Rudhita OS : Beginnings - Page 2

Originally posted by: screen22

Very well written because the story flowed throughout and you could gasp 😦 the written Hindi (which is very difficult to read and understand) but the logic of the story was good.

The whole contrast was well written and each word was telling you the outcome.

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Thank you and sorry for the part in hindi. Will try to add translation next time but I feel the essence is lost when I translate.

Hi sorry for the typos...I have edited it now

Originally posted by: chemgirl

Hi thanks...would love to read ur version too <3

Here is the link

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/154393463

I would be glad if you like to share your reviews on this. Criticism welcome 😊

One word to describe this- TERRIFIC!

I loved all the emotions. Guilt, Anger and Determination. It was so well expressed!!

Thanks for this amazing piece!

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