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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hello! ⭐️

We have an OS contest running on the forum.

But I always believe in having events that include everyone.

So for those of us who cannot or do not want to venture into full fledged OS Writing,

Here's something that you can participate in! 😃

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I know this is eventually asking you to Write (Duh 🤔)

But hear me out first...


You don't have to write complete stories by yourself.

We will

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together .


I'll put up Prompts to begin the tale.

It can be carried forward by anyone and in any manner they wish.

All of us have to contribute by adding few sentences to the story and bringing in thrilling twists.

And keeping the theme in mind, let's try to make it spooky, scary, spine-tingling, mind-numbing, horrific... you get the gist 😆.


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RULES :

  1. Incorporate IPKKND characters. Scenes can also be included if they fit. Rest is upto you! ⭐️
  2. Write a minimum of 1 complete sentence and a maximum of 4 to 5.
  3. Wait for at least one other person to add something in between before you continue further - we want the story to reflect our collective imaginations! 😃
  4. Instead of Quoting, please COPY the above comment and then add your part to it. This way, just having a look at the last comment in the thread will allow us to see where the story has progressed and thus make it easier to add further plots in the story without repeating something said earlier.
  5. While commenting real time, it may happen that two or more people write something at the same time. If there are more than one continuations from the same point onwards, the next person can choose to continue from any one of their posts.

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That's it!

You can start off right away! 🥳

First Prompt has been added below. Please Scroll Down to read it.

You can continue from there on! 😃


Once the story reaches a stale point or end, I'll put up another prompt and we can begin a new tale! ⭐️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Prompt 1 : Scroll Down

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Prompt 1 :


Chapter 1

She was in her own house but it seemed very different. Or was it because of the pitch darkness? Why was it so dark anyway? They always kept the lights near the staircase on. Maybe it was a power-cut, although it was quite unheard of to have power-cuts in their area!

She stumbled around wondering where she could find some light source. The kitchen might have some candles. Just as the thought of candles crossed her mind, she saw one being lighted. Aah! Finally some light. But who was this lady holding the candle?

She called out to her twice before finally catching the lady's attention. She tried to talk to her and ask who she was but there was no response. Just as she decided to give up and find her own way around, the lady turned....

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She freaked out and started screaming, " Aaaaaa Chudailllll, Devi Maiya Bachaoo".

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He was taken back seeing her reaction.

She suddenly turns around and hugs him tightly.

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"Khushi?! Tum theek ho? What happened? Why are you yelling?" Arnav holds her shoulders, trying to shake an explanation out of her.

"Arnav ji! That- that chudail is here! Devi Maiyya, it's a ghost!" She is at the brink of tears now, shifting closer to him for protection.

He then makes an amused face and turns her around. "There's no one here, Khushi. See?"

No one here? She thinks. But I swear I saw someone...

OK! I will get some water! By saying this, Arnav turned around with torch in his hand and walked towards the kitchen.

Khushi turned around to go to the bedroom, failing to notice the light falling on Arnav's back and came face to face with a person in a white saree holding a candle right in front of her. Khushi screamed and fainted.

Arnav rushes to hold her before she falls.

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He carries her in his arms shouting for HP to bring the torch along to help them get to their bedroom.

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After laying her on the bed he covers her with a quilt only to hear her murmuring , "Arnavji mat jaiye".

He lies down next to her. He brings her face closer to him and whispers sweet nothings to comfort her.

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He place a soft kiss on her forehead giving her comfort and Khushi snuggle closed to him feeling safe in his arms.. Arnav smiled seeing her guesture.. in her unconscious state also she knows he is here with her.. then he got confused with her sudden fainting.. what's she saw that she got scare this much.. that's when something cought his eyes..

He saw one shadow near the window. Without any second thought he runs behind that shadow to find out his/her real identity.

Arnav moves out to the poolside.

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He sees a lady swinging a chain with a ring like a pendulum

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Arnav yells at the woman, "What the !! who the hell are you? How did you get in? What are you doing here? Security".

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"Security??! Hahahaha!" She let out a loud laughter.

"Do you really think your security is equipped enough to handle this?"

"What do you mean?? And can you stop swinging this in my face." Arnav yelled for the security again but to no avail.

"Do you really expect me to believe you are a ghost or chudail or whatever. I do not believe in such stupid things. Now quit the drama and tell me the truth before I call cops on you." Arnav takes quick steps to grab his phone from the night stand but when he turns back towards the pool side, no one is there anymore.

He shouted where are you ? But didn't get any response. He is thinking now surely someone is trying to do some prank with him or deliberately someone is doing all this drama to take revenge.

He decided to look into this later - his first concern was Khushi right now. But as he turned back to go in the room, he stopped short.

Khushi was no longer present on the bed!

He said 'what the.. where the hell she goes ?

He is finding Khushi everywhere. But no clue at all. He frustrated and can't think also what to do. Suddenly he has an idea in his mind.

"ohh, I forgot to check the kitchen, I am sure she must be making a mountain of jalebis." When he gets to the kitchen, to his surprise Khushi isn't there either. But her dupatta is there lying on the floor. Arnav is really concerned now. " what the! where is this girl at this time of the night? "

Suddenly the corner of the Dupatta started fluttering. There were no windows in the kitchen so Arnav wondered where the wind was blowing from.

He bent to pick up the Dupatta but it slid away on the floor!

The dupatta moves away. Arnav sighs and bends forward to pick it up but it moves away again sensing his movement. He doubts something and turn around ignoring the Dupatta and starts calling out for Khushi, who is not in vicinity. From the corner of his eyes he could notice a slight move from the dupatta and without a second thought, he jumps on the dupatta landing on his shoulders only to find a thin yarn which is almost impossible to naked eye to look with minimal light. He grabs the thread and follows for its origin.

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Chapter 2

Continued from Pg-6. Please check last comment in thread and write from that point onwards.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I freak out with scary content. Is something different allowed?

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Arshi Analyzers

Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: renee.bee

I freak out with scary content. Is something different allowed?

Oops! 🙈

Since the theme is Halloween + Diwali, we will be having mixed stories with both elements... especially with more of the spooky stuff.

But I'll try to keep the next prompt leaning towards Diwali theme 😳.

Maybe we can keep alternating between both themes so everyone can find something to their taste. ⭐️


Love ❤️


P.S. I was going to message you after winding up things here but glad to see you around before that only smiley4.

Edited by ssttuuttii - 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

Oops! 🙈

Since the theme is Halloween + Diwali, we will be having mixed stories with both elements... especially with more of the spooky stuff.

But I'll try to keep the next prompt leaning towards Diwali theme 😳.

Maybe we can keep alternating between both themes so everyone can find something to their taste. ⭐️


Love ❤️


P.S. I was going to message you after winding up things here but glad to see you around before that only smiley4.



This is a brilliant idea. 👌👌



The thread on remarriage was fun. I had posted gifs with some lines. This would be fun.


Diwali special would be fun ❤

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This is awesome. I'll be happy to join.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deleted

This is awesome. I'll be happy to join.

You can start off right away! The Prompt is given... you have to continue from there. ⭐️


Love ❤️

P.S. I saw you've started a new story. Been busy since few days but will surely have a look as soon as I get time. 😳

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Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

You can start off right away! The Prompt is given... you have to continue from there. ⭐️


Love ❤️

P.S. I saw you've started a new story. Been busy since few days but will surely have a look as soon as I get time. 😳


So sweet. Thank you. Hope you find it interesting. I already have some ideas churning in my head for an OS. What's the deadline for the contest?

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Prompt 1 :

She was in her own house but it seemed very different. Or was it because of the pitch darkness? Why was it so dark anyway? They always kept the lights near the staircase on. Maybe it was a power-cut, although it was quite unheard of to have power-cuts in their area!

She stumbled around wondering where she could find some light source. The kitchen might have some candles. Just as the thought of candles crossed her mind, she saw one being lighted. Aah! Finally some light. But who was this lady holding the candle?

She called out to her twice before finally catching the lady's attention. She tried to talk to her and ask who she was but there was no response. Just as she decided to give up and find her own way around, the lady turned....

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Prompt 1 continuation


She freaked out and started screaming, " Aaaaaa Chudailllll, Devi Maiya Bachaoo".













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He was taken back seeing her reaction.


She suddenly turns around and hugs him tightly.


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Edited by renee.bee - 5 years ago

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