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Posted: 5 years ago

Other inputs/ comments would be appreciated!


My updates have gotten longer (close to 8000 words per chapter) so I really wish I would get some detailed comments 😒

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Posted: 5 years ago

Felt so bad that story ended for tonight.....ohhh no....I want to continue reading....😭😲🤔

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Posted: 5 years ago

Sara managed so well with Samir....🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Felt so bad that story ended for tonight.....ohhh no....I want to continue reading....😭😲🤔


Next update will take a while. I'm finding writing difficult these days because of lack of time. Do you find anything different in the writing style? Starting from chapter 1? Has anything changed?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Am happy for Ryan...he first got appreciation from Sara, about his past performance and then the current and now this job which he is excited about....👏🥳

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Sara managed so well with Samir....🤗


Yes, Sara is so badass in this update!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Sara's personality is changing....first she is breaking rules and then trying to speak up....😛😎

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Am happy for Ryan...he first got appreciation from Sara, about his past performance and then the current and now this job which he is excited about....👏🥳


Well, it's not really a job. It's more of a voluntary thing! 😆 But he's happy to do it because 1) he cares about Samir and 2) he loves investigating and possibly 3) because he has Sara by his side? ☺️


I find there could be so many opportunities to insert romance into a good thriller story, don't you?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Sara's personality is changing....first she is breaking rules and then trying to speak up....😛😎


Well, Ryan brings out the best in her! Jai has noticed.

Also she's not inhibited when she doesn't have some people around her- maybe her family and Ian. She's more liberated with Ryan.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett


Next update will take a while. I'm finding writing difficult these days because of lack of time. Do you find anything different in the writing style? Starting from chapter 1? Has anything changed?


Initial updates were kind of building the plot and now the story is racing...

both of them are on their own...trying to understand more and getting together...working in sync....

Initial updates are serious...now there is lot of thrill in the story...and there are twists also...

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