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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aniruddh was in his room when he heard the knock at the door. "Aa jaaiye please." He replied while getting up from the chair. He looked at the door and he was shocked would be such an understatement. "Tum? Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho. Chali jao yahan se." He said and turned his back towards the person. "Meri baat sunn lo Aniruddh, itna toh haq hai na tumhari iss bachpan ki dost ka?" Mini said, tears welled up in her eyes. She had seen hate for her in his eyes, where she wanted to see love, all her life. It was her fault, she knew. "Dost? Sahi mein Saudamini? Dost? Dost sach mein tumhare jaise hote hain kya?" Aniruddh asked, a sarcastic smile spread all over his face. Mini was speechless. He wasn't wrong. "Har insaan ko ek dusra mauka milna chahiye na?" Mini said, her head hung in shame. "Dusra mauka? Mere parivaar ko phir se takleef dene ka? Maana main bewakoof hoon lekin ab itna bhi nahi." He said, the sarcasm not leaving his tone. "Mujhe maaf kar do Aniruddh." She said folding her hands, few tears made their way down her cheeks. "Maaf toh maine tumhein kab ka kar diya. Tum jaa sakti ho." He said and again turned his back towards her. She ran from there, crying profusely. Losing someone dear exactly felt like this. Sabko woh aakhri mauka kahan milta hai?





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Me and my Drabbles can never make sense.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautiful drabble Octo..

I really liked it, it was simple yet beautiful.

And that last line sab ko voh aakhri mauka kaha milta hai just hit me hard 😭❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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A well written Drabble Octothorpe. 🤗

An attempt to make a grey character like Saudamini into a repentant friend, by showing her contrition for all her cruel deeds, in a way it is an attempt to buy peace for ourselves. Well done.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Long story short- This is what I want on screen.

I feel sorry that Ani is going to lose his friend. 💔

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Its beautiful ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Dil ko sukoon mila..❤️🤗

Love this strong Ani even after loosing his only childhood friend..❤️


Sad ki epi mein aisa kuch nehi milega coz mini is now beyond redemption..🤢

But I liked your grey mini..😊👏

Ending is apt.. zindegi har kisiko dursa mauka nehi deti hain..🤓

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It's wonderful Octo❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: wayback2

Beautiful drabble Octo..

I really liked it, it was simple yet beautiful.

And that last line sab ko voh aakhri mauka kaha milta hai just hit me hard 😭❤️



Aww, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viswasruti

A well written Drabble Octothorpe. 🤗

An attempt to make a grey character like Saudamini into a repentant friend, by showing her contrition for all her cruel deeds, in a way it is an attempt to buy peace for ourselves. Well done.



Thank you Madhuri🤗


How I wish Saudamini wasn't an out and out vamp but someone grey. That would have been interesting. Yeah, I know we are not going to get anything like this so got myself some peace in my own work😆



Thanks again❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: AK_2010

Long story short- This is what I want on screen.

I feel sorry that Ani is going to lose his friend. 💔


Same! I wanna see something like this too❤️

It feels bad that Aniruddh got no friend to hold his back at times. 🥺

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