Maaneet ss- pehle pyaar ka pehla gum! Part 22- pg 20 / march 23. - Page 7

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poor geet dint know what she feels for maan but know he is very special for him n his silent treatment after she call him by nikname which he dint like most

picnic day was a little step towards realization of her feeling for maan

Part-10

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Remembering that night...she couldn't help comparing..."tonight" with "that night"...
In a way, both the nights are same!

...She couldn't sleep "that night"... And she don't think that she will be able to sleep "tonight" also!

Even the reason for these sleepless nights is same...its.."HIM"

he is the only reason! Both the nights...her mind & heart couldn't think anything...other than him... Its only he & his thoughts that had captured her whole being!

But...Yes!... There is a big difference also.

..."That night", was filled with... her first realisation, some sweet memorise, some unanswered questions, feeling of being Special, new emotions & excitement...excitement coz of these new feelings...excitement to meet him again the next day!

Where as... "Tonight"...she knew exactly what were those new feelings! Now She has found answers for those questions...she knew what "those feelings are called"!

But with all this...there is a pain & longing "Tonight"...which is making her heart restless...with the thought that this time she couldn't console her heart saying... "its just few hours...next morning she will meet him again!"

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She knew that she wont be able to see him next morning... leave that...she cant see him for days.. 10 DAYS!
And With this thought...more tears came in her already teary hazels.
At that moment...her restless heart wish for its relief...and that was...to see him once... Just once!

But sadly its not possible...and she knew that!

And suddenly a thought came to her mind...or may be her heart was the one asking that to her...
"will he be missing her also??
"did he also wish to meet her...like she wishes every moment??"

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Again, she don't have any answer! She smiled sadly. Strange naa! She didn't know anything about his feelings...
Whether, she held that special place in his heart like he did??
Whether, he also think about her in same way as hers??

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A soft voice called out to her that may be...may be.. he also think about her in the same way!
It was her heart... reminding her of those moment...when she had sometimes felt..that she was also special to him!

And then, she was again lost... thinking about that time when her new found feeling were increasing day by day..after "that night"... And some moments when she had felt that may be..he also had Some...or Same feelings for her!

Part 10

tremendous update......

she compares that night to this night

she realised her feeling that night and knows her feelings now

well what does Maan feel for her?

can understand her dillema?

will she get her answers?

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geet feeling same restlessness in heart like in past what she feels on picnic day but today she can name that feeling as love for maan but guessing or thinking what maan feels for her

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Geet confusing with her behaviour towards Maan she always missing him and he is one whom occupied her thoughts she slowly slowly realizing her feelings that it's more than friendship

She is thinking of night when she realized her feelings but this night she thinking is he too feel same fr hr

Part-11

Strangely, even after spending a long sleepless night, she didn't felt any tiredness next morning... Instead, she was filled with a new energy & excitement. As if, all the tiredness was gone...just with the thought of seeing him again. And that caused a sweet smile to appear on her lips.

She hurriedly got ready for school. She didn't wanted to be late...and miss even a second of being with him. Wishing a "bye" to her mum...she rushed out of the house!

She was never this much excited for school...all that she could think was... only about him. And with each step she took...the excitement was increasing. Every thing felt different...&...beautiful!

Her surrounding felt different...suddenly this morning felt more good... na..not just good...it felt better and soothing. All the while her lips were carrying that smile...didnt even know why?... but she felt that everything was smiling back to her!

She was walking lost in her own thoughts...she came out of their locality & was going towards the main road...as she turned at the next corner which connects to the main road...

.. Suddenly her step become slow on their own accord...she felt as if she couldnt move ahead... Till now she was so excited... But now..there was a nervousness in her heart along with that excitement.
Her heart was beating so fast...she couldnt explain! She was confused...wat to do? How to react? She was not able to think anything that time.

All the time from last night...she was restless... She had wished only one thing... waited for this moment so egarly... But she didnt thought that she will be nervous like this... ..With just seeing him from far!

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Yes!...
He was coming from the other side!

She didnt knew that her Babaji will grant her wish so soon and that too like this.
She was not prepare for this "Surprise"...she felt nervous suddenly...for the first time she felt nervous to face him!

He smiled at her...as soon as he noticed her. She did return that smile...trying to hide her nervousness...while her heart was running at jet speed..with all this strange nervousness mixed with excitement.
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As he took fast steps to cover the distance between them... She felt that the nervousness was taking over the excitement!
She didnt had any idea..that why was she getting nervous at the first place??

He was not any stranger... Nor she was meeting him for the first time!!

He is "maan" ...her best friend!
.. Than why?? Why this strange nervousness suddenly??

She kept looking at him..with these questions in her heart...untill he reached her!

Maan-Good morning!! ...he wished her!

Geet-Good morning!

...she replied with her racing heart... She wanted to say "Best morning" instead... Coz she really felt that!

They were walking towards their destination(school)...
.. It was not the first time that they were walking together like this... But again it felt different...it felt like it was the very first time...actually it felt good!

They were talking about studies & upcoming exams...and for the first time she was not so interested in that topic...
... Instead, she was busy in a more interesting task...of stealing glances at him every now & then.

And whenever he would turned look at her...she would pretend to look at the road ahead.

It was a totally new feeling...she did felt that it was all silly & stupid things...she was doing...
But it felt so good...she was liking that feeling...that nervousness mixed excitement!!!

Part 11

Incredible update... beautifully written

of cos Geet is eager to meet Maan.

her thoughts well portrayed

can understand her reaction when she meets Maan.

she is nervous and excited.

she cannot help but stare at him

Nice update.

Waiting for next update..

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exited geet left house early to meet maan n very happy

but it surprise her as she become nervous seeing maan in front of her