RiAnsh FF : Strings of Heart (Chapter 06 : Page 7 Updated)

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Author's Note


Hello guys, I am back with another story that has been in my mind for few days now. I wouldn't lie. I had read a story back in2012/2013 in a blog where the leads converse with each other through letters after accidentally receiving a letter when they were kids. The story progressed with letters and how their lives moved on. I seriously don't remember story name or writer as it was 8-9 years ago, but I do remember the concept. So I thought of why not write something around that concept because I had loved it back then soooo much. I can assure you that I am just talking about the concept. The story, background, characters all are different here. In fact the letters will be the initial part of the story. It will change after few chapters. I am not copying anyone or anyone's story. And I sincerely wish I could remember the writers name so that I could have asked her /him personally but I totally forgot the blog/story name. If this goes against the rules of IF just let me know. I will immediately remove the story.


Character Sketch :

Vansh Raisinghania : Initially a teenager, on verge of moving to college. Later a suave businessman

Riddhima Bose Rajvansh : A teenager, on her 9th standard. Later I haven't decided yet :P

Uma RaiSinghania : Vansh's mother

Vardan Raisinghania : Vansh's Father, a businessman

Anupriya Raisinghania : Vansh's step mother

Chandrika Raisinghania : Vansh's Dadi

Arindam Bose : Riddhima's Maternal uncle

Swastika Bose : Riddhima's Maternal Aunt

Kuhu Bose : Riddhima's Cousin

Animesh Bose : Riddhima's cousin

Siya Raisinghania : Vansh's Sister, second from the trio, soft spoken but strong willed
Ishani Raisinghania : Vansh's youngest sister, bit bratty but loves Siya and Vansh more than anything

Angre Karmakar : Vansh's best friend, business partner

Satish karmakar : Angre's father, Vardan's employee

Rudra Raisinghania : Vansh's uncle

Chanchal Raisinghania : Vansh's aunt, Rudra's wife

Aryan Raisinghania : Vansh's cousin, Casanova, Good at heart but loves to disobey Vansh

Alekh Rajvansh : Riddhima's Father

Radhika Rajvansh : Riddhima's mother.

Kabir Raichand : Haven't decided for him yet, but he will definitely be a part of it.


Disclaimer : There is no Mafia game here. (sorry guys, don't throw chappal). Both of them hails from business family and how their life entangles with each other only time will tell. I will keep adding description and more characters and if needed will make some changes as well. kindly bear with me please.


P.S. I do not live in India , so has no idea about the schooling system there. If anyone could help me with that I would get a focus on deciding their age and which class they are studying. TIA


Index

Chapter 01 : Page 1

Chapter 02 & 03 : Page 3

Chapter 04 : Page 5

Chapter 05 & 06 : Page 7









P.S. Do let me know if you like it or not. Would really like to know your feedback

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Chapter : 01



“Hello students , how are you all ? and how is your annual week going on ? “

Ms. Sharma, the class teacher asked the students enthusiastically.

"It’s going really good ma’am. We are having so much fun. Kirthi won 1st prize in painting ma’am", replied one of the students.

"Why only Kirthi ? Aaj toh Vishal ne bhi price jeeta,'said another one. With that the entire class started squeaking and chit chatting while giving information to Ms. Sharma.

Vansh looked at his entire class nonchalantly. All these doesn’t matter to him. Everything stopped mattering to him since his mother left. He hates to be in public. Wherever he goes people starts gossiping. Siya and Ishani are still small so they don’t understand much. But he knows the truth. And the truth is his mother has left them due to their father. Vansh knows his father isn’t an easy man to be with. Their arguments weren’t hidden from his ears. He always ensured Ishani and Siya never gets to understand but being the elder one even if he didn’t, he understood the broken relationship between his parents. But yet, the selfish kid inside him never thought his mother would leave. He never thought out of everything she could leave him, his Vansh out of everyone. His day always started with his mother. Until she woke him up he didn’t even open his eyes. After coming from school, he used to go directly to his mother. He had so many things to share with her. Being an introvert, he anyway did not have many friend. Few friends he has for namesake just because they belong to the school basketball team along with him. Siya and Ishani was never friend to him but his responsibility to keep them safe. His one and true friend were his mom. And now that she is gone, Vansh does not even feel like talking to anyone. Let alone open up. He didn’t even want to come to school but Dadi forced him so that everything seems normal to his sisters and they come to school too. Besides he is well aware of the bullies that hurts Siya. Ishani being the youngest is quite extrovert and can fight. But his Siya is too naïve for the world and dare anyone hurt her. So even if he wanted to hide from the world, but for his sisters so that no one can tell them anything he comes to school and pretend everything is normal in the Raisinghania clan.


“Vansh !!!” A bit loud voice broke his revere. He looked up only to see the entire class looking at him and Ms. Sharma who was the source of the sound looking inquisitively at him. “Oh God, what I have done now “,Vansh scowled.


“Penny for your thoughts Vansh ?” Ms. Sharma asked. “Nothing,I wasn’t thinking anything,” Vansh reluctantly said. “Then may I ask why you didn’t participate any of the extra-curricular activities this year ?” Someone whispered something and Vansh immediately knew what they were talking about. They were talking about his mother and her disappearance. His blood boiled. He felt like hitting something really hard but he cannot create a scene and making into people’s gossip again. With a straight face he said, “I didn’t feel like it”. “Well, as those were voluntarily activities I cannot force you. But we have a small activity today and every student must participate. And that means you too Vansh and I am not listening anything,’ told Ms. Sharma even before Vansh could refute.


God knows what she will make me do now. Vansh thought feeling irritated. Ms. Sharma started distributing some papers. While distributing she explained,” As you know final day is day after tomorrow of this annual week and like every year we have decided to host a pen-friend event where you will be writing a letter to an anonymous friend. You can write anything you want to share. But remember no derogatory comments or words. These letters will be collected and put in a box on the final day and will be open for all. By all I mean the guest students from other schools too who will be joining us for the event. Students can come and pick one letter. Remember you are not supposed to mention your name in the letter. Just your mailing address. If your pen-friend decides to write you back, only then you guys can reveal each others name on mutual decision. This event is to create an understanding between the cultures and different environment. Hopefully you will write according to it.” Saying this she stopped beside Vansh and handed him over the paper and envelope. “I will be checking if you wrote a letter or not Vansh, so do not skip it”, said Ms. Sharma


Vansh gritted his teeth. Here he is , feeling suffocated in every living second being betrayed by his mom and his teacher wants him to write a letter. He crumpled the paper and was about to throw it when he saw Ms.Sharma’s stern look on him. “Damn it, looks like I have to write it.” Vansh looked at the paper irritated. He took a look of entire class. Everyone is engrossed writing. How they do it Vansh wondered. Opening up to a stranger not knowing if the person is even capable of knowing their secrets, their fear. What if they do not understand what he wants to say? What if they make a fun of it, uses it against him. Vansh Shuddered. No. He made a mistake of giving all his trusts to his mother and getting nothing. His own mother didn’t value what he would feel when she left, how a stranger will? With that same thought he took the pen and scribbled, “I don’t want to talk, do not write me back.” With that he closed the envelope and waited for the bell to ring. One by one everyone gave their letter back to Ms. Sharma. Vansh gave his letter to her and was about to leave when she called him from behind. “Vansh ! You didn’t put your address.” “Damn this woman. Why is she after him? Doesn’t she get it that he do not want to be a part of this?” Vansh wanted to say a lot but decided against it thinking it will create unnecessary issue. Besides she is the only one who didn’t treat him differently after his mother fiasco. Otherwise every teacher looked at him with such scrutiny and sympathy that sometimes Vansh felt like not to exist even. Respecting her , Vansh turned back and hurriedly wrote his address and left the classroom.


Ms. Sharma looked at Vansh’s retreating back and sighed. She can’t believe what this guy became within a span of few months. Vansh was introvert, but he was never inattentive. There was always a spark in his eyes. He is quite smart and good student. He was mature and calculative in his words, but there was this playfulness in him, But after his mother left, this guy changed overnight. Raisinghania’s are really rich and famous and the news of Uma Raisinghania eloping spread like bonfire. She really would like to know what happened but seeing Vansh, she could never bring herself breaching the topic. In fact she pretended absolutely clueless so that the poor guy feels comfortable. She can never forget the hollowness she witnessed in his eyes the first day he came to class after that incident. Something broke inside her and she wanted to hug that kid tight and tell him all will be okay. But decided against it. Since then Vansh become so quite in class and all activities. He hardly talks, barely attentive in class. Not that his exams are going bad. Given the smart student he is, he caught up quite easily. But it is his mental being that is worrying her most. The original Vansh is lost somewhere. This hollow Vansh is not something she is familiar with. His fights with his friends aren’t unknown to her. She really wished to meet Uma Raisinghania and ask her what was the fault of her kids to suffer for the differences their parents has. Ms. Sharma has seen all Raisinghania kids and it breaks her heart whenever she sees Vansh isolating himself, or Siya sitting at the corner of the class so that no one teases her or Ishani, fighting every other student who says anything for her family.


A lone tear escaped from her eyes. She looked at the envelope in her hand. It wasn’t a mandatory task. But she made Vansh do it so that he can at least open up. It helps when you talk to stranger. But looking at his timing, she doubts if he has written even one line or not. She took the letter and kept it with others to submit it tomorrow and sent a silent prayer for Vansh. For whatever it takes, May this kid gets his smile back.





Pheww... There goes first chapter. Do let me know your feedbacks !!!!!


Finally decided on Raisinghania kids age


Vansh : 16 years old

Aryan : 14 years old

Sia : 14 years old

Ishani : 11 years old

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Please update soon. It was so good. I loved it. I think RIddhima will get Vansh's letter and she will write back even though he wrote in his letter to not write back.

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Wow. Like it. Plz update soon.

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Wowwww...

First chapter read karne ke bad lag rah story bahot hi interesting hone vali aage jake...

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Thank you so much 🥰

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Originally posted by: asingh23

Please update soon. It was so good. I loved it. I think RIddhima will get Vansh's letter and she will write back even though he wrote in his letter to not write back.


Thank you so much !!

Of course Riddhima will get it , but how that's a tricky part and base of future story ♥️

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Originally posted by: Arifa05

Wow. Like it. Plz update soon.


Thank you so much will update soon !!

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Originally posted by: Manisha_IF

Wowwww...

First chapter read karne ke bad lag rah story bahot hi interesting hone vali aage jake...


Thank you Manisha ! Hope to live upto that wish ☺️

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So well written. Please continue soon

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