Originally posted by: briti_asfiya
I-- I let me process it that you dedicated this chapter to me. ME. I mean I- I am rendered speechless. You don't know how much this means to me Sujz. I love you sis.
Coming to the update, this chapter is the best of Chahat. I mean the way you portrayed the bond of Som - Bondita - Batuk was simply heartwarming.
Can I give my Banu baby a hug please, my baccha your husband loves you, and only if you knew iss jhule pe sirf tumhara haq hai. Don't worry Ani will let you know soon, Pati Babu ki gold medal.
Ani, my boi, stop treading into dangerous territories just like that, wifey is pissed off, don't you get it? Ah, that's delibalerate, eh? You're such a tease (and an a+ flirt too).
Rain weigh you down, they keep you abject, still, in your place. Yet, rain is considered such a romantic notion, it waxes people poetic, the droplets cleanses the earth and everything on it, giving a fresh outlook to it.
A storm of emotions were crashing against Bondita's head, pouring down incessantly, as she gazed at the night sky, not unlike the heavy downpour outside, she was lost, a bit hopeful but greatly confused, all the emotions were crashing and pouring down all at once jumbling the poor baby up, but she didn't consider that rain is also the symbolism of a new beginning and *cough* *cough* romance.
❝In The Rain
in the rain-
darkness, the sunset
being sheathed i sit and
think of you
the holy
city which is your face
your little cheeks the streets
of smiles
your eyes half-
thrush
half-angel and your drowsy
lips where float flowers of kiss
and
there is the sweet shy pirouette
your hair
and then
your dancesong
soul. rarely-beloved
a single star is
uttered,and i
think
of you
- E. E. Cummings❞
You captured the rawness of the passion so beautifully my dearest Sujz, it was very romantic, a lovely contrast between the arousal and the way Ani controls himself, damn nice way to get a girl's hopes high, you tease.
I loved the ending of the chapter, so Ani leaves her with an conundrum and she has to decode it, hun? Don't worry our girl is just confused, but she's smart and will crack it in no time.
What can I say I'm just blown away by this update.
P.S. I love you to the moon and back.
P.P.S. Oh yes, you've to check my stories out.
P.P.P.S. Okay Subho Shashti, I forgot to wish you. Saradiar Antarik Priti O Subbechha.