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Posted: 4 years ago

Satyen Parashar knows and understands the concept of Development, ECONOMIC and PERSONAL . He is a wise man who has a sense not just of others but also himself.


Today we see him as a very successful man who has amassed huge fortune, but not many , other than a few loyalists like karamkar Dad would recognize the obstacles he has had to overcome to advance this kind of development .


I have no doubt in my mind that it's satyen parashar's conviction and courage that have been his strong pillars of support to believe and advance those causes.


A similar conviction and courage is the only weapon viveka possesses today in her struggle for equality and social development .


IT takes a Diamond to cut a Rough Diamond😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

@creative

Chinta not, aata hai abhi hamara hero to claim what is his... very very soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Jas

Hope all is well. SO good to see you on and off.

Barrister:

IKR, HUM log bahut karte hain aise... blowing off steam within the four walls. Feels good actually🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

@Creative

I wanted to add, even I feel grossed out when I think of the idea of Viveka hooking up with one guy on Monday and making out with Raanav Friday. I know its the norm and its "a matter of personal choice" in the 21st century, in urban cultures



I find it to be very unhygienic. I am not supposed to be horrified, I have friends that date they tell me "Its like eating food from different countries" NOTTT!


But I am unable to be "cool" about it

So I will keep the story old fashioned

Cuz afterall, tis just a story

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Posted: 4 years ago

I am a girl in my 20s and yet to explore relationships but Nisha believe me we prefer the old fashioned take of story any day.

Would love to see how you take it to that place where Raanav is able to impress Veev as well. What he does or how he does it. Prefer it so much over the next day of meeting hookups anyday.

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

@Creative

I wanted to add, even I feel grossed out when I think of the idea of Viveka hooking up with one guy on Monday and making out with Raanav Friday. I know its the norm and its "a matter of personal choice" in the 21st century, in urban cultures



I find it to be very unhygienic. I am not supposed to be horrified, I have friends that date they tell me "Its like eating food from different countries" NOTTT!


But I am unable to be "cool" about it

So I will keep the story old fashioned

Cuz afterall, tis just a story

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

@creative

Chinta not, aata hai abhi hamara hero to claim what is his... very very soon

🥳

Eagerly waiting to see how raanav reacts when he finds its abhishek vee is dating....

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Posted: 4 years ago

With Naina, while I don't agree with her choice of situations and surroundings to get intimate and advance her relationship with Inder, I will definitely give the benefit of doubt to Naina in the sense that I will not question the feelings of love Inder and a Naina have towards each other. Attachment in relationships we embrace makes us go mushy.


See we can all look at Naina going bonkers, throwing tantrums and lift our eye brows saying Really Naina! We as readers or her parents or even her sister Viveka can take a dig at her because we are not the affected by inder's presence as much Naina is. ( few of us are affected by Raanav's presence though😳) She is desperate for her parents approval and is pushing them to consider Inder's alliance as she is already greatly attached to him.


Viveka is not in love with Abhishek yet. So to that extent she can practice being detached when her marriage topic comes up. That's why the benefit of doubt to Naina. Naina's probably right to say Viveka needs to fall in love and it has to be love enough to want a life with that person

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Posted: 4 years ago

It's not a huge span of difference in the time the two girls got attracted to their respective partners they are currently dating.

If we think about it, the diff is say..what 3 weeks? Naina met Inder, took off to Jaipur , was caught in a compromising position by her dad in the third week,....cut to four... five weeks post that episode , she is more than ready to get married to the same guy.


Viveka met Abhishek not too long after Inder met Naina. The diff is say a probably a month . One could be dating a person for 5/6 yrs and might not be ready for marriage . So you have Viveka dissing her parents saying you can't be really serious , I've only known the guy for hardly two months , you've got to be kidding me to take that to marriage as against a Naina who is saying , cmon dad ! I've known him enough, get us married!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Development

Satyen is just enchanted with Viveka. He might sign up to support her projects. Smrita will have a fit over it if she finds out.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Pastry & Kinship

“Arey beta wallet kisi ne pick kar li”

“I cant believe you do this” Viveka sighed

“Arey it happens”

“Phone nahi tha?”

“Desk par chhod gaya” he laughed

“THEN?”

“You will not believe who paid?”

“WHO?”

“Satyen Parashar”

“He is nice” Viveka smiled

“UNKA beta”

“How do u know him?” Viveka asked

“I don’t know him, who wahi tha, Le Meridien ke pastry shopmein, maine bill banwaya aur paise gaayab”

“Sh—”

“I can get that” bola "It was more than Rs.2,000"

“U shud have left it and walked away”

“Ek to black forest… don’t even joke about it… doosri baat2 km chalkar apne office se gaya hoon… pastry CHHODNE thodi”

She laughed

“Diya will love you for it”

“Maine bola number de do PayTM mein bhej doonga”

“Phir?”

“He said No”

“Arey wah… dayalu” Veev laughed out loud

“I hope he does not go home and tell his mother”

“On the contrary, he MUST” she laughed hysterically

“Who lady Bua ko keh dengi kia age se hamey kisi social mein nahi bulaya jaaye”

“Like Bua will ever listen to her”

“Kitne baje aa rahe ho beta?”

“Papa… Abhishek came home this morning at 4, main mili nahi”

“To who to soyega na?”

“Papaaa” she cooed

“Achha khaane se pehle? Soch raha hoon Italian banaoon, whoMa duty free se Rao’s pasta sauce laayin”

“YUMMMM I could bring Abhishek”

“Lao beta, Dadi ke aane se pehle karlo mauj, uske baad tobas” he began to laugh

“When are they coming?” she asked worried

He began to laugh hysterically

“did u have to hide from her like this?”

“Arey hamari kahan chali? Shaadi jo ho gayi 28 saal mein”

“Yikes”

“Aur tum hui 29 mein”

“Papa I have another class, I am opting to fill in… so Ican feel like a BOSS”

“Congrats beta… tu Dilli ruk ja aur yahi kar le Ph D beta”

“Ughh… don’t blackmail me emotionally”

“Oh I will” he smiled

“Don’t eat all the pastries”

“I wont”

“Kab niklogi ghar? Main Metro mein lekar nikla pastries topaste ban jaayega”

“Oh BTW I have to go to Janpath to pick up a suit material at 5, aap ruk jao”

“Tu phir Abhishek se milne kab ja rahi hai, “

“Umm… 7”

“To khaane ke time nahi rahogi tum?”

“Dad pleez?”

Mehul Karmakar had a meeting at 7 with Satyen, so he wasgoing to sleep all day and head to work at 5 PM so Abhishek was free to haveher over

Worked out beautifully

“Achha fine” he growled

“I promise I will tell you all about a talk I had with ProfAnsari on food inflation and core inflation, I cant wait to show you an example”

“Arey wah” he nodded

“I am giddy” she laughed

She went to pick him up around 5:30

She waited in the marble lobby reading the list ofoccupants in the building

Darting a glance towards the elevator each time it opened

6th time, Akash stepped out holding the largepink pastry box gingerly, his laptop bag cross body across his chest

“I am sure my daughter has cash” he pointed

And they all came F2F, he was in formal dark trousers and a watered down pink shirt and shiny black shoes, his laptop hanging from one shoulder, finishing up personal banking work at Bank of America

She was in yet another saree… yellow Kaanjeevaram cotton with a lime green border with a lime green blouse with dark pink flowers allover with tiny white beads on them

She was wearing her nose ring and had ditched earrings

Her eyeglass frame in green

He couldn’t take his eyes off her

Unexpected bonus

“Hello” she nodded

“Achhe se thank u bol beta, yeh inki badaulat” Akashreminded

She joined hands and smiled “Thank u” and looked at Papaand asked “Bas?”

“change hoga iske paas”

“how much?” she began sifting through her voluminousleather bag as she pushed her glasses up her nose

She pulled out her mirrorwork beaded purse and opened

“It doesn’t matter”

“Arey kaise nahi matter karta” Akash was adamant

He held Raanav’s hand and stopped him from leaving

She paused and quit looking through her purse

“Did u report your lost credit cards Papa?” she askedlooking at her phone

“Pehle inko do betaaa” Akash was exasperated

“No you shouldn’t” Raanav shook his head inaudiblysignaling her

“It’s a lot of money” she leaned over and pulled the tapedreceipt closer so she could look

“How much Papa?” she crinkled her eyes

Raanav plucked it off the box

“Its fine” he said crumpling it and shoving it in his pocket

“Chalo bhai inke ghar check bhej dete hain” Akash let go of his hand and laughed

“No, don’t do that” he insisted

“We wouldn’t want to take so much money beta” Akash wasdistressed

“That’s fine” he mumbled “Enjoy”

“Inka hissa main fridge mein rakh doonga, yeh to ja rahihain boyfriend se milne”

“Ah” Raanav tried to be unaffected

“But she has promised to show me a cool example of how tocalculate… kya tha?”

“Umm.. real inflation and food price inflation”

“Using kyat ha beta?” “Who?”

“Cecchetti Moessner and Clark idea” she said coolly

“Make sure you ask him (Abhishek) if he is related to me?” he reminded her blandly

“Ah… umm… Ohh?” “Umm… yeah” she nodded

Akash looked confused

Raanav and Viveka knew

He left them alone walking away, as he got on the phone

Edited by Nisha0604 - 4 years ago

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