Rahul Muskaan - A poem..DO read!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys,
Herez my piece of disaster..
Temme if you like it😃

Ladna jhagdna
Roothna Manana
Sab hai pyaar ke alag rang
Akhir ek dinn humko bhi toh chalna hai sang sang
Bhale aaj humne Dill de diya hai kisi aur ko
Lekin ek dinn to milna hi hoga
Humare Dilon ko

Lots of love
sneha

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~LiNa~ thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh wow sneha! 😃 thats a realy sweet poem! and it suits RM perfectly! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah it does suit! its really sweet and cute sneha! good work 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~LiNa~

oh wow sneha! 😃 thats a realy sweet poem! and it suits RM perfectly! 😃


thanks alot lina!!😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: //Reena//

yeah it does suit! its really sweet and cute sneha! good work 😃



Thanks alot reena!!!😃😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats really sweet!
specially the last two lines! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I want this to come as a voiceover in some rpomo or RM being together...rely nice
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Posted: 18 years ago
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@Dhvani:Reaeally?? THat is soo sweet..Thanks a alot yaar 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Sneha!

Nice poem..i understood it...which is good cause i dont usually understand hindi when it takes the form of shayari..

You wrote it very well, and fits the current pair of RM very very well!

Job well done!! 👏 👏

No one could have written it as swell as you..I give you a standing ovation! 😳

Do write more if more comes to mind..would love to read it!

Kajal 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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@Kajal:Awww thanks soo much sweety..Yea will surely write more.. 😃

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