|SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 2| : CHAT CLUB (Note pg. 132 💌) - Page 110

Originally posted by: Home786

Have you seen previous pages..

I have seen them now and I really shunned to see the suggestions......

Whenever you have good idea, post it here behen. It will help us to improve a lot.

@Bold- 🤣

Originally posted by: MishtiNew

@Bold- 🤣

I am really confused for a moment that are you people talking about the same story??

I am so confused how to progress the story re?? What's going on here....

Story ko Romantic Thriller bana diya tum logon ne...

Drunken Pooja to Anmol die...😲

I am obliged see you people creativity...!!!

Now I need to sit back and think for the story progression... 😆

Originally posted by: Home786

Kahaan se kahaan pahunch gaye tum log re Mishtu..😆

I am really confused for a moment that are you people talking about the same story??

I am so confused how to progress the story re?? What's going on here....

Story ko Romantic Thriller bana diya tum logon ne...

Drunken Pooja to Anmol die...😲

I am obliged see you people creativity...!!!

Now I need to sit back and think for the story progression... 😆

🤣

Aaram se popcorn Khao aur padho humare rants 🤣

Originally posted by: MishtiNew

🤣

Aaram se popcorn Khao aur padho humare rants 🤣

Tum log ideas story ke liye suggest kar rahe thei ya mujhe confused karne ki saazish hai.. 🤣

Originally posted by: Home786

Behen tumhein hansi aa rahi hai?

Tum log ideas story ke liye suggest kar rahe thei ya mujhe confused karne ki saazish hai.. 🤣

Both 😎

Originally posted by: MishtiNew

Both 😎

Confused kar diya tum logon ne mujhe.

Especially Nithya Akka ke aise scenes suggest kiye hai.. 🤣

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Bye everyone.

Catch you later.

Pareshan kar diya aapne mujhe. 🤔

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

As I read our story with group of people.

I could see how people see the story.

1. Like Abir turns saviour of Pooja all time.

2. In Amritsar, you slide her precious ring in her fingers hinting that her preciousness will only be adored by Abir.

3. Abir was the person whom she spoke. He is the person to break her silence too.

4. Before Anmol, Abir is the person to see and analyze her trauma.

5. Abir is the person who made Pooja fierce and strong.

6. She is the girl who gave it back to Abir without any fear.

7. Pooja is Abir's weakness.

8. Unintentionally, Abir's child is Pooja's happiness and solace.

9. Pooja will turn Abir's hate towards her child into love.

10. They both have a habit of speaking to themselves rather than opening up.

11. In teej, they wore same color attires.

12. Pooja changed Abir into soft and He turned Her fierce. They can change each other unknowingly.

Hence we readers connect each and every symbolism. Many are ardent shippers of #JaBir and rooting for more and more JaBir scenes.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

I never thought so symbolically of Abir and Pooja scenes. It’s interesting. I always just thought about it as Abir’s feelings for Pooja growing more stronger making him do unthinkable thing.

I am always debating to myself how bad and negative do I want to make Abir’s character.

I never thought Abir and Pooja would get such fan following and the last proper nice conversation they had was like the time they first wen to Amritsar. After that, it all went down with that confession. I expected many people to ship Anmol and Pooja, they have such a nice empowering story. Shaheen and Mishtu really need to add lots of cute scenes for them.

I am sure that this week the story will become much more intriguing and interesting. I like this new system that we made.

# JaBir what's this....??

I never thought this simple story will go to such extent.

I am confused now how to proceed?

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Oh crazy fans are the best.

Shaheeb will be happy. More creative heads workin together = More better story.

But like from what you’ve written for your wishlist, shayad woh JaBir ko hi main couple banade