Omg☺️☺️
It's mesmerising sujz❤️
Sujz you have proved yet again why you are one of the best writer here
I so missed your writings 😭but thank God we are getting your creations again🤗..
The addition of bgm music in the background here was something new to me.....trust me it totally created that mood of a ball room👏well done sujz👍🏼
Description about ani and bon's outlook was so so beautiful ...❤️I could actually imagine them in their constumes
I have always told you that you have excellent vocabulary and today you proved me right yet again 👏. ...
I never knew anything much about ball dance eventhough I have tried to write about one....yours was so beautiful
My most favourite parts are one where ani refusing to leave her or blink his eyes fearing that she may disappear if it's just a dream and the other where bon wants to continue leaving even in a delusional world if that moment with ani is just her dream.....superb sujz👏❤️...
Loved bold avatar ani here☺️...tension between both could be easily felt....
Loved the last description about ball dance....thank you so much for creating the mood of a ball dance 🤗...can we get an actual ball dance in the show in future too😒...I wish
Now i want more from you sujz❤️