SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 2: CC# 2 [FINAL UPDATE ON PG. 130] - Page 102

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


That’s a great idea! 👍🏼 We have to keep the suspense going so Rajeev’s thoughts should be hidden!


Practice is really needed for the dialogues for me because i cant really think of catchy, emotional dialogues just out of blue. Nithya is awesome at it tho. Definitely should check out her dialogues in season one!

Okay shrishti🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Krishna Anmol had already won the Pooja's parents case. The case which was closed since 10yrs , he is the one who reopened it and also won it. Yeahh, Rajeev knows everything regarding it as they're good friends for more than 4 yrs.. Now, Rajeev is handling the Ammol's murder case which is unsolved since three years. Pooja knows Rajeev as Anmol used to cherish their friendship before Pooja and Rajeev Pooja became friends since then.. So, after Ammol's death, they became good friends too which Abir actually doesn't like...


Yes, Krishna Rajeev's self talk and motives should be kept hidden until 14ty episode... We can reveal his self talks and negative motives in 15th episode as a shocking twist..Till then, Rajeev is goody goody human and most trustful friend of Pooja.


So, in first/second episode, Rajeev and Pooja should shown discussing the case but it shouldn't be reveal that it's regarding Anmol's case. Anmol is dead will only be revealed on 3rd episode and it's a murder will be revealed to readers only on 4th episode where Pooja blurts out her emotions with Rajeev.


I have already suggested and posted the precap in pg. 131. If you want, you can write your scenes in advance, so that I can give you some catchy Hindi dialogues to add... If there is any doubt, do comment here or pm me as per your comfort..

Okay shaheen I will try to write in advance and send you👍🏼I need your guidance too😳

Is Rajeev ever mentioned in the previous season at all....I can start fresh without reading from season 2 na? I'm asking this only due to my exam....may be for 1st 2 episodes only after that I can read....super busy with studies....

Some doubts too shaheen is Rajeev somehow the murderer?I'm just asking because whenever I write this I want that character completed knitted within me emotionally for my best😆...i always have this habit🙈I want that feeling within me....

Do you already have any backstory for rajeev's dark past with anmol? Or anything like that....because after thinking I got some idea that can be or may be the reasons behind rajeev's dark behaviour.....keeping in mind the title of the story... quest of love😉


If you have already thought anything like that about Rajeev , please tell me okay.....😃

First 2 episodes will have only those scenes told by you in the precap....right?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Yes ma.

If you're free gives us some good ideas for symbolic scenes to add some symbolisms in story.

Okay di let me think some....

I will try di I'm right now busy with my bank exam...exam is on 3rd Oct will be free only after that....but still i will try my best👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Okay di let me think some....

I will try di I'm right now busy with my bank exam...exam is on 3rd Oct will be free only after that....but still i will try my best👍🏼

Nope you first focus on exams. Give your exams well and Come out with flying colors... Good luck in advance.
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Okay shaheen I will try to write in advance and send you👍🏼I need your guidance too😳

Is Rajeev ever mentioned in the previous season at all....I can start fresh without reading from season 2 na? I'm asking this only due to my exam....may be for 1st 2 episodes only after that I can read....super busy with studies....

Some doubts too shaheen is Rajeev somehow the murderer?I'm just asking because whenever I write this I want that character completed knitted within me emotionally for my best😆...i always have this habit🙈I want that feeling within me....

Do you already have any backstory for rajeev's dark past with anmol? Or anything like that....because after thinking I got some idea that can be or may be the reasons behind rajeev's dark behaviour.....keeping in mind the title of the story... quest of love😉


If you have already thought anything like that about Rajeev , please tell me okay.....😃

First 2 episodes will have only those scenes told by you in the precap....right?

Rajeev wasn't there in first season Krishna. It's all new role and beginning. No need to go back and read season 1.


Yupp Rajeev is literally a super black character which will be shown as too good in initial 15 episodes... But after 15th episode he will show his true colors who will kill Bua in 9th episode and wil try to kill Pooja too after 12th episode to 17 episode with different techniques as he fear she could learn his truth. At the end of 21st episode, he will be exposed by both Abir and Pooja. Bua too will wake up again.


Yup Rajeev's quest was to become the first young judge of India. He keeps losing chances of cases as Anmol used to win each and every case. And the most anticipated Pooja's parents case was reopened and won by Anmol. So, to clear the hurdle of his dreams, he killed his loyal friend. Rajeev's quest is fame, money and governing prosperity..


Yeah precap will consist only of those scenes.

Edited by Home786 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Nope you first focus on exams. Give your exams well and Come out with flying colors... Good luck in advance.

Oops🙈🙈thank you shaheen🤗❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Rajeev wasn't there in first season Krishna. It's all new role and beginning. No need to go back and read season 1.


Yupp Rajeev is literally a super black character which will be shown as too good in initial 15 episodes... But after 15th episode he will show his true colors who will kill Bua in 9th episode and wil try to kill Pooja too after 12th episode to 17 episode with different techniques as he fear she could learn his truth. At the end of 21st episode, he will be exposed by both Abir and Pooja. Bua too will wake up again.


Yup Rajeev's quest was to become the first young judge of India. He keeps losing chances of cases as Anmol used to win each and every case. And the most anticipated Pooja's parents case was reopened and won by Anmol. So, to clear the hurdle of his dreams, he killed his loyal friend. Rajeev's quest is fame, money and governing prosperity..


Yeah precap will consist only of those scenes.

Got it😎

I had something similar to this I'm my mind 😆....but then a question came in mind that Rajeev should have a some other strong reason too to turn into an extremely dark character....so i had one more idea...anmol is adopted right.....what if in the childhood when he was at orphanage Rajeev too was one child there....anmol from that time itself was very talented and extremely lovable kid while Rajeev was very rude and a special personality from his childhood itself....he always dreamt of being adopted by some rich family and living a luxurious life...

That was the time when anmol's parents along with bua enter for an adoption Rajeev wanted them to adopt him and even was to get adopted but bua was the one who interrupted them and directed their attention towards anmol ...this created a huge hate in Rajeev towards bua and he never forgot her face....but he never knew who they were ....

Since then Rajeev struggled and even found many wrong methods for fulfilling his dreams to come to power and money .. he was over ambitious, talented too but over time he excelled the art of deception too hiding the beast within him from others....

Finally when he achieved his goal of becoming a lawyer , and was slowly settling ready to finally leave behind his beast side but then came anmol into the picture who was better than him in every aspects.Since he wanred to start his life fresh and he enjoyed company with anmol who filled the void of a friend in his life he initially was such a loyal friend to him....but jealousy covered him after sometime due to anmol's professional excellency....slowly when he started feeling anmol is turning a threat to him, he started to snatch many of his opportunities without anmol's knowledge....but anmol with his honesty and genuineness always overcame those situations..hate and anger started filling his mind towards anmol..amidst this came the big revelation that anmol was his friend in orphanage who was adopted by bua. ..this enraged him more and then came the final trigger for rajeev when anmol won one of the important cases,pooja's case that reduced rajeev's all chances to become the judge before anmol .....all this led him to finally plan anmol's murder....

And he killed bua too...this was something in my mind because I thought even the darkest characters have their own stories that turned them this way....afterall all humans have their stories....

Sorry shaheen🤢don't know what I blabbered now in the name of a back story....🙈mad me and my mad ideas🤪

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Got it😎

I had something similar to this I'm my mind 😆....but then a question came in mind that Rajeev should have a some other strong reason too to turn into an extremely dark character....so i had one more idea...anmol is adopted right.....what if in the childhood when he was at orphanage Rajeev too was one child there....anmol from that time itself was very talented and extremely lovable kid while Rajeev was very rude and a special personality from his childhood itself....he always dreamt of being adopted by some rich family and living a luxurious life...

That was the time when anmol's parents along with bua enter for an adoption Rajeev wanted them to adopt him and even was to get adopted but bua was the one who interrupted them and directed their attention towards anmol ...this created a huge hate in Rajeev towards bua and he never forgot her face....but he never knew who they were ....

Since then Rajeev struggled and even found many wrong methods for fulfilling his dreams to come to power and money .. he was over ambitious, talented too but over time he excelled the art of deception too hiding the beast within him from others....

Finally when he achieved his goal of becoming a lawyer , and was slowly settling ready to finally leave behind his beast side but then came anmol into the picture who was better than him in every aspects.Since he wanred to start his life fresh and he enjoyed company with anmol who filled the void of a friend in his life he initially was such a loyal friend to him....but jealousy covered him after sometime due to anmol's professional excellency....slowly when he started feeling anmol is turning a threat to him, he started to snatch many of his opportunities without anmol's knowledge....but anmol with his honesty and genuineness always overcame those situations..hate and anger started filling his mind towards anmol..amidst this came the big revelation that anmol was his friend in orphanage who was adopted by bua. ..this enraged him more and then came the final trigger for rajeev when anmol won one of the important cases,pooja's case that reduced rajeev's all chances to become the judge before anmol .....all this led him to finally plan anmol's murder....

And he killed bua too...this was something in my mind because I thought even the darkest characters have their own stories that turned them this way....afterall all humans have their stories....

Sorry shaheen🤢don't know what I blabbered now in the name of a back story....🙈mad me and my mad ideas🤪

Krishna you have great tactical knowledge and strategy to frame good stories..

But don't you think it will go in a typical ITV way where every villian has some past connection with leads family..?? I thought of doing it in an unique way... Like let Rajeev be just professionally related to Anmol not personally... Professionally he wanted to be one of the best lawyer and become best contender for magistrate post but Anmol stands as a obstacles to Rajeev in accomplishing his dreams so he murdered him. And in order to make Singhanias puzzled, he befriended with Pooja in order to save him so that none can doubt him as he is pretending to help them in getting justice to Anmol... But in the 10th episode, on the eve of Aditi's birthday party, Bua overhears murderer's words but she came running to expose him, someone will push her from the balcony where she survives but slipped into coma... She will wake up on 21st episode.. Then Pooja began to dig the truth, so in anxiousness, Rajeev will try to kill her too but Abir will turn her saviour as asual. She will finally find out on 17th episode. But on 18th episode you will kidnap Pooja to sentence her to death by torturing her where Abir and Rajeev will come face to face for protecting their own quest.... As usual on 21st episode, Rajeev will get expose openly. But he will escape from jail and enter Singhanias mansion to create a big dhamaka on 23rd episode...

How's this? You people decide and lemme know.

Edited by Home786 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Krishna you have great tactical knowledge and strategy to frame good stories..

But don't you think it will go in a typical ITV way where every villian has some past connection with leads family..?? I thought of doing it in an unique way... Like let Rajeev be just professionally related to Anmol not personally... Professionally he wanted to be one of the best lawyer and become best contender for magistrate post but Anmol stands as a obstacles to Rajeev in accomplishing his dreams so he murdered him. And in order to make Singhanias puzzled, he befriended with Pooja in order to save him so that none can doubt him as he is pretending to help them in getting justice to Anmol... But in the 10th episode, on the eve of Aditi's birthday party, Bua overhears murderer's words but she came running to expose him, someone will push her from the balcony where she survives but slipped into coma... She will wake up on 21st episode.. Then Pooja began to dig the truth, so in anxiousness, Rajeev will try to kill her too but Abir will turn her saviour as asual. She will finally find out on 17th episode. But on 18th episode you will kidnap Pooja to sentence her to death by torturing her where Abir and Rajeev will come face to face for protecting their own quest.... As usual on 21st episode, Rajeev will get expose openly. But he will escape from jail and enter Singhanias mansion to create a big dhamaka on 23rd episode...

How's this? You people decide and lemme know.


It’s really good shaheen! 👏 😭


Hey, can we practice a bit here right now? The scenes between Pooja and Abir?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Krishna you have great tactical knowledge and strategy to frame good stories..

But don't you think it will go in a typical ITV way where every villian has some past connection with leads family..?? I thought of doing it in an unique way... Like let Rajeev be just professionally related to Anmol not personally... Professionally he wanted to be one of the best lawyer and become best contender for magistrate post but Anmol stands as a obstacles to Rajeev in accomplishing his dreams so he murdered him. And in order to make Singhanias puzzled, he befriended with Pooja in order to save him so that none can doubt him as he is pretending to help them in getting justice to Anmol... But in the 10th episode, on the eve of Aditi's birthday party, Bua overhears murderer's words but she came running to expose him, someone will push her from the balcony where she survives but slipped into coma... She will wake up on 21st episode.. Then Pooja began to dig the truth, so in anxiousness, Rajeev will try to kill her too but Abir will turn her saviour as asual. She will finally find out on 17th episode. But on 18th episode you will kidnap Pooja to sentence her to death by torturing her where Abir and Rajeev will come face to face for protecting their own quest.... As usual on 21st episode, Rajeev will get expose openly. But he will escape from jail and enter Singhanias mansion to create a big dhamaka on 23rd episode...

How's this? You people decide and lemme know.

Superb shaheen

Let's move like this only👍🏼....

@bold: really😕😆thanks dear🤗

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