Ghum Hai Kisikey Pyaar Meiin

Vignette: Glimmer of Hope

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Posted: 3 years ago

Snatching her suitcase from his hands, Sai entered her new room.

Their room, she sighed.

This was not how she had planned her life. Her studies, becoming a Doctor, making her father proud were her priorities, but then, Virat appeared. And with him, every dream and hope died out.

How was she to live in a world devoid of her father’s presence?

How was she to last in this house, where her presence seemed so hateful?

Survive, she knew she would. 

She was built strong enough to persist through any situation. But she feared the hollowness inside her, feared that it would eat her up before she learnt to breathe for herself again. 

She looked around the room, trying to find something familiar to hang on to. 

Nothing.

“Beta”

The soft voice broke her out of her reverie as she realized that Virat was long gone. Turning around, she came across the only person who was silent amidst all the mayhem downstairs.

“What’s your name?” she asked, keeping a plate full of food on the nightstand.

No ‘how could you get married without informing us’, No ‘which family does she belong to?’, No ‘how could you, Virat?’ None of the welcoming she received earlier.

“Sai,” she replied in her gentlest voice, afraid to break the tranquility that has settled in the cold dark room.

“Sai,” the lady repeated thoughtfully, then proceeded to pat her hair in an attempt to comfort her.

It was maybe the warmth of her hands, but Sai felt her eyes closing drowsily. The happenings of the day and the emotional burden she was carrying since her father’s death had drained her.

“Maybe I would after all,” Sai mumbled.

“What?’’ the lady asked.

Breathe.

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I'm really eager to see how the CVs develop the relationship between Sai and Ashwini, and this was a scenario that came into my mind. I hope their relationship is a warm one.


It's been so long that i've written something for IF, *sigh*, anyway life happens🙄

Do leave your comments, rotten tomatoes or flying chappals🤣

-keshni🤪


P.S Ignore mistakes since i'm too lazy to proofread😬

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Posted: 3 years ago

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Too lazy to react now, but can't wait for the next part 

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Posted: 3 years ago

So good and emotional wreck touch is so beautiful 🥳👏

Wish you would write more such things 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

It's beautiful... I am also very excited for Sai-Ashiwini bond 


Waiting for next part ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Would love to read more plz update soon..

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Posted: 3 years ago

The saayi-babe OS we desperately needed and who else could give this but you! I love you, your posts and especially this OS. These wonderful, vulnerable, strong women and their anokha bond will be so very beautiful! So meaningful in its small moments if relief and its basis of a true friendship! I love this!!! 



Also, the words you use and the way you penned this maam, you make it even more poignant!

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Posted: 3 years ago

You write so beautifully ❤️

Please write more 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Keshniiiiii....this is wonderful! 👍🏼

You are a phenomenal writer and really need to write more on the forum now 👏

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Posted: 3 years ago

How come I never stumbled upon this😆


Wow, a great perspective. Made me realise how much it meant to Sai, that moment between the Maa Beti.