Rudhita OS: The Waltz Of Love [RESTORED] - Page 2

Originally posted by: briti_asfiya

It was sensuous in an unintentional way maybe? 😆

Ah that's why I couldn't make out what's the one shot about exactly.

Extensive picturisation is not bad in stories but with no scope of imagination the reader loses the connect/interest. So be descriptive, I myself am a descriptive writer, but don't forget to leave space for your readers to imagine. So be descriptive but leave space too, is what I would suggest, saying from my own experience as a writer and a reader.

Cinderella 2015 is underrated, I love, love, love that movie. ❤️ Especially the wood and the ball room sequence.

Let me then correct my sentence then, you've arranged your sentences and paras fancifully.

Don't delete it, it's nice actually.

You mean the world to me, no kidding love, and I hope you know that. 🤗

@bold I guess there wasn't so much of picturisation, you may have felt so because most part was about their dance moves. I get it.

I may delete it, as time passes I am having a bad feeling about this piece of work.

Originally posted by: Sujz

@bold I guess there wasn't so much of picturisation, you may have felt so because most part was about their dance moves. I get it.

I may delete it, as time passes I am having a bad feeling about this piece of work.

There was picturization but of the dance and the leads only, but that was your focus, so I don't blame you.

Instead of deleting revise it, create the ambiance of the ballroom, the dance and the couple, I'm very bad at explaining stuff, idk if you're getting me or not.

Overall it gave me the Victorian Era vibe.

Originally posted by: briti_asfiya

There was picturization but of the dance and the leads only, but that was your focus, so I don't blame you.

Instead of deleting revise it, create the ambiance of the ballroom, the dance and the couple, I'm very bad at explaining stuff, idk if you're getting me or not.

Overall it gave me the Victorian Era vibe.

Revise? 🤣 I am a lazy ass Brit what are you saying?

90% chance that I delete it by tonight considering how my bad feeling about this is increasing.

Originally posted by: Sujz

Revise? 🤣 I am a lazy ass Brit what are you saying?

90% chance that I delete it by tonight considering how my bad feeling about this is increasing.

Suji yaar. Koi nahi let it be it's gorgeous the way it is. ❤️ I said what I felt. But deleting it would be an extreme step, even if you have a bad feeling about it. 🤔

Aisa toh nahi ki yeh itna ghatiya hai ki readers cringed? We loved it. I loved it, seriously. ❤️

Also you used the translation of the song as your title I forgot to talk about it, I found that very cute. Shotti. 😆

On a side note, I want you to update Chahat soon, and can we please get an epilogue? I know there was no prologue still, I would love one.

Originally posted by: briti_asfiya

Suji yaar. Koi nahi let it be it's gorgeous the way it is. ❤️ I said what I felt. But deleting it would be an extreme step, even if you have a bad feeling about it. 🤔

Aisa toh nahi ki yeh itna ghatiya hai ki readers cringed? We loved it. I loved it, seriously. ❤️

Also you used the translation of the song as your title I forgot to talk about it, I found that very cute. Shotti. 😆

On a side note, I want you to update Chahat soon, and can we please get an epilogue? I know there was no prologue still, I would love one.

I do think y'all cringed😊

I may delete it, don't know.

Yea I will try, I want to end that SS soon. It has been hanging on my neck for a hell lot of time now.

Originally posted by: Sujz

I do think y'all cringed😊

I may delete it, don't know.

Yea I will try, I want to end that SS soon. It has been hanging on my neck for a hell lot of time now.

I didn't cringe, stop making assumptions on your own. Tum sachmein meri behen ho an overthinker like me.

Sure.

Also I posted the one shot you wanted me to and dedicated it to you too.

Originally posted by: Soma84

Oh my god! It was so sensuous... So beautiful to read . Rudhita were on fire on their own. And so were you in writing. It was exceptionally romantic. Absolutely loooovvvedddd it❤️

Glad that you liked it.😊

Originally posted by: Sujz

Don't do that. Its a piece of 💩

Sujz, I'm very angry with you..😔Why did you delete it? I read the whole OS today midnight, but thought of commenting once I get completely free as I didn't want to rush things..

It was such a beautiful piece of Art..The way you described the feelings and emotions of two love birds landed me into a different world, I would rather say a magical world..

After reading this OS, I fell in love with the ballroom dance all over again..I loved the way you focused not only on the romance part but also how you described the elegance, grace and fluidity of the movement...

While reading and simultaneously listening to the music, I felt like the music went into my ears, travelled through my body, and came out of my feet, with absolutely no obstruction in between..

I still have a lot to say but I won't go ahead as I'm very angry and disappointed with you right now Sujz..😡

Originally posted by: T-Scarlett

Sujz, I'm very angry with you..😔Why did you delete it? I read the whole OS yesterday today midnight, but thought of commenting once I get completely free as I didn't want to rush things..

It was such a beautiful piece of Art..The way you described the feelings and emotions of two love birds landed me into a different world, I would rather say a magical world..

After reading this OS, I fell in love with the ballroom dance all over again..I loved the way you focused not only on the romance part but also how you described the elegance, grace and fluidity of the movement...

While reading and simultaneously listening to the music, I felt like the music went into my ears, travelled through my body, and came out of my feet, with absolutely no obstruction in between..

I still have a lot to say but I won't go ahead as I'm very angry and disappointed with you right now Sujz..😡

what do I do. It turned out so badly and then no one was even reading it so basically it serves no purpose to be here :)

I would love to hear your review though.

Originally posted by: Sujz

what do I do. It turned out so badly and then no one was even reading it so basically it serves no purpose to be here :)

I would love to hear your review though.

I respect your decision Sujz..I won't force you to do anything against your will..

But believe me, your OS was ❤️. I'm glad I read it before the deletion..

I will forgive you only if you update Chahat..😛