FF: Broken I Ch 20 - Pg 147 - Page 23

Originally posted by: Anika_PreRish

As usual,fabulous!! I am in love with ur writings.

Dont forget to bring that 8th vow wala fact!! It will interesting to watch on how it reveals here.

Make Riddz sassy and savage like no one else but also make her stay careful against Vansh's mind games and tricks.

Make Kabir and Vansh do trips to make sure they dont get a whiff of Riddhima's planning.

I also want Riddhima to belong from a wealthier family,more wealthier than the Raisinghanias'.

I got a hint about it when Riddhima entered VR mansion when she thought about someone saying that dialogue.

Make sure,Riddhima makes the lives of Vansh and Kabir scary as hell.

Continue sooooonish.

Update soon.

Thank you dear for loving this FF. Half of the credit goes to @BhataktiAtma, my partner in this FF.

Thanks for reminding us about the 8th vow. Will try to bring this part incoming updates. Of course, Ridhima has understood the game now. So she will move accordingly. Ridhima family and all - we are developing them. Hope you will like them too :)

Thank you for penning down the thoughts and wish to see more coming from you dear :)

Originally posted by: coolpd93

I am also glad u did not use that much hard hindi in this chapter ..I like the way u shape up the character ..But I still feel ur Riddhima might be a bit impulsive in future.. given her recent heartbreaks, hope she doesn’t give in to her emotions..she deserves freedom. let her say tata bye bye to the house n the guyz forever

This Ridhima is different because she has evolved. Until now it's either side kabir or side vansh. Now she understood the story. When you know the concept you can play easily. So now she will make sure both Kabir and Vansh don't understand her kind of playing because they are unaware of Ridhima knowing the truth.

Ridhima leaving this house - let's see how the story develops. Thank you so much for the comment do request to continue you to pen down your thoughts to give the better content.

i am so loving this riddihima

kya jawab diya hai

haha

vansh confused and kabir will be super shocked

woah i am so happy i am jumping

chondna mat dono ko

that vansh still thinking about ragini

mer bas chale to ragini ko permanent coma main shift kar doon

lovely bond between sia and riddihima

please do continue

bye sumi

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

i am so loving this riddihima

kya jawab diya hai

haha

vansh confused and kabir will be super shocked

woah i am so happy i am jumping

chondna mat dono ko

that vansh still thinking about ragini

mer bas chale to ragini ko permanent coma main shift kar doon

lovely bond between sia and riddihima

please do continue

bye sumi

thank you for liking the update about Vansh sochne do usko jitna sochna hai Ragini ke bare mein jab Riddhima ke bare mein sochna shuru karega tab woh iske bare mein nahin sochegi😆

Originally posted by: coolpd93

I am also glad u did not use that much hard hindi in this chapter ..I am the one responsible for that 😳 but the only reason to do it is that certain dialogues sounds good in hindi but for your sake next time will try to use less hindi or give translation on the side. :) I like the way u shape up the character ..But I still feel ur Riddhima might be a bit impulsive in future.. given her recent heartbreaks, hope she doesn’t give in to her emotions..she deserves freedom. let her say tata bye bye to the house n the guyz forever forever toh nahi but let us see if she leaves them for a while or what later. Thank you for reading 🙂

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

i am so loving this riddihima

kya jawab diya hai

haha

vansh confused and kabir will be super shocked

woah i am so happy i am jumping

chondna mat dono ko

that vansh still thinking about ragini

mer bas chale to ragini ko permanent coma main shift kar doon

lovely bond between sia and riddihima

please do continue

bye sumi

Thank you for the comment dear. Ridhima won't be leaving anyone who has hurt her. So don't worry :)

After the 100 episode i stopped watching the show, now i love reading the stories from this platform. So much better, her struggle and fight. Can't wait how she will torment and pay them back. It reminds me of Maya. 👏

I am truly disappointed with the show, esp. Riddhima.

Her acting is fabulous though.

❤️

Originally posted by: Milalal27

After the 100 episode i stopped watching the show, now i love reading the stories from this platform. So much better, her struggle and fight. Can't wait how she will torment and pay them back. It reminds me of Maya. 👏

I am truly disappointed with the show, esp. Riddhima.

Her acting is fabulous though.

❤️

Regarding the show, I'm no one to comment. We too watching the show as we got emotionally connected with it.

Coming to the story - No she is not Maya. But she is not less either. Ridhima will make sure to perform her duties her as a doctor very nicely and give the medicine which she tasted until now.

Would request you to please continue to comment on the growth of the story. Thank you dear :)

Originally posted by: eishe10

Fantastic update!

thank you :)

I liked this chapter. Riddhima's replies were sharp...n yet not too sharp that Vansh understands that she has found out the truth. 👏

Please continue...😊