SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 2: CC# 2 [FINAL UPDATE ON PG. 130] - Page 65

Originally posted by: Home786

Yeah we should think of different ideology to make it a better one.

I am in work compiling all the reviews and feedbacks. Will give very soon.

Nithya Akka and many readers have suggested to bring season 2 of this story with same yet different tracks... Did she shared with you regarding that??

Season 2 would be a great idea Shaheen. But I have doubts. Will the participants be ready to play it still? I don’t think Prit will be playing if we have season 2, idk about Mishtu. I am of course always ready. I am gonna read hundreds of wattpad books this time to get Abir’s charactee right.

This time though, PLEASE focus on Pooja and Anmol, I was going through the episodes again this time and I swear, I realize there was barely any good scenes between Pooja and Anmol to create a bond.

I am thinking about this time system so that when we are doing the episodes, it won’t be all clumped up and messy. It isn’t perfect yet so will tell you when I am done planning it out.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Season 2 would be a great idea Shaheen. But I have doubts. Will the participants be ready to play it still? I don’t think Prit will be playing if we have season 2, idk about Mishtu. I am of course always ready. I am gonna read hundreds of wattpad books this time to get Abir’s charactee right.

This time though, PLEASE focus on Pooja and Anmol, I was going through the episodes again this time and I swear, I realize there was barely any good scenes between Pooja and Anmol to create a bond.

I am thinking about this time system so that when we are doing the episodes, it won’t be all clumped up and messy. It isn’t perfect yet so will tell you when I am done planning it out.

Yeahh there was no good scenes between Anmol and Pooja except the two scenes which I played out. Though, I included in the precap it didn't come out good and as I expected. That's why readers preferred Abir over Anmol for Pooja. Still they're requesting me to pair up Abir with Pooja in season 2.

Do you remember the scene I played out lastly between Abir and Pooja as driving journey back to home from Airport. That scene got lots of likes from readers. The ending scene, last monologue of Abir is the most liked scene till date.

Okayy will wait for your suggestions. People started texting me to bring season 2 ASAP immediately after one hour, I posted the ending. But they still stay intact with their wish with lot's of suggestions.

Originally posted by: Home786

Yeah we should think of different ideology to make it a better one.

I am in work compiling all the reviews and feedbacks. Will give very soon.

Nithya Akka and many readers have suggested to bring season 2 of this story with same yet different tracks... Did she shared with you regarding that??

Originally posted by: Home786

Yeah Shristi I doubt Prit and Mishti will be joining us.

Yeahh there was no good scenes between Anmol and Pooja except the two scenes which I played out. Though, I included in the precap it didn't come out good and as I expected. That's why readers preferred Abir over Anmol for Pooja. Still they're requesting me to pair up Abir with Pooja in season 2.

Do you remember the scene I played out lastly between Abir and Pooja as driving journey back to home from Airport. That scene got lots of likes from readers. The ending scene, last monologue of Abir is the most liked scene till date.

Okayy will wait for your suggestions. People started texting me to bring season 2 ASAP immediately after one hour, I posted the ending. But they still stay intact with their wish with lot's of suggestions.

The season two demand was expected honestly. This show deserves a really good ending and I personally feel like it needed a very twisted, dark ending. Idk just the way the story was written, I expected a bit of a dark ending.

And yeah I have read your replies for my post.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

The season two demand was expected honestly. This show deserves a really good ending and I personally feel like it needed a very twisted, dark ending. Idk just the way the story was written, I expected a bit of a dark ending.

And yeah I have read your replies for my post.

Originally posted by: Home786

Agree with you Shristi I wish to have a dark ending.. Let's think and come up with something good to highlight season 2.

Okay shaheen, let’s first take like 2 weeks planning everything out for the serial writing.

One thing I want say is that let’s not make the season 2 this quick. I feel like then the suspense will go away. We have to you know build up the suspense for the story, give hints that the show might start again, yk put some characters from “Quest Of Love” to other serials we will start. By that time, more people will be interested maybe and we can get them to play the characters if the original people are not ready.

1. Please, let’s actually plan out the story. The beginning, middle, and end. We have the whole story and the actors playing are slowly going to be introduced to the story. You know how we decided that we will ask people to share their stories and use that for the serial writing, well, the author can plan everything out and the actors will just play it adding their own elements to the character but not any new things in the story unless the author approves.

2. We have to have weekly discussions about the stories where the participants, the authors, and the readers (if they want too), come together to talk about the story, give reviews, ask for suggestions, tells the good points and not so good points, ask for help regarding the character. Trust me, this will greatly improve the story and characters and dialogues.

3. One scene allowed. This means that when a scene is going on in the story, no one is allowed to start another one that is completely irrelevant to that scene. That happened in the final episode in the story and it caused a lot of trouble in the story. Because so many unnecessary scenes we going on, we couldn’t really go as fast.

4. If you are going to participate in the story, please choose your character according to your schedule. Because if you choose to be the main characters and you can’t really be sure if you can make it almost everyday or not, it will cause our story to go slow and go in a pause.

5. Episode’s should have smaller number of scenes. We don’t have to include everything in the one episode itself as the quality of the story might be compromised so it should be at the most 4-5 scenes that is important to the stories and character. Of course, there can be exceptions. But I feel like this will help our story a lot.

Will tell you when I think of more.

Shaheen, you should also ask Nithya to help us with this.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Okay shaheen, let’s first take like 2 weeks planning everything out for the serial writing.

One thing I want say is that let’s not make the season 2 this quick. I feel like then the suspense will go away. We have to you know build up the suspense for the story, give hints that the show might start again, yk put some characters from “Quest Of Love” to other serials we will start. By that time, more people will be interested maybe and we can get them to play the characters if the original people are not ready.

1. Please, let’s actually plan out the story. The beginning, middle, and end. We have the whole story and the actors playing are slowly going to be introduced to the story. You know how we decided that we will ask people to share their stories and use that for the serial writing, well, the author can plan everything out and the actors will just play it adding their own elements to the character but not any new things in the story unless the author approves.

2. We have to have weekly discussions about the stories where the participants, the authors, and the readers (if they want too), come together to talk about the story, give reviews, ask for suggestions, tells the good points and not so good points, ask for help regarding the character. Trust me, this will greatly improve the story and characters and dialogues.

3. One scene allowed. This means that when a scene is going on in the story, no one is allowed to start another one that is completely irrelevant to that scene. That happened in the final episode in the story and it caused a lot of trouble in the story. Because so many unnecessary scenes we going on, we couldn’t really go as fast.

4. If you are going to participate in the story, please choose your character according to your schedule. Because if you choose to be the main characters and you can’t really be sure if you can make it almost everyday or not, it will cause our story to go slow and go in a pause.

5. Episode’s should have smaller number of scenes. We don’t have to include everything in the one episode itself as the quality of the story might be compromised so it should be at the most 4-5 scenes that is important to the stories and character. Of course, there can be exceptions. But I feel like this will help our story a lot.

Will tell you when I think of more.

Shaheen, you should also ask Nithya to help us with this.

Definitely will help my Shaheen.

I do have a suggestions for season 2 but I fear it can hurt anyone.

Whether She will accept it or not.

I have lot of feedbacks regarding season 1.

It could definitely would have been better if we could have played it according to plot and guidance.

We failed to add some one liners and dramatic dialogues which readers can remember for long.

Only Pooja's character gave us two epic and beautiful dialogue.

Lastly, the monologues at end were perfect.

But ending episode 14 could have been better to highlight the end.

Confession part doesn't seemed to give any vibe. It sucked there with no proper dialogues.

Rest will discuss with Shaheen and come back to you.

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Great it is.

Definitely will help my Shaheen.

I do have a suggestions for season 2 but I fear it can hurt anyone.

Whether She will accept it or not.

I have lot of feedbacks regarding season 1.

It could definitely would have been better if we could have played it according to plot and guidance.

We failed to add some one liners and dramatic dialogues which readers can remember for long.

Only Pooja's character gave us two epic and beautiful dialogue.

Lastly, the monologues at end were perfect.

But ending episode 14 could have been better to highlight the end.

Confession part doesn't seemed to give any vibe. It sucked there with no proper dialogues.

Rest will discuss with Shaheen and come back to you.

Yeah, the confession part seemed kind of bland. I was expecting a lot of romantic dialogues and inner monologue but it just felt like another scene.

Just say your suggestions nithya, I am are that no one will get hurt. It will only help our story.

The monologues were very nice.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Yeah, the confession part seemed kind of bland. I was expecting a lot of romantic dialogues and inner monologue but it just felt like another scene.

Just say your suggestions nithya, I am are that no one will get hurt. It will only help our story.

The monologues were very nice.

1. The members must be chosen wisely whom can play that given role perfectly.

2. More one liners and dialogues should be added which will attract viewers.

3. One episode should have minimum scenes.

4. Before the actual episode, we can discuss every scenes as how it's to progressed and protected.

5. Pairing must be done wisely so that it can highlight their chemistry.

6. All kinds of sad, happy, romance, anger, thriller elements must be added effectively.

7. No unnecessary dragging of the scenes must be there. The episode 14 and 15 went with unnecessary dragging of a single scenes.

8. We need to stick to the plot and characteristics till last.

9. We need to have at least 25 episodes for a complete superb ending.

10. We need to take readers feedback seriously. They give good ideas for progression.

11. Anyone of us take charge to guide the scenes throughout.

12. Timing and Absence is a issue.

13. Missing characters must not be there in story. We can have minimum members who can participate effectively.

14. And most important coordination.

15. Twist and Tale here and there must be include.

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

In that case, let me share my views.

1. The members must be chosen wisely whom can play that given role perfectly.

2. More one liners and dialogues should be added which will attract viewers.

3. One episode should have minimum scenes.

4. Before the actual episode, we can discuss every scenes as how it's to progressed and protected.

5. Pairing must be done wisely so that it can highlight their chemistry.

6. All kinds of sad, happy, romance, anger, thriller elements must be added effectively.

7. No unnecessary dragging of the scenes must be there. The episode 14 and 15 went with unnecessary dragging of a single scenes.

8. We need to stick to the plot and characteristics till last.

9. We need to have at least 25 episodes for a complete superb ending.

10. We need to take readers feedback seriously. They give good ideas for progression.

11. Anyone of us take charge to guide the scenes throughout.

12. Timing and Absence is a issue.

13. Missing characters must not be there in story. We can have minimum members who can participate effectively.

14. And most important coordination.

15. Twist and Tale here and there must be include.

I was also saying that we should take everyone’s feedback including the readers. That should be done.

Yeah I was thinking what if we have like a audition type of thing. We tell that person a situation and they come up with the lines. If it’s good, they get chosen, if not they can try for other characters.

What do you think?