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Posted: 5 years ago

part 7:-


~Malhotra mansion ~


The house was a little busy as few guest were going to arrive.Sanjay(Eldest son of raj Malhotra) is seen moving towards hall where Nilam is waiting for guest.


Nilam (wife of raj Malhotra):- sanjay did you check their rooms? I hope you made proper arrangements .


Sanjay:- chill mom. Everything is perfect


And Nilam moves towards kitchen where Raj Malhotra(head of family) is decorating dishes..


Nilam:- billo(maid) all the dishes prepared are edible na.?


Raj:- why are you questioning billo about this . I am here na .. I am the one who prepared these tasty, ravishing dishes(with proud)


Nilam:- That's the reason I am confirming.!(teasingly)


sunny (younger son of raj Malhotra) who just entered kitchen:- Don't know what will happen with today's guest..😜😜


Raj:- shut up! I am a professional 😎


Nilam:- you guys just don't start your banter infront of guest


While Sanjay came running to kitchen to inform about arrival of guest.


Sanjay:- Mom,Dad,sunny the guest have arrived.


They heard Main gate opening and ran towards entrance of house.

It was a huge beautiful mansion with garden surrounded at three sides and a fountain in centre ,a dinning table , kids playing area at a side


Jalal, Abdul and Abrar were mesmerized seeing the mansion and its surrounding. And Ahmed proceeds towards entrance where raj,nilam,sanjay and sunny were waiting for their welcom followed by trio .

Ahmed hugged raj :- How are you ?


Raj:-how can a husband be when he have an amazing wife(winks to Nilam who blushes seeing her husband's open flirt) ..


Sunny:- Ahemm..dad


Sanjay:- All of us are good. How about you uncle?


Ahmed:- fine with your prayers


Nilam:- Will you people let them enter or complete all your queries here only?


And everyone enters in hall ,it was a huge,stylish, well furnished one.and gets settled on sofa


Ahmed:- Meet these people , he is Akbar , this one Abdul and that one is Abrar(pointing towards trio)


to jalal :- He is Raj, that's his wife Nilam , their elder son Sanjay and younger son Sunny..


And all of them exchange greetings.


Ahmed:- By the way where is priya ?? where is little master?


Nilam(with sad face):- They Both are in Singapore , priya went for some business purpose.


Ahmed:- alone??


Nilam:- I said her that I will also join them but she disagreed


Raj:- ohh come on Nilam.. Let her be an independent girl .! Anyways she will be back her by tomorrow so relax.! (To jalal) So akbar , what do you do?


Jalal(Akbar):- umm uncle we ..We people 😅 .ya we do clothing business .


Sanjay🧐:- Where are you from?


Abrar:- India


Sunny🤨:- where exactly from India?


Abdul:- Agra


again both Sanjay and sunny were ready to shoot questions when nilam interrupts


Nilam:- will you both stop troubling our guest?Akbar son , please don't mind their behaviour , they like becoming detective for every Stanger.


Jalal:- It's ok aunty ..😅


Raj:- you people get fresh , I'll serve the dinner soon , you maybe hungry


Abdul:- very 😋


Raj signals to Sanjay and sunny for showing the guest their rooms and Ahmed also takes leave.


Sanjay and sunny show them their rooms which are on first floor.


Abrar:- why separate rooms?


Abdul:- yes . We can manage in one room


Sanjay:- why will you manage when we have plenty of rooms


Sunny: - we will be waiting for you at dinning table..


And both leaves


Jalal:- It will take some time for us to mix with them..


And they all gets fresh up and move down the stairs where everyone is waiting for them.After trio joined them ,they start having dinner when jalal praises foods.


Raj:- Learn something from them Mr.Sunny Malhotra.(sunny made a what ever look)


Abdul:- Did you cook all of these?


Nilam:- yes. Raj loves cooking.


Abrar:- oh..! And Abdul loves eating.! 😂


And their chatter goes on with their introductions,hobbies, routine and teasing sessions ..everyone moves towards their rooms after wishing each other good night.!!

Edited by zynahsiddiqi956 - 5 years ago
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part 8


closer to dreams is always a beautiful thing in life.!

Who knows where destiny lies.?

You never know if life gives you another chance. A chance for destiny, A chance to fulfill your dreams, A chance to get the lost ones back.

And who knows a single chance can connect three lost lives together forever..

There is always a hope to get a chance


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Jalal awakes on hearing hustle bustle coming from downstairs and soon gets fresh and moves downstairs to see what's happening and on his way he meets Abrar and Abdul who too came down to see the reason for hustle bustle..

Abrar:- what's going on?

Abdul:- I don't know..

Abrar:- yesterday night everything was normal and now

Nilam while setting cushions on sofa :- billo did u check their room? Is everything perfect ? Hope u didn't miss anything..

Raj who sees jalal , Abdul , Abrar calls them :- hey boys . come and help me here..

Jalal:- how can we help you uncle?

Raj :- just taste these cheese sandwiches and Popiah (Nyonah fresh spring rolls made from thin wrappers stuffed with turnip, jicama, bean sprouts, fried tofu, shredded carrots, and many other fillings depending on the individual vendor. The filling is usually grated and steamed, and the popiah is dressed with a sweet-spicy bean sauce made of soy sauce and hoisin sauce and an optional chilli paste. This is served fresh, not fried which makes it a healthy snack.) I guess I have added extra salt.!

Abdul :- lemme check ..Ummm Yummy uncle..its superb..can I have one ??

Raj:- yea sure.

Raj gets busy wid cooking..

Jalal:- I guess someone is going to come.

Sanjay and sunny:- Someone??

Sanjay:- Its our happiness which was away from us for 3 days

Sunny:- And lil trouble too..

Sanjay :- shut up sunny..

Nilam:- you both will you help me or not??

SS:- yes mom .. And goes from there.

Abrar :- I guess its someone special.

Abdul:- Hmm..I am sleepy ,bye guys.

Jalal while holding Abdul's collar :- we are not here to sleep or eat..we are here to visit and enjoy Malaysia so don't spoil the fun and by the way, you people were the one that convince me for a tour , so stop wasting time in sleeping...

Abdul:- OK..but first let me get ready and then we will leave..


*************


At airport a woman consoling her child and trying to give a suitable reply to his questions.

Ahan:- Mumma you won't come with me??

Priya:- No baby actually Mumma have some work to do ..so I will finish my work and return Singapore.

Ahan:- then I will also stay with you.

Priya:- No. Look baby Nillu Ma ,Raj Pa and all are waiting for you .If you don't go they will get upset ..Do you want to make them upset??

Ahan:- No ,but you will not be with me.!?

And starts crying.

Priya:- No my dear who said I am not with you. see now you go with Annu Auntie and I will finish my work quickly and come to Ahan till night. so if you don't leave now how will Mumma go to work and how will Mumma come back to Ahan??

Ahan:- OK. But come fast..

Priya:- yes my love ..I will be with you at night.

Priya:- Annu do call me when you reach.OK

Annu:- yes Priya ..

Priya:- take care.

Annu:- you too.

Ahan:- bye Mumma.

Priya:- bye sweetie.

And somehow Priya sends Ahan with annu to her family.


****************


Abdul:- So where shall we start from?

Abdul:- I guess we should start from Kuala Lumpur International Airport. Heard a lot about it , What say?

Jalal:- I agree because Kuala Lumpur International Airport is Malaysia's main international airport and one of the major airports in South East Asia and ...

Abrar:- OK OK ..now don't start your geography class here..

Jalal:- fine let's go.


********


At Malhotra Mansion


Nilam:- Did these two reach airport ? I hope they will reach there on time.

Raj:- Relax Nilu they will reach.

Nilam:- why the hell did you send Sanjay and sunny to pick them. If they did not reach on time? If they..

Raj :- Uff.! Will you be quite for sometime ?actually I was so excited that Priya and Ahan will come today and out of excitement I didn't sleep well at night and now I cannot drive in this sleepy state so I had to send those two. but don't worry these two will reach airport at time , pick them and be back home safely..

Nilam:- Hmm..I hope ..

.

At airport

Annu:- Ahan hold my hand tightly so that we don't get separate. OK?

Ahan:- yes auntie .

Normally airport will be little free but today there were some VIP at airport due to which the airport was full of people and have lots of passengers and with their pushes Annu and Ahan got separated..


*******************************


(Trio at airport)


Abdul:- did u try ice cream sandwich? It was superb .and this ice cream rolls are yummy.

Abrar:- Oh God .The time we left the mansion your mouth is busy with something or the other. Huhh..and throws ice cream rolls from abdul's hand.

Abdul:- how dare you.

Jalal:- guys will you stop it.? We are here to enjoy not to fight.

Abdul:- fine but tell him to stay away from my food.

Abrar:- even I am not interested.

Jalal:- God mercy on my soul.


*********************


Ahan who is running in search of his aunt slips into ice cream rolls on floor and his entire face was covered with ice cream and he was about to slip on the stairs when at nick of time jalal caught Ahan and saved him.

Jalal:- Hey kid you should be careful .you should not run like this .and were are your parents?

Ahan:- I lost. My aunt I no find.. (and cries.)

Jalal affectionately :- Sshh.! OK OK don't cry we will help you find your aunt

Abrar and Abdul:- yes, let's search them.

All 4 of them moved down toward departure area where Ahan sees Annu and runs to her and annu who see Ahan gets happy and took him with her and the duo forgets about jalal and his gang..

Abdul:- what a sweet kid ..

Abrar:- yeah..

Jalal to himself:- I wish I had kid like him..


**********************


Annu:- Ohho Ahan where were u? I was so tensed and what have you done to your face?

and clean ahan's face with handkerchief..

Annu:- common now let's go home. Everyone is waiting for us..


**************

At Malhotra Mansion

Ahan:- Nillu Ma, Raj Pa..Nillu Ma,Raj Pa...

Little boy jumps into his grand Ma's arms

Nilam:- Ahan ..my child I missed you a lot.

Raj:- even me

Ahan:- I mishh you too.

and a sweet family hugs

Raj:- where is Priya ? Sanjay and sunny where is Priya?

Sunny:- actually dad ...pri di...

Raj :- Priya what.??

Sanjay:- dad Priya didn't come with us.

Nilam:- what?? Is everything alright?? Is she fine?? Tell me.

Sanjay:- yes mom everything is fine ..when we reached airport we found Ahan with annu and Priya called us to inform that she had send Ahan with annu . she had to stay there because of urgent meeting but she will be back at night.

Nilam:- I pray that she should be fine.

Raj:- relax ..I will be in contact with her. And I assure you that she will be fine..trust me.!

Nilam:- I trust u raj.

And the grandpa and grandson left to enjoy their time with their cupcake

Nilam:- billo get Popiah(spring rolls) Ahan must be hungry..

*********

(8 pm Malhotra mansion)

Abrar:- I am very tired ..right now I want to sleep.

Abdul:- I am tired and hungry too..

Jalal and Abrar:- shutup. Your hungry?? You were the one who was eating throughout the journey and look not only yours but even our pockets are empty now.

Abdul:- Ahem ..may be I ate little extra today..

Jalal and Abrar:- you are weird..

Abdul:- thanks..Hehehe

their conversation continue till they reach Main hall ..

Jalal:- looks like people are searching something or someone. There is something or the other going on here 😪

Come let's see what's going on..

Abrar:- hello aunt

Nilam:- hello boys

Jalal:- Is everything right??

Nilam:- no..my baby is missing..

Abdul:- oh god .kidnap? Did you inform police?

Abrar:- we should immediately search him.

Nilam:- wait .its not a kidnap, missing in sense he is hidding himself.

Jalal:- I don't understand

Nilam:- I am talking about Ahan. He has hidden himself somewhere so that I should not force him to drink milk

Jalal:- ohh..he must be here somewhere .let's search him..and was about to move when he hear a wrapper sound.jalal indicates everyone to be quiet and he follows the sound only to find a cute little theif sitting on his knees and eating chocolate with his chin covered with it.

Ahan felt someone's presence and looked up only to find the same person who save him from falling .

Ahan:- angel😃

Jalal took the little one in his arms , hug and kisses his little chubby cheeks.

Jalal:- so you are Mr. Ahan..the little cupcake of this house.

Ahan who is busy adoring his angel touches his face and in this process jalal's chin got covered with chocolate.. To which jalal smiles .but the reaction on others face seems different.. 😳😳

Raj, Nilam, Sanjay, sunny, Abdul, Abrar were just looking from Ahan to jalal ,jalal to Ahan 😯😧to which confused jalal again looks at Ahan that is when he notice that ahan's features are almost like him, his eyebrows, his brown eyes ( his replica) but his smile remind jalal of someone very special☺️..This was very surprising for all and raj changed the topic by taking Ahan in his hug

Raj:- come ahan let's watch your favourite show..

Nilam:- wait . let him first drink milk ..common kiddo

And they all moved towards their rooms

Abrar:- How can this be possible.?😰

Abdul:- He was almost like you jalal as if he is your son😵

Jalal:- I am not understanding a think from this.

And only one thing can solve this mystery that is time..we need to wait and watch.

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Edited by zynahsiddiqi956 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome update n thnxx for pm me

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Posted: 5 years ago

Update these parts fast so that we read the further story from where u stopped

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Fabulous update n thnxx for pm me

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Posted: 5 years ago

Loved it dear

Awesome part

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome chappies didu 1 to 8

The story till now is full of mystery

Plzz meet jo and ja fast fast😃

Continue it soon😊

Thx 4 pm also didu😊

Sorry 4 late reply didu

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Posted: 5 years ago

amazing appy😆

well written👏

thnx 4 pm

update soon

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Part 1


Painful start😒

He lost her and suffering in her absence😭

And the song is Beautiful, goes well with his emotions👏

And his oath of not sitting on throne, his determination😎

Overall Nice start...👍🏼


Thanks for PM...🤗

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Originally posted by: natashathakur

Fabulous update n thnxx for pm me


Thankyou dear 😊💚

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