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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

I am standing on the stage with Anmol Ji. That's when Aditi came running from crowd calling "Mumma, Mumma... Sab naach rahe hain. Papa ko bhi bolo naachne ke liye"..... she said addressing me as Mumma and Abir as Papa before the entire crowd....

Everyone got shunned and went in a fix for a second. some people started gossiping at the back.

I stood still not knowing what to do...

Ae Adu

Yahan aa beta.

Chachi ko mumma kyun bol rahi ho re.

Aaja mere paas.

Bahu tum toh samajh daar ho

Samjha nahi sakti bacchi ko.

Hamesha goongi ho kar khade rehna

Acha hai kya?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Tum bhi chalo mere saath. ....or should we give chance to our children.🤔....arre dil toh Jawan hai par iss shareer nahi😆...don't you think so?...

but remembering my vasu finally we finally started dancing on the floor....💃💃

Even Abir and anamika was dragged to the floor🥳🤪I danced crazily without paying any attention to the dumbstruck audience😎

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Arey ruk jaa.

Sab ghotala hogaye re.

Kya kar diya yeh Adu ne.

I stopped in between

Ab kya huwa...I was getting in mood 😎but got interrupted🤔...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Ae Adu

Yahan aa beta.

Chachi ko mumma kyun bol rahi ho re.

Aaja mere paas.

Bahu tum toh samajh daar ho

Samjha nahi sakti bacchi ko.

Hamesha goongi ho kar khade rehna

Acha hai kya?

" Bua ji bacchi hai woh usse kaise samjho main? Samjhen gi kya woh?... I looked towards Anmol and he is clueless at this venture too.


I bent down to Aditi " Adu, main aapki mumma hoon lekin aap yahan mujhe Chachi bulao. Theek hai. Sabko pata chalna chahiye na ke aapki chaachi kon hai ah? "...


" Nahi aap meri Chachi nahi meri mumma ho. Aisa kyun keh rahi ho? Papa ne dhanta kya? Main papa se bolungi ke woh aapko na dhanteras"... She said breaking my words..

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Arey ruk jaa.

Sab ghotala hogaye re.

Kya kar diya yeh Adu ne.


“Bua, Aditi ko please yahan le jayi he. Bas 10 minute ke liye”


I kneeled down to Aditi’s level. “Aapni papa ki baat manogi na. Chalo Bua ke saath.”


After Bua and Aditi had left, I started my speech.


“ Yaha aanewale saab logo ko bata hoga ki mere pehle biwi ki maut hogayi. Aditi ke saar se ma ka saaya hat gaya aur... baab ka bhi. Tab, uske zindagi main Pooja aayi, usne Aditi ka apne bacche jaisa khayal rakhne lagi. Aur Aditi ko unse lagav hogaya. Ma kehne lagi usse kyunki unhone unhe Ma ka mamta diya.


Thank you, Pooja, meri beti ko itna pyaar dene ke liye jo shayad uski khud ki ma usse kabhi na de sakti thi. Thank you.”


I went in front of Anmol and Pooja with a mischievous smile.


“Aapko thanks bolne ke liye, maine ek tofa tayaar kiya. “ I get the envelope from my pocket.


“Yeh honeymoon tickets, aap dono ke liye, taki aap dono ka bhi meri Aditi ke tarah, Chotte sa baccha ya bacche hon. Zyada dair mat kijiyega. Meri beti ko khelne keliye ek dost chahiye.”

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


“Bua, Aditi ko please yahan le jayi he. Bas 10 minute ke liye”


I kneeled down to Aditi’s level. “Aapni papa ki baat manogi na. Chalo Bua ke saath.”


After Bua and Aditi had left, I started my speech.


“ Yaha aanewale saab logo ko bata hoga ki mere pehle biwi ki maut hogayi. Aditi ke saar se ma ka saaya hat gaya aur... baab ka bhi. Tab, uske zindagi main Pooja aayi, usne Aditi ka apne bacche jaisa khayal rakhne lagi. Aur Aditi ko unse lagav hogaya. Ma kehne lagi usse kyunki unhone unhe Ma ka mamta diya.


Thank you, Pooja, meri beti ko itna pyaar dene ke liye jo shayad uski khud ki ma usse kabhi na de sakti thi. Thank you.”


I went in front of Anmol and Pooja with a mischievous smile.


“Aapko thanks bolne ke liye, maine ek tofa tayaar kiya. “ I get the envelope from my pocket.


“Yeh honeymoon tickets, aap dono ke liye, taki aap dono ka bhi meri Aditi ke tarah, Chotte sa baccha ya bacche hon. Zyada dair mat kijiyega. Meri beti ko khelne keliye ek dost chahiye.”

I got shunned by Abir Singhania's message.


" Yeh insaan itna Kaise badal gaya. Chalo kaise bhi hua ho Apni beti ke liye kadha hua hai. Aur isse badi baat aur kya ho sakti hai. Ab woh bacchi akeli nahi hai"... I expressed in my mind with a smile filled with tears.


" Abir Ji apko mujhe iss cheez ke liye shukriya kehne koi zarurat nahi hai. Mujhse jo ho sake main uss bacchi ke liye karungi. Mujhe na toh duniya ki parwa aur na kisi kalank se. "... I said to him.


" Yeh Kaisa tohfa hai? Woh bhi sabke saamne.!! Aur kya bol rahe hai aap? ".... I really felt awkward at the moment. I put down my head and move on from there to check Aditi.

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Posted: 5 years ago

I went to the room where Aditi and Bua ji is residing. Immediately as soon as I opened up the door, Aditi came running to me and hugged me tightly calling " Mumma " in a shaky feary voice. I knelt down and hugged her tightly.


" Aditi, kya hua baccha? Aap darr kyun rahe ho.? Mumma ke hote hua, ah? Baccha, darro mat. Theek hain main hoon na aapke saath. Woh kya haina main aapki Dadi, Papa, Chachu sab ek game khel rahe hain. Sabko fool bana rahe hain yeh keh ke main aapki Chachi hoon bilkul waise jaise aap apne school mein April fool manaate hai. Bada mazaa aata na? Haina? Aapne sabke saamne bol diya na isiliye Dadi naraaz hai aapse.... I pacified her in a most calm way as possible.


" Sachi, Mumma. Sorry. Main nahi bolungi kisi ko ke aap meri mumma ho. Hum iss khel mein jeetenge na mumma? Main Papa ko bhi sorry bolke aati hoon"... She ran away in a most excited way.


" Zarur jeetenge hum iss khel mein baccha. Sambhaal ke Aditi"....!!


I turned towards Bua Ji who is staring at me in fuming anger. I went towards her slowly. " Bua ji main jaanti hoon aap Mujhse naraaz hai ke maine Aditi ko uss waqt kyun nahi rokha. Bua ji aap hi bataaiye na kaise rokhti main usse? Woh bacchi hai nahi samajh thi. Maa ka na hona kya hota yeh dard main jaanti hoon. Aur main usse woh dard nahi dena chahti hoon. Chahe mujhe iss ke liye kitni bhi mushkilon ka saamna kyun na karna pade. Main karungi. Mujhe iss duniya ki parwa nahi hai mujhe bas Aditi ki bhavnao ki parwa. Main uss ke liye kuch bhi karungi, kuch bhi "..... I elucidated in a most dignified way.

Edited by Home786 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Wahi.Wahi.

Isse pehle drama shuru ho

Mujhe hi kuch karna hoga.

okkkaay All the best.
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

I went to the room where Aditi and Bua ji is residing. Immediately as soon as I opened up the door, Aditi came running to me and hugged me tightly calling " Mumma " in a shaky feary voice. I knelt down and hugged her tightly.


" Aditi, kya hua baccha? Aap darr kyun rahe ho.? Mumma ke hote hua, ah? Baccha, darro mat. Theek hain main hoon na aapke saath. Woh kya haina main aapki Dadi, Papa, Chachu sab ek game khel rahe hain. Sabko fool bana rahe hain yeh keh ke main aapki Chachi hoon bilkul waise jaise aap apne school mein April fool manaate hai. Bada mazaa aata na? Haina? Aapne sabke saamne bol diya na isiliye Dadi naraaz hai aapse.... I pacified her in a most calm way as possible.


" Sachi, Mumma. Sorry. Main nahi bolungi kisi ko ke aap meri mumma ho. Hum iss khel mein jeetenge na mumma? Main Papa ko bhi sorry bolke aati hoon"... She ran away in a most excited way.


" Zarur jeetenge hum iss khel mein baccha. Sambhaal ke Aditi"....!!


I turned towards Bua Ji who is staring at me in fuming anger. I went towards her slowly. " Bua ji main jaanti hoon aap Mujhse naraaz hai ke maine Aditi ko uss waqt kyun nahi rokha. Bua ji aap hi bataaiye na kaise rokhti main usse? Woh bacchi hai nahi samajh thi. Maa ka na hona kya hota yeh dard main jaanti hoon. Aur main usse woh dard nahi dena chahti hoon. Chahe mujhe iss ke liye kitni bhi mushkilon ka saamna kyun na karna pade. Main karungi. Mujhe iss duniya ki parwa nahi hai mujhe bas Aditi ki bhavnao ki parwa. Main uss ke liye kuch bhi karungi, kuch bhi "..... I elucidated in a most dignified way.

Bahu

Achi baatein karle thi hai Tu.

Lekin samajh yeh baaton ko nahi maanta.

Tujhe kiski cheez ki parwa nahi hai.

Lekin mujhe toh hai.

Singhania khandaan ki ek alag izzat hai samajh main.

Bas usse mat kharab kar

Tere yeh satyavati bashan se.

Samajh gali dega tumko.

Aur iss mein mere Abir ko bhi shaamil karenge.

Jisse tum choti baat keh rahi hoon na

Usse samajh ek naya roop dega.

Iss Kalank bare gali mere Abir ko shaamil mat kar.

Maa bann ke rehna chahti haina to rehte

Lekin samaaj ke liye aur duniya ke liye

Tu usski chaachi hai

Bas baat khatam.

Ab aansu poch ke

Jaldi se bahar aaja

Kisiko ko ungli uthane ka mauka

Nahi dungi main.

Chal.

Thik kar apna huliya aur bahar aaja.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


“Bua, Aditi ko please yahan le jayi he. Bas 10 minute ke liye”


I kneeled down to Aditi’s level. “Aapni papa ki baat manogi na. Chalo Bua ke saath.”


After Bua and Aditi had left, I started my speech.


“ Yaha aanewale saab logo ko bata hoga ki mere pehle biwi ki maut hogayi. Aditi ke saar se ma ka saaya hat gaya aur... baab ka bhi. Tab, uske zindagi main Pooja aayi, usne Aditi ka apne bacche jaisa khayal rakhne lagi. Aur Aditi ko unse lagav hogaya. Ma kehne lagi usse kyunki unhone unhe Ma ka mamta diya.


Thank you, Pooja, meri beti ko itna pyaar dene ke liye jo shayad uski khud ki ma usse kabhi na de sakti thi. Thank you.”


I went in front of Anmol and Pooja with a mischievous smile.


“Aapko thanks bolne ke liye, maine ek tofa tayaar kiya. “ I get the envelope from my pocket.


“Yeh honeymoon tickets, aap dono ke liye, taki aap dono ka bhi meri Aditi ke tarah, Chotte sa baccha ya bacche hon. Zyada dair mat kijiyega. Meri beti ko khelne keliye ek dost chahiye.”

Me as ANMOL here:


I was literally shunned and went in trace for few minutes encountering all such hectic drama. My thoughts were entangled with different notions. I see Pooja going towards Aditi's room in a worrisome face. I knew she is really uncomfortable and uneasy with Bhai's gift and I couldn't even revert at the heat of moment.


I dragged Bhai to the corner to have small talk.

" Bhai... Pehle toh aap mujhe maaf kar dijiye. Maine toh aapse theek se maafi bhi nahi maangi na.? Maaf kardo yaar Bhai mujhe maine aapko galat samjha. Jiss Bhai ko bhagwaan maan ke chalta tha, maine ussi bhagwan pe shak kiya? Kaise kar sakta tha main? Yeh toh aapka badappan hai jo itna kuch ho jane ke baavjood apne mere liye itna kiya woh bhi haaste haaste.. Ho sake toh iss nadaan Bhai ko maaf kar dijiye. Main vaada karta hoon ke aage se aisa kabhi nahi hoga. Promise.... I hugged him tightly with guilty tears in my eyes.


" Jo aapne Aditi aur Pooja ke liye kya hai uss ke baare main kya kahoon Bhai.? Thank you Bhai for defending Pooja. Thank you so much. Apne Pooja ke upar ungli uthne se pehele hi baat sambhaal liya. Jaise aap hamesha meri madad karne aaja thei hai waise hi aap har baar Meri Pooja ko bhi bachaane Aaja te hai. You're savoir Bhai...!! "... I emoted my gratitude.


" Ek aur baat Bhai bura mat maaniye aapka gift thoda awkward laga. I think Pooja ke liye thoda mushkil kar diya aapne. Mazaak kar raha tha. Thank you for the gift Bhai isse zarur main kabhi istemaal karunga but now for sure. Bhai, Pooja sirf 19 saal ki hai and I don't wanna force this relationship over her. I want her to endeavor greater heights and cherish her dreams to the fullest. Pehele hum dono ek dusre ko ache se jaan toh le. Samajh toh le ek dusre ke feelings ko. Filhal yeh rishta ek maaryada se bhara swabhimaan hai mere liye jiss ki izzat karna chahta hoon mein. That's it. Zindagi kahan bhagi jaa rahi hai. Toh yeh sab baad mein. Aditi ko thoda intezaar karna padega iss ke liye tab tak mai hoon na uss ke saath khelne ke liye"... I smiled and hugged him back.


" Main zaraa Pooja ko dekhe aata hoon".. She must uncomfortable and nervous na. Let me catch up to her. I went from there and walked towards Aditi's room .

Edited by Home786 - 5 years ago

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