Storyline? Plot? Subplot?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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So as we have seen the plot is something that could have been deal with 'human sensitivity' since girl has lost parents and the other one's family has been suffered enough with a traitor tag.


They showed their conflicting emotions in the first week of post leap. I so wished makers to go like that and slowly narrate and explore the two characters but what we are getting is Suman and Shravan are too free to date people just to let each other know they aren't affected by each other's presence.


I get that they didn't got any permission to shoot at ArmyBase camp, etc but atleast work on the writing? Show something which can make me connect to characters who's been in pain and stuck in past for 7 years? What about the subplot? The case?


A love story can be work with a process of exploring their each layer but seems like they want to shove Vikram and Sophie down our throats. Why so much screenspace to these two unnecessary characters ? What are they going to do if SuVan themselves are so keen on ruining their own lives? What's the point of such side characters who are getting more importance than the leads?


The irony is this time it's not even TRP's fault for such unreasonable writing to gain something. It's CV's and Writer's fault to mess up their own story and making the audience lose their interest. They managed to give us enough of meaningful storyline in pre-leap and that too when pandemic was at it's peak but right now. Each and every scene includes this Vikram and Sophie who doesn't makes sense. Infact Shravan and Suman doesn't makes sense either so what's the point to blame sideys?


I can't watch Pre-leap episodes to make myself feel better but rather it will make me more upset what mess of mess our show has become.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi dear, I don't know what else is left in the show that can be deemed as watchable as a viewer. Writers clearly lost their wit to write a proper buildup. Nowadays, it seems more like a lets play games or some reality show. Even with Shravan, I lost a sense of attachment. Whether the kiss happens or not, KK just looked blank face stare w/o any emotion as Suman. Shravan just giving death stares so well this is what one gets when he wants to show the whole "Move on, move on" illogical game/crap expectation & same goes for suman. IDK if this is well worth terming it "apne per p khuladi marna" wala thing. Just to get the promo effect, writers are just too keen on destroying the plot, then by all means go for it.

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Originally posted by: Meena_J

Hi dear, I don't know what else is left in the show that can be deemed as watchable as a viewer. Writers clearly lost their wit to write a proper buildup. Nowadays, it seems more like a lets play games or some reality show. Even with Shravan, I lost a sense of attachment. Whether the kiss happens or not, KK just looked blank face stare w/o any emotion as Suman. Shravan just giving death stares so well this is what one gets when he wants to show the whole "Move on, move on" illogical game/crap expectation & same goes for suman. IDK if this is well worth terming it "apne per p khuladi marna" wala thing. Just to get the promo effect, writers are just too keen on destroying the plot, then by all means go for it.

Hey!


I lost an attachment with him when he begrudged the lights on in Tiwari house and then next day he remembered Vijay. So I'm not disappointed. I'm more p*ssed off how 25 years old independent individuals are behaving IDIOTIC and SENSELESS who's suffered enough to gain some sense of Maturity.


Yes, KK looks lost and bland. Clearly I get it, some actors are director's actors and she is still learning slowly but the direction itself is bland and so does the writing so I don't know how much an actor could salvage trainwreck scenes. MK is good with emoting with eyes and all but he also looks lost sometimes because of contradictory shifts in Shravan from anger to sudden soft to sudden jealous. Experienced veteran actors fall flat in poor stories , So these two are new apparently.


@bold : You said it. This is what CVs have done to their own characters and this what their characters are doing to themselves.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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They have two options either end the show or reboot it and change the story line. Ye siyaapa aur dekha nai jaa raha

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbpll

They have two options either end the show or reboot it and change the story line. Ye siyaapa aur dekha nai jaa raha

Agreed. They have messed up big time.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbpll

They have two options either end the show or reboot it and change the story line. Ye siyaapa aur dekha nai jaa raha

LOL, 😂 IDK if they will even listen because they are not taking constructive criticism seriously. For the past month, there have been highlights but it was only in Shravan's performance but when he got manipulated by Sumo ji whether it was the god damn dining table scene or perhaps when she mentioned it as a high school attraction, he still got manipulated to become sanki or whatever the hell the writers wanted to label as. After October 15, the story has been gone down the drain fully. Only the courtcase drama episode was the decent episode out of all episodes, TBH, to watch for.

Even MK hasn't been on par for some days, honestly speaking as Shravan because the expression transition isn't as smooth but he's more tolerable to watch as opposed to KK. Even the experienced actor who is the lawyer, his acting is also intolerable to watch because it all looks coerced. But cannot blame them fully as the direction & the editing is so inconsistent itself.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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True! Resonate your thoughts. Hope they notice the disinterest in Vikku- Sophie and scrap that track asap 🥱

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