Pranbir SS : Raabta

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Posted: 3 years ago

                                 Teaser

Rohatak:

Staring at a sky, looking at a the moon with a bruised face there she was questioning her fate " har raat ke baad subah hoti hai na, phir meri zindagi mein na to subah ki roshni, na to chand ki chandani kyu nai hai, kaki." With her eyes welling up and lump forming in her throat" kya .. mein itni buri hoon"

Kaki's heart used to break every time she used to see prachi suffer at hands of ammaji and her husband. 

Hugging her and while carseeing her hair she replied" Na mari laadoo, tu  to badi aachi se, magar thare mard aur uski amma ka na dil na se, pathar se "

Prachi:" kya meri zindagi mein sirf inki or ammaji ki nafrat hai," with her voice breaking " mein..mein bahut thak gai hu, agar mera kabir bhi asa nikala to"

Kaki: " Na mari choori aisa na bol, kabir mein thari parvarish se, thara khoon se vo, mari ladoo mata rani na kisi fareeshta ko beje gi thari zindagi mein, jo thari aur thari choore ki sari pareshaani door kar dava ga"


Delhi

Like every night , this night too ranbir slept with eager to complete his dream. But poor guy's dream was interupted with a voice

Aryan: ranbir ranbir uth na bro,.niche mehfil lagi hai

Ranbir : kya yaar aryan, 

Aryan: aaj phir uska chaehra nai dekha

Ranbir : vo palatne hi vali thi.ki tu aa gaya

Aryan: abe yaar, teri dream girl ke.rishta liye na baat karne ki mehfil hai neeche

Hearing this his eyes lit up, he hugged aryan happily

Ranbir: kya chief aye hai , mere aur rhea ki shaadi ki baat karne k liye

Aryan: yes bro upps jiju

Ranbir : no yaar tere liye to mein bhai hu, par pata nai kyu aryan vo.ladki apni to lagti hai magar rhea nai, vo pyaari to lagti hai mGar rhea se ikdum alag, use dekh nai pata, magar uske aankon mein ik.alag udaasi si lagati hai

Aryan: bro, are you sure, you love Rhea 

Hearing this Ranbir started pondering....



Two people , two different world, what destiny has in store for them? Will prachi's ordeals end? Will Ranbir find his dream girl or will he get married to Rhea?


P.S: hi guys tried something intense, something new, for first time. Hope you all like it. Character sketch will be updated shortly

I am not a good  writer so feel free to give honest review


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Posted: 3 years ago

omg... superb teaser... interesting concept...

prachi is married n has a son?...but her husband n MIL are bad people... poor girl...

n Ranbir is getting married to Rhea but she is not his dreamgirl...ohh...

waiting for character sketch n first part.... update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

                           Character sketch


Prachi raghuveer chautala:  Child of tragedy, 23 years old. Married to narcissicist raguveer chautala , has child 5 years old child with him. Something happened with her when she was 15 years.


Ranbir kohli: heir of kohli groups. He is cute, charming 23 year old college student. Star of college football team. Getting engaged to Rhea. 


Rhea mehra: A rich pampered child of her parents. Hiding big secret  from everyone. 23 years old.  Want to be a fashion designer. Getting engaged to Ranbir 


Kabir Raghuveer chautala : 5 years old. Loves his mother alot. Hates his father. Want to do something for his mother.


Raghuveer chautala: a ruthless man. Husband of prachi. 36 years old. Always doubts his wife for infidelty and beats her.


Kamla chautala : matriach of chautala family. She is ruthless and despices prachi. 


Pragya mehra: Rhea' mother  due to incidence that occured years ago is unable to forgive herself. She is principal of excel college.


Abhi mehra: Rhea's dad. Pretends that he forgot that incidence but still looking for clues.  Owner of mehra industries


Vikram kohli: Ranbir's father 


Pallavi kohli: Ranbir's mother


Aryan khanna : Ranbir's best friend and Rhea's cousin. 20 years old. Considers ranbir his brother. Consider pragya as mom. Wants to be a writer.


Aliya khanna: Separted from her husband. Mother of aryan. Was responsible for secret which changed everyone's life. 


Shahana kapoor:  cute, bubbly heiress of kapoor industry.  She is friendly and will turn out to be prachi's supporter.


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Posted: 3 years ago

Great...waiting for first part...n Pranbir meet...update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

omg... superb teaser... interesting concept...

prachi is married n has a son?...but her husband n MIL are bad people... poor girl...

n Ranbir is getting married to Rhea but she is not his dreamgirl...ohh...

waiting for character sketch n first part.... update soon

Thank you😀

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Posted: 3 years ago

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