Chal vha jate hai :Os on after math of brothel track

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi my dear BBwasi.

Today I am just feeling very good since my covid duty went well.. So thought whats better way of expressing my happiness then writting a One shot.

This one is the aftermath of brothel track, hope you all like it.

Kindly ignore my mistakes.. 😛

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Bondita and Anirudh were sitting outside the haveli, Kaka when he got to know that bondita stayed in brothel for a day refused to acknowledge her as his bahu.

Bondita with tears asked Anirudh, Pati babu yeh heera mandi kya hota hai, koi buri chiz hoti hai? Jha rhne se aurat buri ho jati hai?

(pati babu what is brothel, is it a sin to live there.. Why a women become bad if she stay there?)

Anirudh not knowing how to explain a 11 year of what brothel is answered, Nhi bondita aisi koi jgh nhi jha jane se insaan acha ya bura hota hai, insaan jo bhi hota hai vo apne karam se hota hai.. Na ki uss jgh se jha vo rha ho..

(No, bondita a person is not defined by the place he live in, he is only defined by his deeds)

Vhi toh Pati babu, vha sb itne ache the Rasiya didi, jhilmil didi, sb kitna dhyaan rkhte the mera bs vo moti si malkin ko chod kr.. Sb itne ache the.. Fir mai unke saath rhkr ashudh aur iss ghar ki bahu hone ka haq kaise kho skti hu asked Bondita...

(true that pati babu, people there were so good, rasiya didi, jhilmil didi everyone was so loving except that owner, then how by living among such good soul i became impure and lost the right to be RC bahu?)


Bilkul shi kha tumne bondita.. Unn logo ke saath rhe kr tum ashudh nhi hui ho.. Aur na hi iss ghar ki bahu hone ka haq koi bhi tumse chin skta hai.. Said Anirudh remembering how he was forced to marry Mini, but how he was saved when he got to know her truth at last moment.

(you are absolutely correct, You haven't become impure living there and no one can snatch the right of being rC bahu from you)


Pr pati babu ab kya kre.. Mai haveli jaa nhi skti kyunki kaka sasur ji manenge nhi, aur mujhe apne ghar nhi jana ab pati babu.. Vha sb mujhe chodi hui aurat bulate hai.. Khete hai bura saaya hu mai.. Khete hai mujhe kuye mai kud kr mr jana chahie.. Said Bondita almost disheartened.. She didn't want to go back.


(now what should we do Pati babu, i cant go to Haveli since kaka sasur will never agree, And i don't want to go back to the village, there everyone call me a bas names, say i am a bad omen and i should die)

Anirudh was shocked and broken knowing what all she went through because of him.. He was ashamed, ashamed on him self.. He thought he was different that he could bring change, but he too did follow the path of other ousting your wife whenever problem struck in.. But now he has realised and he will do his everything, everything to become deserving for her.

Nhi bondita, tumhari pehchan mujhse nhi.. Tum khud apni pehchan banaogi.. Mere hone ya na hone se.. Tum kabhi buri nhi ban skti.. Tum to sbse ache ho Bondita. Tum sachi ho, dil ki itni achi ho.. Fir tum bura saaya kaise ho skti ho kisi ke bhi lie..

Aur kuye mai kudne ka toh sochna bhi mat tum.. Anirudh voice was a bit loud when he said the last line.. He can never imagine her leaving him forever.

(No bondita i can never be your identity, you will make your identity. Me being there or not will never make you bad, you are such a great soul then how can you become a bad omen.

And never ever think about dying..)


Aisa mai kabhi nhi soch skti pati babu, kyunki ykeen tha mujhe aap bachane aayenge mujhe.. Aap mere rakshak babu jo hai.. Said bondita proudly with no ounce of doubt in it.


(i never thought about that, because i had comppete faith on you that you will vome and save me.. After all you are my protector)


Itna bhrosa mujh pr?Tumhare saath itna bura mere vjh se hua fir bhi..? Asked Anirudh.. He had a smile on his face.. No one has ever put so much faith in him, not his dad, Not saudamini, no one..

(so much trust on me, even when everything bad that happened to you was because of me?)


Pura bharosa hai aap pr pati babu said Bondita with a smile.

(I trust you)


Toh chalo fir mere saath said Anirudh putting his hand in front of Bondita.

(then come with me)


Pr kha pati babu said bondita confused, where they can go, they cant go in tulsipur, they cant go go to there village..

(but where?)


Yha se dhur, jha tumhe tumhare haq dila sku mai, jha koi bandish na ho, inn prathao ke kaal kothri se dur, jha mai tumhare lie naya sansar bna sku..

Toh bolo Bondita dogi mera saath.. Asked Anirudh his eyes pointing toward his outstretched hand..

((far from this place where i can get your rights, where there will be no one stopping you, where these practices dont stop you from flying.. Where i can build a new world for you..

So will you support me?)


Mai nhi saath dungi toh aur kon dega.. Jrur saath dungi mai aapka said Bondita proudly holding his hand..


(if not me then who will?

And they went far away to there journey to bring dfference..

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If you came this far.. I already love you 😆.. Thank you for giving my story a chance..

In bold its english conversion of hindi dialogue in case if i have a non hindi understanding reader.

I will request my reader to drop a comment.. Criticism is welcomed. Its just that reading those comments make my day.

Thank you ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Mujhe nehi pata tha that you are a doctor Rashi. It's really beautiful I would love to see such a heart to heart conversation in the show between them. You have scripted it really well 👏

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Rashi 🤗

Amazing 👌 hope we have such conversation after the seperation track in show too this is so beautiful and I just imagined them sitting in their corridor 😳 you have penned it beautifully ❤️

Thank you for this lovely os 😃

P.s you are doctor?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Firstly a very big round of applause for you as respect for doing covid duty👍🏼👏

And secondly a very Beautifully written os....❤️

A heart touching conversation between Rudhita hope to see something in show also....

Do write more dear...

And take care😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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WOW

1. Thank you for the English translation.


the story was so touching of how the two have come back home but questions were asked where have there come from and Kaka will not accept Bondita.

Bondita was asking the right questions but Anirudh did not have the answers, a decision was made that both of them need to go far far away and live a peaceful life.👍🏼


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you so much for the translation . I really loved it.❤️

Bonditha 's questions 👍🏼

She asked all correctly.

Even in the show I want Ani to move on to Cacutta with her.

Thank you for penning down this wonderful story .

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arpita_De

Mujhe nehi pata tha that you are a doctor Rashi. It's really beautiful I would love to see such a heart to heart conversation in the show between them. You have scripted it really well 👏

Hey Arpita 🤗.

No i am not a doc yet.. I am still a mbbs student 😳.

I am glad you liked it.

I really hope they show something like that in which Bon will tell Ani what all she faced.

Thank you for reading and commenting 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Rashi 🤗

Amazing 👌 hope we have such conversation after the seperation track in show too this is so beautiful and I just imagined them sitting in their corridor 😳 you have penned it beautifully ❤️

Thank you for this lovely os 😃

P.s you are doctor?

Lalz🤗

I am happy that you got the feel that i wanted to convey.. ❤️

I really hope too they have some heart to heart talk like its really needed..

Thank you for reading and commenting.. Means a lot❤️

Ps. I am a doc to be.. 😆

.. Right now just a mbbs student

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shona1991

Firstly a very big round of applause for you as respect for doing covid duty👍🏼👏

And secondly a very Beautifully written os....❤️

A heart touching conversation between Rudhita hope to see something in show also....

Do write more dear...

And take care😊

Hi shona.. Thanks for acknowledging our work in the time when people are not thinking about us 😊

And i am happy you liked my work.

I really hope they show us something, but as per the show is going i do have strong faith in cvs.. They surely gonna give us power pack rudhita reunion😃

Take care, you too❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: screen22

WOW

1. Thank you for the English translation.


the story was so touching of how the two have come back home but questions were asked where have there come from and Kaka will not accept Bondita.

Bondita was asking the right questions but Anirudh did not have the answers, a decision was made that both of them need to go far far away and live a peaceful life.👍🏼


Hey thank you for commenting.. I am happy you appreciated my work.

Yup i guess for sometime i do want to see them outside rc mansion 😆

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