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Posted: 5 years ago
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Oops double post

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Shirin😳

I liked it so much dear🤗❤️

On one hand was really scared for bon going missing and on the other hand was enjoying his restlessness...he deserves it....sadistic me😈

Sumati hasn't much changed as always

I enjoyed brijwasi part too a lot😈he answered barrister babu and tainted him well too🤣😈

Ani meeting bon in brothel will be an emotional one😭

I'm waiting for the next update😒

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Shirin😳

I liked it so much dear🤗❤️

On one hand was really scared for bon going missing and on the other hand was enjoying his restlessness...he deserves it....sadistic me😈

Sumati hasn't much changed as always

I enjoyed brijwasi part too a lot😈he answered barrister babu and tainted him well too🤣😈

Ani meeting bon in brothel will be an emotional one😭

I'm waiting for the next update😒

thanks I will. Update soon maybe tom ❤️
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Okay guys part 3 hope you like it 

He was outside the building. It was beautifully decorated with crystal chandeliers and marbel cravings on the pillars.

Aniruddh sighed as he entered , this was his last chance at finding bondita. He did not know where he would go if he did not find her here but the thought that she spend a night here made him nauseous. How could she ,a kid stay here? This was not an appropriate place for her. He entered the place which was more beautiful inside. It opened into a courtyard surrounded with beautiful flower plants. He could hear kids playing in the courtyard.

Woman in the brothel- itna subha ko hmlog dhanda nh krte (we don't do business in the morning)

Anirudh noticed she was pretty and young and definately overdressed .

Aniruddh- mein kisi ko dhundne aya hu. (He took a breath) . Meri patni bondita. (I have come here to find someone... My wife bondita)

While earlier he used to flare at the mere thought of thinking of her like a wife he did not feel bad anymore. Their marriage memories weren't a pain anymore. He was glad she was his wife and he promised himself that he would never ever calling him his zimmedaari .

Woman- oh toh tm ho woh nikamba pati jo uss ful si bachhi ko chor diya (oh so it's you the worthless husband who left that innocent girl)

He was a zamindar who was never spoken to like this but he did not care. Did he just hear this women knew where bondita was?

Anirudh(excited) - kaha hai bondita apko pata hai kya? Kaha hai boliye na? (Where is bondita?)

Woman just pointed towards the courtyard.

Aniruddh ran towards the courtyard to meet her. Was she fine? He felt breathless until he met her. It was only a day since he saw her. But the prospect of losing her forever had made him very afraid. He was on the verge of tears when he saw the tiny figure with her head covered. He knew it was her. He could recognise her voice from very far.

Anirudh-bondita....he said it so faint that he doubted she heard it

Bondita (still with her back) -pati babu app yaha q aye hai?

He could feel her tears tolling down her cheeks and for once he wanted to hug her and stop all her tears.

Anirudh- ghar chale bondita?

He said almost choking himself with tears.

Bondita- yahi mera ghar hai pat-biristira babu. Apko pta hai ek din mein bohot saare dost hogye hain mere aur yaha se mujhe koi jane bhi nh bolega.. (This is my house... Uk I have made many friends here now in one day and nobody here will tell me to leave)

Aniruddh(he felt weak and his stomach formed a knot) - ghum ke baat bhi nh krogi bondita?

He told her to leave even though he had promised he would be with her every step of the way. He who had said that kids minds are Impressionable have made a lasting bad impression on bondita. She was seeking solace in a place whose workings were too complicated for her to understand. And for a second he felt for the first time shame that she got love from people who she did not even know even though it was him who had went round the fire seven times with her. Even though it was him who had taken the vow to make her happy. What did he do now? He had just pushed her away and now due to him she had lost her innocence forever

He was so lost in thought that bondita had left

He was shaken into reality

Anirudh(shouting) -bondita, bondita kaha gyi

Rasi - oh agaye app.... (So you have come)

Anirudh-app kon hai?

Rasi-mein hi bondita ko yaha layi thi. Gaon ke bahar bina khaye piye ek khetke pass baithe the woh.. ( i am the person who have bought her here. I saw her outside a village hungry and thirstly sitting beside a field)

Did he just hear she was hungry...

Was she that broken

Did he lose her

Anirudh-mein bondita ko lene aaya ho...

Rasi(with a sly smile) - toh mene kaha roka apko? Apki patni ki agar izzazat hogi toh le jana app?

(When did I stop you. If your wife consents take her from here)

Anirudh- bondita mane ya na mane mein usee yaha nh rehne de sakhta(with or without her consent I cannot let her stay here)

His cheat tightened as he spoke. He saw the girl standing in front of him. Extremely young to be that confident. She had elegance to her and her voice did not shake while talking

Rasi- marzi toh apko leni paregi aniruddh babu

(Turning back) kya hai na apke gaon ke ujale se zyaada is kothe ke andhkaar mein Aurto ki marzi chalti hai...


Aniruddh(restlessly) - bondita bohot choti hai us ke liye yaha rehna sahi nh hai (she is a kid this is not the right environment for her)


rasi (with a wide grin)- q nh hai sah?yaha toh kitne saare bachhe rehte hain? in mein see koi apka bhai bhi toh ho sakhta hai an anirudh babu (with a mischievous tone) . (why is it not right? there are many kids here and some one could even be your brother here)


anirudh was taken aback nobody dared talk to him like that. generally, he would be appreciative of such a confident woman but here he felt like she was crossing a line.


rasi (continued speaking) - are binoy roy Chowdhury see to purana rishta hai hamara . kabghi poocha nahi apne kaha jate the woh do-do tin-tin rato ke liye.... (we have old relationship with

brc did u never ask where he went for some of the nights)


anirudh(shouting) - dekhiye mujhe nh pta mere baba ke bare mein bass mujhe yaha se bondita ko le jana parega bas ...


rasi- tm sab mard ek jaise ho na ... aurto ka har faisla tm log hi kroge . aurte kisse shadi kregi kaha rahegi sab tm log kroge .maan kiya toh bahar nikal doge maan kiya toh zor zabar dasti usse apne ghar leke jaoge .tm krantikari ho na toh kaho na samaj mein aurto ki izzat hm jaise kothe wali aurto se bhi q kam hai? ( all you men are same,you decide what happens with women.if you feel like you want to kick them out you do so if you feel you want them back you do so . you are a revolutionist right then answer me why do the women in society have even lesser respect than women like us who sell our body?)

Anirudh was ashamed . he felt his cheeks getting red with shame and guilt.maybe he was not the good person he thought he was .maybe his culture and tradition did have an impact on how he perceived women. he wanted bondita to fly but he also wanted her to follow his own path .he wanted bondita to dream but not her own dreams in fact he was projecting his dreams on her . he explained to everyone why bondita needed to be educated but he never deemed it necessary to sit her down and tell her why she needed to be educated .why did her opinion not matter?why because she was his wife did he expect her to obey him like all the other men in tulsipur?


anirudh fell down on his knees .he could not hold himself anymore . he naturally broke down .


anirudh - haan bohot bura hu mein .bohot badi galti kiya hai mene toh kya mujhe ek moka nh milega kya ( will I never get another chance for my mistake?)


rasi sat down beside him and held his hand .he did not expect this sudden touch and yet it did not feel inappropriate.it felt like she was somebody who understood him somebody who was the elder sister he never had .even though she was younger than him she felt more mature .

rasi - mein banj hu isslye jab 14 saal ki this to mere pati ne mujhe nikal diya tab see yhi pali badi hu saari aurto ke sath isslye jab mene bondita ko dekha tab mujhe laga uske sath bhi aisa kuch hua hai . ( I was infertile so when I was 14 my husband kicked me out and since then I am living here so when I saw bondita i thought something similar happened to her as well)


anirudh saw a tear falling down her cheeks and he wanted to kill that man . were woman only for procreating? weren't they humans ?he felt angry.


rasi - tm ache ho jao apni bondita ko mana lo

saying this she quickly moved across and disappeared in the shinning corridors of her home

anirudh roamed around and finally found bondita sitting on a staircase

he sat beside her and coughed . she was looking down and did not want to look at him .

anirudh ( sarcastically) - duniya ki sabse achi patni mila hai mujhe meri har bt manti hai ek bar boldiya toh sach mein chehra nh dikha rhi hai toh abb agar mein kahu apna shakal dikhane toh dikhaegi kya ? (i have the best wife in the world she listens to all my orders .so if I order her to show her face will she)

bondita - haan shayad

anirudh now facing her - bondita maaf krdo aisa nh krunga ab kabhi abb agar kabhi gussa ho jau na toh mujhe tm nikal dena ghar see dhik hai?wapas chalte hai na bondita tmhri maa aur baki sab pareshan hai .


bondita - app dantenge firse?


anirudh - nh nh koi nh dantega tm ko aur rosogulle abse mein khud banunga tm hre liye apne hato see khila bhi dunga pakka chalo na wapas

acha dekho kan pakar liya ab aur kya karu bolo


bondita- app mere sath pakran pakrai khelnge roz?

anirudh - haan haan sab khelunga tm ghar toh chalo ..

bondita -acha chaliye ..mein rasi didi see milkar ati hu.


they left with anirudh holding her hand with a bond a lot stronger than before



the end ;)



Edited by shirin04 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#35

It was so cute.. And so appropriate..

I really loved it.. How you made Ani realise his mistake..

If i can i would have surely sent this to cvs..

The writer seriously need ti to give Ani a reality check. Great work. 👏

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rashi_garg

It was so cute.. And so appropriate..

I really loved it.. How you made Ani realise his mistake..

If i can i would have surely sent this to cvs..

The writer seriously need ti to give Ani a reality check. Great work. 👏

hahah lol try finding them and give it to them🤣

Maybe I will get payed

Thanks though❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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in mein see koi apka bhai bhi toh ho sakhta hai an anirudh babu (with a mischievous tone) . 🤣

This is so hilarious 🤣🤣🤣

Btw love rashididi here....

And anirudh actually need Realty chk...

Kash yeh part koi CVS Tak pahochade....

Btw very Beautifully written story....

Will love to read more from you...

Do write more.....

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shona1991

in mein see koi apka bhai bhi toh ho sakhta hai an anirudh babu (with a mischievous tone) . 🤣

This is so hilarious 🤣🤣🤣

Btw love rashididi here....

And anirudh actually need Realty chk...

Kash yeh part koi CVS Tak pahochade....

Btw very Beautifully written story....

Will love to read more from you...

Do write more.....

thank you 

Have thought of a few ideas will write soon hopefully❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I love this. ❤️So nice.So touching . ☺️I like the way Rasi gave him back .👍🏼


Thank you again Shirin for the translations.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: caller123

I love this. ❤️So nice.So touching . ☺️I like the way Rasi gave him back .👍🏼


Thank you again Shirin for the translations.

you are welcome. ❤️

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