AshNi + OC FF: Love is all you need - Page 44

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Initial updates were kind of building the plot and now the story is racing...

both of them are on their own...trying to understand more and getting together...working in sync....

Initial updates are serious...now there is lot of thrill in the story...and there are twists also...

Yes, that is intentional. The first few updates were all about introducing who they are and where they're at emotionally and their building equation.

The action also serves to build up their relationship, and I had always intended for Samir to be the cement between them. Just how I did not know, but then I got thinking that if it can be tied somehow to Ryan's job, and present an opportunity for him to do something, and then to throw in Sara in the mix, so they can be together for some sexy times, it would serve all angles! ☺️

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett

Next update will take a while. I'm finding writing difficult these days because of lack of time. Do you find anything different in the writing style? Starting from chapter 1? Has anything changed?

No problem....your comfort is more important...

Not sure if you have visited Hyd....initial story is like driving in the city...now the story is like driving on ORR (Outer Ring Road)...😆

Samir is at Sharmanya due to his step father??? 😔

Jen and Jai's story in parallel....where are you taking this story....👍🏼

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Samir is at Sharmanya due to his step father??? 😔

No, if you read chapter 2 you will see that Samir was in Sharmanya because of his father who used to beat his mother. Then later in Chapter 4, Ryan mentions that his mother has another guy, this is his stepfather.

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Jen and Jai's story in parallel....where are you taking this story....👍🏼

Yes it is kind of. I have something in mind, but often when I write things turn out quite different so I'm not sure of anything at this point! 😳

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Not sure if you have visited Hyd....initial story is like driving in the city...now the story is like driving on ORR (Outer Ring Road)...😆

You know I have never been to Hyd, that is an interesting parallel! 😆

It's been almost 2 months and I don't see readership for this fic picking up . The updates are getting longer, and the reviews shorter. No complaints from those who are reading, but seriously demotivated to post anymore 😭.

I liked the presentation made by Ryan in Part-1.

Though he has taken the task as a kind of fill in, he has done it so well...👏