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Chapter 6


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Enthralling update👏


Now it's clear that, the mysterious boy n girl are related to our leads.

I wish my assumption of the identity of boy is correct...😉

And the Girl, she is making me more curious.. what's the story behind their misery? How she is responsible for that?

And Why Rajat is chasing him?


"I fail to stop you from hurting her in past"! I fail to stop you from ruining us in your Jealousy you think I can stop him"?.

was there a love triangle or something like that? these lines...


Ahh! And our over smart lead, he planned everything well in advance...😎 didn't expected anything less from him😆

That's like him, by hook or crook... And at end acting innocent😉

But how can he escape Pari😆 ...


But the shocking was her mother Gayatri, first she was against her alliance with him and now she is thinking of benefits


I don't wanna assume anything more as you make me surprise everytime with something new😳...

So I let their mystery to be unfold by you only😆


Woo 👏 you has figured out entire story closely 👍🏼

Each assumption could turn out right 😊

About Girl and Gayatri U-turn you will know in upcoming two updates ⭐️


Yes Rajat is smart 😎 he wants something he will have it by any means no matter what it takes 😎

Yeah Pari did figure out his ploy but let's say can't be sure because of no evidence and strong motive 😊


Well past is mysterious kind love triangle yes 👍🏼

Related to leads will see 😆 I don't know your assumption will turn right or not but one thing is clear you're in for surprising update ⭐️


I am glad you didn't went on to conclude everything on own and let me narrate the tale further 👍🏼

Such a precious comment you made me wait but it's worth 😎


Thanks for your valuable time and well analysis review 🤗

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Chapter 7


"So it was your doing Raj"?...


(Throwing the cell on table, picking water bottle from table clad in Red Tee simple white trouser, ask the guy with curly messed up hair, after gulping few long sip of water).


"Yes it was me"!."But she checkmated me Risabh"!..


"Ofcourse she will after all She's isn't a fool"!.. anyway what's your next plan"?....


(Rajat look back at Rishabh, who was looking at him already, plan"? Is there's any plan left for me"? If I try to get closer to her. Then her doubt will convert into firm belief. And her smart head will try figuring out my intention I cannot let that happen. What I should do"?. He didn't Gets to think much as the sudden ringing of cellphone snapped his attention towards the table. Rishabh put the bottle back on table and pick up his cell , chechking the caller ID curiously reciving the call he put it on ear and spoke calmly).


"Yeah Rohan wassup"!.. what's make you call me early in the morning"?...


"The person you wanted to know about is here in Mumbai"!


"What really"? You're sure"?...


"Yes I am because he's the one who saved my life"!.


"Ok thanks"! Rohan can you dig deeper and trace his location if he's here in Mumbai"?...


"I can try but as you know we are caught in investigating other case so I cannot promise"!.


"That's alright just take care of yourself"!..


(Saying this he cuts, the call and look back at Rajat who was already staring at his way in sheer curiousity and confusion. Curiosity to know who he talked with, and confusion about the person he wants to find. He didn't had to wait for long to get answer as Risabh spoke while shoving the cell phone on trouser pocket).


"Rajat are you trying to get him through her"? If yes you can stop"! He's here in Mumbai"!..


"What"?..


"Yes it was my friend he's cop"!.. he informed me about him"!.


"He won't expose himself unless I pressed his weak nerve"! I has to have her to get him"!..


"But She's only his sister"! She has no hand in what happen with Alina or Anaya"! It's unethical to drag her in the ploy of revenge"!


"Do you think I care"? He will have to pay for sins he committed"! And that vile family made him escape! or else he would've been been punished gravely by Law"!.. they're not ethical either"!


(Saying this he pick up his cellphone from table and car keys, blazer from couch then walked out of there. Without paying heed to his detective friend Risabh who was watching his retreating back without word wih look full of disappointment and disapleasure. "I wish you understood revenge lead us nowhere).


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"Care to Eloborate Gayatri"! what's make you take U-turn on your own words"?.."Day back on night you were the one to oppose their proposal and now"?..


(Ask Prithivi in curiousity applying the ointment on the palm of Gaytri, though he was extremely Annoyed as soon Rajat's parents walked out of their villa. He didn't understand why his wife will even think of going ahead without having word with him over this. Already His wife and daughter doesn't share warm relation, he fear Gaytri decision could widen the gap between them. Besides he was genguinely curious to what could make her change her opinion about Rathore's. Sighing inwardly he waited calmly to get his answer Gaytri didn't take long and answer him calmly without revealing much).


"I investigated about them"! They're good people for Bussiness world they're shrewd but have very humble personality"!.. today keeping the circumstances in mind I didn't find it troublesome to proceed with alliance"!...


"Don't don't try to fabricate truth with lie"!.. I see the longings in your eye for him"! Don't forget Gaytri you were the one who said he's dead for us"!..


"Prithvi"!..."why don't you understand I believe he will return as soon"!..


"For the sake of getting your son back you're ready to slaughter your own daughter"?.. she's isn't willing to involve in loveless relation forsake of profit"!.. why are you trying to ruin her"?...


(Blasted Prithvi in anger, having no consideration towards the impact of his word on his wife, who looked at him in bewilderment listening his words. As if she doesn't love her daughter"? The words of Prithivi that she's ruining her daughter's life hurted her lot. But she knew at this moment Prithivi isn't in sense and speaking whatever coming in his mind. She shuddered at the possibility of Prithivi ever finding about the reason why she's insisting on Pari marrying Rajat. "He will kill me and gladly accept death penalty"!.).


Why"? Isn't she enough for you"?.. you're women Gaytri how could you be biased"?.in her eye her mother doesn't love her"!. I didn't believe but now your action"!..


"Prithvi you're misunderstanding me"!...


Misunderstanding"?.. yeah I am misunderstanding your love for her"!.can you help me to understand rightly"?..


"I wish I could but I can't do it"! Not now just have faith on me I will"!..


"I wants you to know one thing"! I ain't going to pressurized her to marry him or anyone"! Wether it's desire of you or need of my bussiness"!..


(Saying this Prithivi walked back to his study room, to deal with the matter in is own way. Making Gaytri more disheartened she didn't how to convince him anymore. If he's isn't agreeing then pari won't agree to her wish in anyway. Pacing here and there in hall room she thought for while then getting an idea she walked out of there).

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"What you mean by nothing could be done about it"? Neha Sharma you're my friend you has to help me in getting rid of mess created by Media"!..


(Ask pari in enraged voice banging on glass table rising from chair in sheer rage. Her fury was uncontrollable today and it was evident by her behaviour no one dare to cross her path in office at how much they were scared at sight of her walking towards the cabin of head editor or chief Anchor Neha Sharma it's been half hour they're discussing but nothing seems to result is good).


"Pari calm down"! I can't do anything unless I have word from Uncle and Aunty"! They're refusing to answer"!...


(Breathing heavily she sat back on chair, covered her face by both palms and stayed silent. Concerning Neha more, she knew it can't be the media work only which pissed her off it's something else but she don't know how to ask keeping her behaviour in mind Neha stayed silent few minutes passed by in sheer silence when pari removed her hand and lean back on chair composing herself she spoke calmly).


"She wants him back"!. "She think my marriage is only way to get him back"!.she didn't said but I can read it in her eye"!.


"What"?.. but why"? It was she who released him with vow to never see him then why"?..


"Mother's love cannot be understood"!. it's complex situation"!. I myself don't know what's make her think he will return by my marriage"!..


"So what you're thinking to do"?...


"I don't know"!.. "Frankly if I think about the circumstance practically it's not bad idea to marry him"!.. as it's beneficial for business"!. But I don't take decision on such a matter of life practically"! He's far from the guy I have in mind for my partner"!.


"Why don't you have word with him"?...


"No use That's mumma's boy have no issue in proceedings with alliance if it's decided by elders"!


"What"?..


"Yes and that's what make suspicious of him"!.. he's not what he look like or pretend"!.. Neha can you ask your brother Risabh to investigate about him"? I would have asked Ajay but know mom will Gets to know about it and"!..


"Don't worry I will ask him right away"!. Though I hadn't spoken with him from past months"!. Let's see he agrees or not"!..


"That's better um make sure to keep it secret"!.. if he's truly good then I don't mind in agreeing with the alliance either"!..


(Saying this she got up from chair taking her bag walked out of there, leaving bewildered Neha behind who for minute stayed stunned with words of Jodha, "just when I think I know you! You surprised me! Shrugging she then pick up her cell and dialled Risabh Sharma her brother).


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"Natasha"! Do you think i done wrong with us"!..


(Understanding the underlying meaning of his words, Natasha who just wounded her arms around his neck from behind. Upon approaching him on terrace where he was sat on recliner. Removed her arms and turn around. She needn't to ask as she knew he's talking about their daughter. Where's Ajit sensing her presence feeling her touch ask calmly hoping against hope to get honest answer by way he wish to hear. But the removal of wounded arms around his neck the silence made it evident. Like his son his wife held him guilty as well, closing his eyes he rise frok recliner then turn around and walked towards her then looking at her. What will happen once you will come to know the sin she commited"?.."I am burning in fire of remorse"! What will happen if the flames reach you guys"?.. thought he inwardly trying to keep his emotion in Check).


"Natasha you're my love"!..you don't need to hestitate in matter of answering me"!..


"Ajit you know better"!. You didn't trusted her kicked her out and we lost her for forever"!..he didn't even Gets to see her"!. What you think to hear from me or him"?. Don't you think it was injustice"?..


"Right I was wrong to question this and spoil your mood"!. Anyway What you think about Pari"?.


(He change the topic and it work well the mere mentioned of pari brought smile on Natasha's face. She was very impressed by meeting with her though they didn't exchange words much. But her not changing her composure being natural and real her in presence of them).


"If perfection has a face then it's her's"!..


"But it's look like they're not meant to be"!. "He have something up in mind I know not!..


"Same here"!..but don't worry we won't let him do wrong"!.


(Saying this she hugged him, where's Ajit stared at the vacant floor hugging her back. He wasn't sure he can stop him. If he has some bad intention, but he won't sop trying that he was sure about).


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"What are you doing"?..


"You are blessed with eyes"!


(Walking inside the living room dressed in shorts, Ask the girl in curiousity, watching him sitting on couch securely putting a letter inside the box. But hearing her query he answered the girl in Sarasacm, while closing a box for final touch up).


"This is for"?..


"Mr and Mrs Rajput"!...


"Can't we go back"?...


"No"!. We are dead for them"!.


"But he's bringing us back to life"!..through your sis"!..


"Credit goes to you"!..


"You were the one to abduct me"!.


"You were the one to ruin me"!.. you accuse me of Harassing you"!.."created misunderstanding between me and Alina"! Making her drove to accident"!..You were the one who made him hates me"!..


"I take responsibility of all then"! Just let me go back Shaurya"! I will make him understand he's doing wrong"!..


"I don't trust you Anaya singh Rathor"! If I do then to we can't return unless we avenge for our Guardian"!.. don't forget we owe our life to him"!..


(Saying this he clap once, a men stepped inside handling him the parcel he patted his shoulder and instructed him to deliver only to Mr Rajput. The pain was evident when he just call them formally instead of Endearment a kid use for his her parents. But knowing the circumstances he kept his emotion in check. "I hope you don't let her get ruined"! Thinking inwardly he closed his eyes).

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(Pacing here and there concern checking wrist watch glancing at the entrance time to time Prithivi stressing out it was going to be 1:45 but his daughter hasn't returned her cell was switched off, at office he comes to know she didn't went there. And her friends has no idea about her whereabouts either. "You aren't careless pari where are you"? What's with this recklessness no message"!. murmuring to himself he check the time).


"Sir"!.. "There's parcel for you"!


(Turning around he faced his attender, spotting a box in his hand he nodded taking it from him he dismissed him. "What's this"? Walking towards couch sitting down he open the box. And found a broken watch inside with a letter not understanding he took the letter and unfolding it calmly started reading the content the letter carries).


"Greetings Mr/Mrs Rajput"

"Accidentally a Broken watch wiped the smile of your princess face"!.

"Forgotten promise to get it repaired, unknowingly killed her hope"!

"Beware"! your one decision could kill her soul"!

"Your well wisher"

(Picking the broken watch, he tries to recall what the incident the letter imply at, he stared at the watch for while but didn't Gets to recall anything. Hearing the sound of car, he put the watch back in box with letter and shoved it under the table. Standing up he spotted Pari stepping in carrying few files in hand and her bag).


"Where were you"?.. "It's 2 am now"! No message or call cell switch off"! Do you have any idea what I went through"?...


"Ah I I was working on case"!.. didn't realise the time my cell was dead to"!.. I'm sorry Dad"!..


(Pulling her in bone crushing hug Prithivi sigh out loud surprising Pari uncontrollably. The files and bag fall on floor. Not knowing what happen with him, she sigh inwardly and hug him back when she noticed he's shivering badly rubbing his back she spoke concern about his condition).


"Dad are you fine"?.."Dad I'm here don't worry"!..


"You scared me Pari"!..i hate to be helpless I tey calling you to know your whereabouts to know you're fine or not but"!. Don't dare to do this ever again"! I will die out of fear"!..


"Dad don't say this way nothing will happen to you"!...


"Yeah will see about it"!. One day we all have to"!.


"Dad don't dare to finish it"!


"Fine I won't now go you must've tired"!..


"I will but where's mom"?..


"She has some important case to investigate"!..she won't come tonight"!..


"Did you talk with her about alliance matter"?. What she said"?..


"Pari it's to late to talk you should freshen up and rest aren't you Exhausted and sleepy"?...


"Don't dodge my question"! Answer me Dad what she said"?..


"Doesn't matter what she say it's your wish which matter"!..


(Giving a tight smile upon listening his words she just bent down picked up the files and her bag, then started walking upstairs towards her room. Realizing her Mom is adamant to get her married with Rajat. Where's her dad support her in whatever decision she takes but she knew No from her can create rift between her parents. She barely reach towards the stairs without turning back she spoke).


"Dad tell her I am ready for alliance"!..you guys can attend the press conference tommorow"!..


(Saying this she rushed upstairs without waiting to hear his reply or anything. The loud dash on door made it evident how hurt disappointed and disheartened she's over her mother. Sighing inwardly Prithivi made his way towards the table getting the box out he to walked towards his room).


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"Next noon"


"What are you doing? Go away!"


(The guy said as he tried to leave the room but he couldn't as he was pushed down on the bed. His eyes were blurry and he struggled to get off the bed).


"What's the hurry, babe? I think you deserve a punishment for rejecting me"!.


(The girl said and flashed her evil smirk to him. The girl seductively walked towards him while the guy tried his best to get up. Even though he managed to get up but the girl made sure he couldn't leave the room).


"You... you mixed some... something in my drink r..righ.. right?"


(The guy stuttered. His head became heavy and it was getting hard for him to keep his eyes open but he knew if he lost his conscious then a big blunder would happen. "Bingo!" The girl sat on his lap and wrapped her arms around his neck. The guy tried to push her away but he failed to as he started to lose his conscious slowly. The girl slightly pushed him and fell flat on the bed).


"No!"


(screaming in pure agony rhe guy woke up in jolt, from his deep slumber. He ran his hand through his hair and then covered his face with his shaky palms. It was a nightmare! The horrific dream he sees every damn night since last month. He never slept in peace since then. He just looked at himself in the mirror placed right in front of him. His eyes were red, forehead was covered with sweat beads, hair was messy and his hands were quivering! He sighed deeply and he was ready to mask his emotions with his ruthless avatar).


"Again a nightmare"?..good you deserve these nightmares because instead of fighting for justice"!.. You're opening a path for that Vile women to pry on other"!.


(Startled by the femine voice, he look back and saw the same girl who is annoying him from past few days, to fight against his Abuser. But can he do it"? What will everyone say"? It's breaking the stereotype notion a men cannot be victim of Abuse. Even they do no one believes a girl can abuse men to. There's no law for men either why she don't go away"? It's so humiliating if he filed a case against her, he will be abused again and again in front of everyone everywhere. Whether it's police station, court or media society won't leave him and his sister in peace either).


"You're here again"!..


"I am compelled to be here"!..or no interest in you Karthik"!..


"How you will prove her guilty"? I will lose my job my dignity my peace"!..


"I can because I will"! Tell me what has happened"? How she get her way with you"?...


"She told me if I dare to tell anyone she will turn the table on me"! Law support Girl"! I I can't"!...


"Fine then don't tell"! let her strip you off from your dignity"! Abuse others"! I am leaving"!..


"I saw in news at morning"! "You're getting married Miss Rajput"!


"Glad to hear"! "You're invited feel free to tag along with Kritika"!..


(Saying this she pick up her bag, and walked out of there without another word or glance at his way. Mere mention of her own marriage made her angered, she intentionally avoided to join the press conference with her parents, and didn't dare to switch on the channel to see the news of her doom. though she didn't paid herd to anything just rush out she heard Kritika calling her from behind. But ignoring all she sat in her car and drive away. At one point she think it's not awful as she think it is, but other part of her is being scared it was nerve break-in moment where she didn't knew what to do anymore).

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Originally posted by: James12

Woo 👏 you has figured out entire story closely 👍🏼

Each assumption could turn out right 😊

About Girl and Gayatri U-turn you will know in upcoming two updates ⭐️


Yes Rajat is smart 😎 he wants something he will have it by any means no matter what it takes 😎

Yeah Pari did figure out his ploy but let's say can't be sure because of no evidence and strong motive 😊


Well past is mysterious kind love triangle yes 👍🏼

Related to leads will see 😆 I don't know your assumption will turn right or not but one thing is clear you're in for surprising update ⭐️


I am glad you didn't went on to conclude everything on own and let me narrate the tale further 👍🏼

Such a precious comment you made me wait but it's worth 😎


Thanks for your valuable time and well analysis review 🤗

Yes, I didn't wanted assume before hand, if some of them were right that would spoil the suspense, any how I will get to know them in next update😆


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