Vani SS - Piya Saanware - Part Two - Karwachauth Special- Updated Pg 4 - Page 4

Really really nice dear

After reading this I actually want all these moments to happen in serial. These is bliss.

Too good

Main aisa isiliye kar raha hoon sweet heart, kyonki main tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon.” Veer held her face in his hands and bared his soul

Omg it's Amazing

Originally posted by: _NINA_

Really really nice dear

After reading this I actually want all these moments to happen in serial. These is bliss.

Even I am looking forward to such moments on the show. Thank you so much ❤️🤗

Please let me know if you want to read something specific.

Too good

Main aisa isiliye kar raha hoon sweet heart, kyonki main tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon.” Veer held her face in his hands and bared his soul

Omg it's Amazing

I can literally imagine Veer saying this to Bani. Oh god I am going to cry 😭

Hi bro.

I just just loved the update

This was so cute yar. I can't believe ki yeh Veer hai.

But yes I know vo aisa ho sakta hai.

I loved the sargi part.

Then I laughed at 'mujhe surprised hona padega🤣' this was nice.

I loved there cute yet mature conversation.

And at the end when she said Veer.

Happy birthday.

Kuch kuch hua is pure scene pe.

Haye birthday par kya hoga? And karwachouth par?

I am waiting waiting.

Thank you jaldi update karne ke liye.

Next bhi jaldi karna please 😘

So I have started reading from the first.. So review bhi ek Saath dungi..

"Just being near him makes her feel safe and serene"

This line.. I felt like this this!!! 😍 😍 This is everything..

The os was so beautiful. So amazing their convo. I was reading those in their styles and imagining the whole sequence.. It was so beautiful. I want this kind of relationship between them.

"He pressed a soft kiss on her forehead. Time came to a standstill . Bani's heart halted. Her breathe caught in her throat. As the soft skin of his mouth left her face, the exact spot where they had come into contact tingled. A shiver ran down her spine and then back up. A small smile crept onto his face and her cheeks painted themselves a red of rose. He pulled away silently, but their eyes locked, having a private conversation of their own."

Yahan meri Saansein ruk gayi. Uff!! 😍 🙈🙈 Honestly abhi tak dhakdhak ho raha hai..

OK 2nd part..

I can't stop blushing ☺️🙈🙈

"Baaki husbands ke baare mein main kuch nahi jaantaa lekin mujhe yeh tumhaare liye karna hai Mrs. Veeranshu Singhania. Tum bhi meri iklauti patni ho, tumhaare liye vrat nahi karunga toh aur kiske liye karunga." Veer winked.

I knew it!! In fact show mein bhi karwa chauth track aaya toh Veer yeh vrat rakhega i know..

"We are in this together Bani. Agar tum meri lambi umar ke liye pray kar rahi ho toh main bhi tumhaari lambi umar ke liye pray karunga."

"Mere pyaar mein aisa hi hota hai jaan, sab equal equal. Agar tum vrat rakhogi toh main bhi rakhunga." Veer said in finality.

"Chalo! Kaunse kuye mein kudna hai?" Veer wiggled his eyebrows. Both of them laughed. "Paagal"

These!!! 😍😍 I can feel the real Veer here.. Uske baad ka scene 🙈🙈

And beach sequence.. In this os you have shown the matured side of Veer's love 😍 😍

I loved ur os truly.. Aisa laga real mein ho raha hai. Dil se I feel it.. Keep writing

Its one of the best excerpts I have ever read!!!❤️❤️❤️ I literally read it twice. Once as Veer-Bani in naagin universe and another as veer-bani in a mills n boons novel!❤️

I loved the characterisation of bani here!!! You have etched her out so well dear! Brilliant!🤗This bani is all heart! Very sorted and vulnerable! She comes across as a wonderful women! Scarred but still hopeful, giving a very fair chance to this marriage and trying to feel veer's love and reciprocating in her own sweet way!😳

I always find your writings very noise free! As in, your veer-bani are not tained by the surroundings! No satyug, kalyug talks, no revenge sagas, no negativity! They talk about themselves, feel each others company! Its outright romantic dear!😳

Take a bow for the descripitions and the analogies you used! Its amazing how you compared bani's inner turmoil to the overlapping waves in the ocean and the clear blue sky as a hopeful source for her to heal herself! I found it ingeneous!❤️

And what to say about Veer!❤️ Words would fall short! Man of every girl's dream, the millennial prince charming cladded in black with a heart of gold! One woman man! That's how I imagined this veer!

Please keep writing dear! You bring so much depth to veer-bani in my head while I watch them onscreen! I am able to invest more efficiently!

More peaceful scenes like these please!😳 Veer-Bani on a beach! Uff, itni shaanti bechaaron ke actual mei naseeb kaha hogi kabhi!💔

Unki aankon ki gustaakiyan is pure bliss to read from your words!😳

Keep bringing such masterpieces sweetheart!😆❤️ Its such a delight to read! Eagerly waiting for the next part!🤗

Really nice. Really very nice update.🤗

Aur iss tarah se Chocolate ice-cream ko mat describe karo. Bahut din ho gaye khaye huye😭😆

Very very good dear. Loved it. It's so good. Beach talk s so nice. Update soon

Poorva... beautifully written..i was imagining every moment of Vani

I could feel the love veer has for bani..a mature guy who loves and respects his wife despite of knowing about her bitter past...and bani too started realising the veer's love and taking care not to hurt him this time...

Loved it yaar... waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Hi bro.

Hi bro 🤗😎

I just just loved the update

Thank you so much

This was so cute yar. I can't believe ki yeh Veer hai.

But yes I know vo aisa ho sakta hai.

Mujhe bhi lagta hai ke Veer mein potential hai... Woh aisa ho sakta hai

I loved the sargi part.

Ji shukriya.

Then I laughed at 'mujhe surprised hona padega🤣' this was nice.

🤣

I loved there cute yet mature conversation.

And at the end when she said Veer.

Happy birthday.

Kuch kuch hua is pure scene pe.

That was my favorite part to write ❤️

Haye birthday par kya hoga? And karwachouth par?

Jaane ke liye padhte rahiye yeh kahani 😎

I am waiting waiting.

Thank you jaldi update karne ke liye.

Next bhi jaldi karna please 😘

As soon as possible.

Originally posted by: Dwipanita

Dwipanita 🤗❤️

So I have started reading from the first.. So review bhi ek Saath dungi..

Okay okay

"Just being near him makes her feel safe and serene"

This line.. I felt like this this!!! 😍 😍 This is everything..

The os was so beautiful. So amazing their convo. I was reading those in their styles and imagining the whole sequence.. It was so beautiful. I want this kind of relationship between them.

Even I want the writers to give such a relationship to Vani and I feel unka relationship aisa hota agar Bani maaro mujhe maaro nahi kar rahi hoti aur markat, shakura, shukla, jay boss aur mayuri ke kaand nahi ho rahe hote. 🤪😆

"He pressed a soft kiss on her forehead. Time came to a standstill . Bani's heart halted. Her breathe caught in her throat. As the soft skin of his mouth left her face, the exact spot where they had come into contact tingled. A shiver ran down her spine and then back up. A small smile crept onto his face and her cheeks painted themselves a red of rose. He pulled away silently, but their eyes locked, having a private conversation of their own."

Yahan meri Saansein ruk gayi. Uff!! 😍 🙈🙈 Honestly abhi tak dhakdhak ho raha hai..

Mujhe bhi. You know that is the thing I love the most about Veer. Apna pyaar jataane se kabhi peeche nahi hatt taa lekin kabhi line bhi cross nahi karta

OK 2nd part..

I can't stop blushing ☺️🙈🙈

"Baaki husbands ke baare mein main kuch nahi jaantaa lekin mujhe yeh tumhaare liye karna hai Mrs. Veeranshu Singhania. Tum bhi meri iklauti patni ho, tumhaare liye vrat nahi karunga toh aur kiske liye karunga." Veer winked.

I knew it!! In fact show mein bhi karwa chauth track aaya toh Veer yeh vrat rakhega i know..

I am so eagerly waiting for Veer to keep fast for Bani in the show. Please bholenaath.

"We are in this together Bani. Agar tum meri lambi umar ke liye pray kar rahi ho toh main bhi tumhaari lambi umar ke liye pray karunga."

"Mere pyaar mein aisa hi hota hai jaan, sab equal equal. Agar tum vrat rakhogi toh main bhi rakhunga." Veer said in finality.

"Chalo! Kaunse kuye mein kudna hai?" Veer wiggled his eyebrows. Both of them laughed. "Paagal"

These!!! 😍😍 I can feel the real Veer here.. Uske baad ka scene 🙈🙈

Likhte likhte toh aisi aisi feelings aa gayi naa mujhe... Meri mummy pooch rahi thhi... Beta sab theek hai naa😆

And beach sequence.. In this os you have shown the matured side of Veer's love 😍 😍

That is my most favorite part of this story right now. I know there is this side of Veer which he will show when Bani gives him a chance to

I loved ur os truly.. Aisa laga real mein ho raha hai. Dil se I feel it..

That makes me feel so special and so happy. Thank you so so so much.

Keep writing

Yup!