II Chahat II: Rudhita SS // Last Chapter Updated @Page 49 // - Page 35

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Soma84

I really love this story. I instantly fell in love with this story the moment i read the first chapter ❤️. And this chapter... Oh my god... I was so lost in this fictional world. I absolutely got moved by the sweet moments between batuk-somnath-bondita. My eyes literally welled up reading that emotional part. And believe me or not 😅 I was waiting for 11th chapter like crazy. I was so happy seeing the notification. N yeah... It was beautiful. Please don't keep us waiting for long for the next chapter. Eagerly waiting for the next one.


Hey!

Thank You so much dear. Next chapter is updated.❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: briti_asfiya

I-- I let me process it that you dedicated this chapter to me. ME. I mean I- I am rendered speechless. You don't know how much this means to me Sujz. I love you sis.


Coming to the update, this chapter is the best of Chahat. I mean the way you portrayed the bond of Som - Bondita - Batuk was simply heartwarming.


Can I give my Banu baby a hug please, my baccha your husband loves you, and only if you knew iss jhule pe sirf tumhara haq hai. Don't worry Ani will let you know soon, Pati Babu ki gold medal.


Ani, my boi, stop treading into dangerous territories just like that, wifey is pissed off, don't you get it? Ah, that's delibalerate, eh? You're such a tease (and an a+ flirt too).



Rain weigh you down, they keep you abject, still, in your place. Yet, rain is considered such a romantic notion, it waxes people poetic, the droplets cleanses the earth and everything on it, giving a fresh outlook to it.


A storm of emotions were crashing against Bondita's head, pouring down incessantly, as she gazed at the night sky, not unlike the heavy downpour outside, she was lost, a bit hopeful but greatly confused, all the emotions were crashing and pouring down all at once jumbling the poor baby up, but she didn't consider that rain is also the symbolism of a new beginning and *cough* *cough* romance.


❝In The Rain


in the rain-

darkness, the sunset

being sheathed i sit and

think of you


the holy

city which is your face

your little cheeks the streets

of smiles


your eyes half-

thrush

half-angel and your drowsy

lips where float flowers of kiss


and

there is the sweet shy pirouette

your hair

and then


your dancesong

soul. rarely-beloved

a single star is

uttered,and i


think

of you


- E. E. Cummings❞


You captured the rawness of the passion so beautifully my dearest Sujz, it was very romantic, a lovely contrast between the arousal and the way Ani controls himself, damn nice way to get a girl's hopes high, you tease.


I loved the ending of the chapter, so Ani leaves her with an conundrum and she has to decode it, hun? Don't worry our girl is just confused, but she's smart and will crack it in no time.


What can I say I'm just blown away by this update.


P.S. I love you to the moon and back.


P.P.S. Oh yes, you've to check my stories out.


P.P.P.S. Okay Subho Shashti, I forgot to wish you. Saradiar Antarik Priti O Subbechha.


Your comment is better than my entire non existent writing career

What do I say😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: bhshre95


You updated Chahat😲🥳

Sorry I just saw😒😆

Will read it tomorrow and comment❤️

Thanks for updating❤️🤗


Kal kab ayega shre?🤓

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kajal21

Binge read all the parts😛

It was so intriguing and beautiful👍🏼

Plz continue asap


Thank You so much!

Updated the final chapter.❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Siddiquie

Lovely,update soon please


Thank You!

Updating❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: bubblesort

Now that I had read all the previous parts , I will say beautiful story Sujz👏The way you express the emotions is awesome.I am liking Som here😆 and Saudamini😡 And I am loving this Ani 😳 kitna pareshan karta hai lekin Bon ko😆 bechari confuse ho jati hai😆

Please update soon 😳


Hey Korosuke❤️

Thanks for the lovely comment.

Updating❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Stunned by the way you deciphered Ani and bon's feeling , you penned it beautifully sujz smiley27smiley42

I always feel loss for words to appreciate your writing smiley9 Your choice of words are amazing and ofcourse a treat to read.! smiley10

I was sheepishly smiling while reading this chapter smiley4

How sweet of som and batuk to care about their lil boudi, their relationship will always be special.

I liked the jhoola part alot smiley37 I so wanted this to happen in show aswell smiley39

This ani man is torturing her alotsmiley36 , but why is bon being buddhusmiley44cant she understand her patibabu's feeling smiley9 He is being very evident but bon isn't thinking in that angle..! "His gold medal is her "smiley27smiley42

My most fav is ani saying to bon " My wifey" smiley43 it had so much feelings

Sujz writing romantic stuff smiley2 hmmm hmmm smiley42

Now can't wait for the next chapter , update soon behena smiley42

I'm disappointed with the fact that chahat has only one more chapter..! Will miss your writing alot smiley19 but I hope you entertain us by writing more on Rudhita ❤️

One suggestion smiley39 can you write epilogue of chahat with that khayali pulao of yours of Rudhita with 3 bacche smiley27smiley36


Lalz😊

Aww, glad you liked the chapter so much.

@Bold kyun?


Yes it has only one chapter left and I am updating it.


@bold2 Hahahahah no, let's keep that for some other time.


Thank You!❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: twinklesharma

you're an amazing writer sujz nice story i 've read all the part was just waiting for update 👍🏼 , please update regularly if possible


Thank You so much dear.❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: screen22

I have just read chapter 11, no words can describe the feelings that this chapter is giving you.

She is not reading or feeling his feelings because everything is in front of her nose but still does not understand

To understand between the lines she really needs to ask the right questions “the gold medal” Bondita is the ☝️ with the 🥇.

My Hindi is not brilliant but tried to understand what was written, I didn’t understand the conversation between Bondita and her two brother-in-laws?

Please continue soon


Its not that she doesn't understand, she is denying acknowledging it because she fears if her hopes will break this time.😊

@bold it was just a cute banter about roshogulle and Somnath pacifying Bondita.


Thank You!❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: tharsh1011

Bing read 11 chapters to remember continuation. 3500 words gave us such beautiful chapter.

Pls update soon sujz.


Thank You so much!

Updated❤️

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