino ke liye it is like a contract marriage for 6 months.

Geet was angry listening to maan she said- Shadii 6 mahino ke liye ye kya bat kar rahe hai aap haa.. shadi koi gudde guddiyo ka khel ya apki koi office ki deal nahi hai Mr. Maan Singh Khurana jiski koi time limit hoo aree shadi toh puri zindagi bhar ka sath hota hai… or sabki zindagi ka sbse anmol rishta hota hai sbki life me utar charav aate hai rishte badlte hai lekin sirf ek he rishta hota hai jo na kbhi tuttta hai na he bikharta hai or vo rishta hota hai ek husband or wife ka jo pyar se bandha hota hai vishwass se bandha hota … or ap uss rishte ka mazaak udha rahe hai.. aap jaante hai jab ek ladki apna sb kch apna ghar pariwar jha vo pali badi hoti hai vo sab chod kar apne pati ke ghar jaati hai th bs ek he umeed se ki usse vo duniya ki saari khushiyaan deegaa ladke ka pariwar usko apnayega… pr yhaa th mere hone walee pati ka nazariyaa sun kar he mai heraan hu… apko th shadi ka matlab tak nahi pata seriously mujhe apse ye ummed nai thi Maan sir ap chahe jaise bhi ho gussa krte ho lekin apki aankho me maine dekha tha vo pyar vo apna pan apki dadima ke liye lekin aaj. Aaj mujhe apki aankhee smjh me nai aari hai… ap exactly kya karne ki koshish kr rahe hai… janti hu ki ap dadima se bahaut pyaar karte hai apko unki chinta hai and trust me mujhe bhi unko utni he chinta hai ap maano ya na maano lekin unki khushi ke liye ap shadi jse pavitr rishte ka apmaan kar rahe hai… ye galat hai hum aur koi tareeka bhi nikaal skte hai iss situation se niklne kaa lekin ye koi sahi tareeka nai hai koi bhi situation ko deal krne kaa…

Maan was listening to geet and was ashamed of his thought but he tried to explain himself to geet and said being angry- Mai kya karu geet mujhe nai samjh aara hai tum jo keh rahi ho vo bilkul sahi hai lekin iske alawa or koi option nahi samjh aara hai mere tum mujhse shadi nai krna chati or na he mai tumsee pr ghr walo ka kya kare hum geet tum he btao kya kare hum log… kya tumhare paas iss situation ka koi solution hai agr hai toh btao i am ready to go with it tum chahti ho ki tumhare ghr wale hurt bhi na ho or solution bhi nikl jayee pr ye sb kse hoga btao mujhe bolo geet??

Geet said- Pta nahi mujhe kaise hoga lekin this is just not right i mean contract marriage noo mai asaa nai kr skti shadi jaise pavitr bandhan ka apmaan mai nai kr skti maan sir nai kr skti… she bent down and she was crying….

Maan's heart pained seeing tears in Geet's eyes he also sat down and instantly hugged Geet and calmed her down… geet embraced maan with her both hands at his back and maan both hands were calming down geet by rubbing her shoulders and he helped her to get up they were still hugging each other lost in there own world Maan' s shirt was wet with geet's Aansoon but he did not mind it because right now he just want geet to stop crying so he said- Shhh.. Geet chup hojaoo please calm down mai hu na tumhare sth don't cry sab theek hojyega.. don't worry…

Geet said while crying- Nahii kuch theek nai hogaa… bachapan se lekr aajatk kch bhi theek kaha hua hai mere saath jo aaj hogaa… ap nai jaante maan sir aapne mujhse kyaa maanga hai aaj apne mujhsee mera sapnaa mangaa hai vo sapna jo har ladki ka hota hai jiske liye mai apko naa bhi nahi kar skti kyuki… vo meriii mere pariwaar ki khushiyon ke beech ajyega….Geet comes out of the hug and looked in Maan's eyes she was still crying and she said- Mai aapse Shaadi Karne ke liye Taiyaar hoon maan sir… and with that she left the terrace running while crying… Maan stood there helpless not able to help Geet and he also moved towards the hall.

Geet came running towards her room and she closed the door and went to her bed and startrd crying… she said while crying -kyu babaji kyu ap mera asa imtihaan le rahe ho… kyu babaji… kyu… and she was just crying and crying…. Nandini came to her room and started knocking on her door and said- Geet didi… Geet didii kya hua apne door kyu band kiya hua hai darwazaa kholo didi…

Geet got up from bed and wiped her Aansoon and composed herself and opened the door with smile. Nandini came towards her and said- kya hua geet didi apne door kyu band krdia..

Geet said smilingly - kuch nai nandu vo mera dress ka dori khul gaya tha vhi bnd kr ri thi. :-)

Nandini said- Geet didi pakka yhi baat hai naa ap mujhse kuch chupaa toh nahi rahe na… bolo didi or ha ap mujhe kch btane wale the she got interrupted when tayi ji came inside and said- aree geet puttar taiyar hogyi tu are tera chehra kitna utra hua lg rha hai nandu makeup krde apni didi ka 5 min me neeche lekrr aa sab intezaar kr re hai iskaa jaldi neeche aao dono taiyarr hokrr… and she went from there hurriedly.

Nandini said- Didi aap theek th ho naa plse btao kya hua hai apka face bahaut utra hua hua ap ro rahe the na kya hua didi please btao naa or ye shadi aap kyu kar re ho ye shadi jb ap nahi karna chate th

Geet said- Nandu kabhi kabhi kch decisions hme babaji pr chd dene chahiye or agr hmre ghr ke bade chahte hai ki mai Maan sir se shadi karu toh mai karugi khushi khushi tu chinta mat kar mai bilkul theek hu and she smiles and said- chal ab jldi se mera makeup theek kr…

Nandu said- ji didi …

Geet got ready and she was looking so beautiful. She thought-Maan sir ne kha tha ki dadima ko tension wali koi bat nai btani hai lekin tayi ji ne toh mujhse kaha tha ki unhone dadi ma ko bta diya hai mere baare me sb kch lekin fir maan sir ko insb ke baare me kch kyu nahi pata tha kahi tayi ji ne mujhse jhoot toh nahi bolaa haa pkaa vo jhoot he bol ri hogi taaki mai shaadi ke liye haa kardu.. mujhe tayi ji or maan sir dono se baat karni hogi kyu ki iss vkt dadima ki tbyat ko dekhte hue mai unse toh bat kar nahi sakti she made up her mind and they both went downstairs.

In hall

Maan also came and sat beside his dadima. But he was looking tensed. But he faked smile because Dadima was also there. She saw geet coming downward and immediately went to her.

Geet smiled seeing her and she took dadima's blessings by touching her foot. Dadima said- Jeete raho betaa… hmesha khush raho bahaut pyari lag rahi hai aap..

Geet said- Thank you dadima :-)

Dadima said- aaiye hmare sath.. she took her to the place where maan was sitting and made her sit on the left of maan. Maaneet looked at each other… Eyelock #Maaahii# Soon there eyelock broke and Geet said to Maan slowely in his ear while faking smile with other- Mujhe apse baat karnii… she smiled while seeing dadima… Maan said in her ear slowly while faking smile- hmm theek hai baad me abi nai ab sb log hai yha pr… kal subha 10 bje office me milte hai vhi sara discussion krlege ok..

Geet said being shocked- office mee??

Maan said- Ha kyun koi problem hai??

Geet said- nai hm waha baat nai krskte.. kitne log honge waha kaise bat krege hm waha kahi or bat krni hogi

Maan said- hmm you r right theek hai mai kch dekhta hu..

Geet nodded her head.

And all the rituals started. Dadima gave geet chunri which she bought for her and made her wear it on her head and she also gave some necklaces to her Naintara helped Geet to wore that necklace that was khandaani haar.. she asked geet to keep it safe.. she also gave bangles to her and some jwellery too and Daarji gave maan gold chain and watch and some clothes as well and he put tilak on his forehead then one by one everyone came and gave their blessing to the couple and made them eat sweets and Roka ceremony came to an end.

Everyone was having lunch. They were sitting on the Dinning table Maaneet sat beside each other because dadimaa wanted them to eat in one plate as it is a good shagun according to her. But the reason was that she wanted maaneet to come closer so that they can live happily ever after. So she herself served maaneet's food plate and gave it to them.

She said to maaneet- chalo beta ab phle aap ek dusre ko khilao uske baad he hum sb khana shuru karege.

Maaneet looked at each other nervously. First maan took a bite of roti and he took some sabzi with it and gave it to geet and she took a bite from Maan's hand a shiver ran down their spine when there hands touched each other. Now it was Geet's turn she also took a bite of roti and some sabzi and gave it to Maan and he also took the bite but he started coughing badly Maan- aaakhuu akhuu akhhuu…. Geet hurriedly took a glass of water and made maan drink it started rubbing his back and she said- Aap theek toh hai naa.. yee lijiye pani pijiye…. And soon Maan become normal. Maan said- Thank you :-) Geet just smiled and moved her face slightly. But everyone present on the able were admiring the new couple especially Dadima she thought- Humee pata tha Geet he maan ke liye sahi ladki hai na ki vo sameera… jo hmare pote ke har dukh ka karan hai.. bhale he vo dil ki saf thi or achi ladki thi pr vo hmare Maan ke layak bilkul nahi thi… she just sighed and said- Maan bete ap theek hai naa…

Maan said- Ji dadimaa mai bilkul theek hu chaliye ab aap bhi khana khaiyee.. and he looked at the dishes and thought dadima ye khana kaise khayege unko th tbyat theek nai hai.. agar maine yha kissi ko bola th unhe bura na lgjyee he was confused what to do??

Geet understood Maan's dilemma and said- Ha dadima aaiyee ap bhi khaiyee naa apke liye special khana bnaya hai apki tbyat ko dhyan me rkhte hue kal mirch masal or tel wala and haa salad zaroor khaiyega apke liye acha hai naintara ji ne btaya hai mujhee.. and she assured maan from her eyes the everything is under control don't worry :-) and he sasid- thank you. There this gesture want not gone un noticed by Dadima she saw this and was overwhelmed with care love and concern geet showed to her and everyone had there lunch together.

Precap- Maaneet in Banglasaab.🙏🏻

Edited by himani02 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for updating

Part 20

emotional update

feeling for Maan and esp Geet

of cos she is upset when he says they will have a contract marriage

Geet's outburst is justified

upset seeing Geet like this

both are helpess

she agreed to marry him

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wonderful update dear

Maan and geet decided to contract marriage first geet against for contract but after for family sake she agree

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Interesting both are right from their POV. They like each other but not like to get married /love.

Geet getting upset understandable. Maan is not wrong from his point too. He was not trying to make a mockery of marriage. Wish he had said instead they will see how things go and decide accordingly


anyway now that they have decided to get married hope their feelings change or wonder what has to happen for that to change

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you for update 🙂

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