Forbidden Desire FF part 1 pg 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It was awesome sweet 16๐Ÿค— It is awesome I would like to read the next update very soon ๐Ÿ‘๐ŸผIt is unique and very interesting โค๏ธ waiting for your next update sweet 16 โค๏ธ

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome writing. Want to read more.

Please update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautiful story

Waiting for next update

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Kalika! Thats good start.

1- the pull between rudhita - she doesnt kno why she her eyes light up when someine talk about anirudh


2 your Bondita is also curious and rigid


4 Very happy batuk abd bondita arw friends atleast there is competition for Ani lol


Will Ani allow her to come in his room? Whats his first reaction seeing bondita? Will he feel same pull ?


How will bondita react to meet barristee babu? The unusual-happiness will remain same or convert into something intense?



Excited for first rudhita meeting. How they become friends? Will they?



Can't wait. I loved your writing. Hehe it refreshed paro devdaa memories

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautiful update

Can't wait for Anirudh and Bondita meeting

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prit_007

It's nice start Kalika ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

How I wish if Sumathi could show some courage in the show too but no she couldn't ๐Ÿฅบ

I am really happy you are showing this courage of Sumati in your story. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Btw the title is so interesting ๐Ÿ˜‰ Waiting for the next one

Btw why the desire is forbidden? ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Okay update soon. Will be waiting

I know right! I wish she did ๐Ÿ˜’

Forbidden Desire, the title is apt with story that I have in my mind that's why ๐Ÿ˜‰

Thanks so much Prit for reading, means a lot yaar๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: caller123

Very nice start Kalika . Waiting for ccoming updates .

Thanks so much Kate... ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bee222

Wow, this Sumati is way ahead of her time! ๐Ÿ‘ Please continue soon, your title has got me really interested ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

thanks Bee๐Ÿค—

Please enjoy the read๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Forbidden desire ๐Ÿค” sounds interesting ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Prologue is so desirable to read more ๐Ÿ˜ณ Do continue kali

looking forward to it your review ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thanks my sweet friend๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: shah10

Interesting concept

Thanks Shah... Read on๐Ÿ˜Š

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