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Posted: 5 years ago

Hello everyone...🤗

There's a kind suggestion for all participants and viewers....!!


📍Please post the scenes you wish to see in the upcoming weak.


📍 You can post all kinds of scenes from different genre.


📍Whenever any idea pop up in your mind post it here between Monday to Wednesday night.


📍We will shortlist all the scenes on Thursday and will together discuss and choose the scenes for the Week.


📍The precap will have your suggested scenes sequenced according to the progression of the story.


📍Your ideas, suggestion matters to give a good highlight to readers.


📍You can suggest any scenes to any character. It's doesn't mean that you should suggest only your scenes rather you can post ideas and scenes for other characters too..


📍Try to post the scenes as the characters were enacting not as always they're speaking to themselves as per feedback .


📍Emotional, Intense, Passionate, Villainous, Dramatic, Sadistic and Happy and cute scenes are welcomed....




Waiting for your ideas and suggestions. Ignition of many talented stars will make a meteorite which will hit hard to all the loyal readers and viewers......!!!!



Edited by Home786 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

We want to see Abir in action mode than speaking to himself.

Why do I feel all the characters in the story are speaking to themselves rather than enactments.

The characters always speaks to themselves like typical Ekta vamps. Especially Pooja and Abir characters have the policy to speak to themselves.

They're so much similar.

Hence I ship Pooja and Abir.


Aaaaaaaaah, so that’s the problem. That must be why our story is moving so slowly.


Don’t worry. I will start my action mode soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Hello everyone...🤗

There's a kind suggestion for all participants and viewers....!!


📍Please post the scenes you wish to see in the upcoming weak.


📍 You can post all kinds of scenes from different genre.


📍Whenever any idea pop up in your mind post it here between Monday to Wednesday night.


📍We will shortlist all the scenes on Thursday and will together discuss and choose the scenes for the Week.


📍The precap will have your suggested scenes sequenced according to the progression of the story.


📍Your ideas, suggestion matters to give a good highlight to readers.


📍You can suggest any scenes to any character. It's doesn't mean that you should suggest only your scenes rather you can post ideas and scenes for other characters too..


📍Try to post the scenes as the characters were enacting not as always they're speaking to themselves as per feedback .


📍Emotional, Intense, Passionate, Villainous, Dramatic, Sadistic and Happy and cute scenes are welcomed....




Waiting for your ideas and suggestions. Ignition of many talented stars will make a meteorite which will hit hard to all the loyal readers and viewers......!!!!




Oh I have so many.


1. Anmol and Anamika should go out and talk to themselves in peace


2. Vasundhara and Pooja should have a emotional talk


3. Abir should start his misuse of Aditi to get Pooja. Aditi should be the link between Abir and Pooja.


4. Pooja should eventually warm up towards Abir (not now but later on in the story).


5. Anamika should come stay in the house for few days. (Idk how but that should happen)


6. Sahil and Pooja should have a good conversation.


7. Pooja will get jealous of Anamika when she sees her with Anmol


8. Aditi can start calling Pooja Mama. It would be cute.


This is not a suggestion for the next episode but it is for pooja’s.


I know that she has been through a lot and all the trauma’s she has faced and I don’t want to disrespect that. But when in every episode she goes on about how she doesn’t deserve anything, it seems like self-pity. To me, it’s kinda not needed to make her question everything she deserves. Maybe in the next episodes, show her as being more grateful for what she has now.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


Oh I have so many.


1. Anmol and Anamika should go out and talk to themselves in peace


2. Vasundhara and Pooja should have a emotional talk


3. Abir should start his misuse of Aditi to get Pooja. Aditi should be the link between Abir and Pooja.


4. Pooja should eventually warm up towards Abir (not now but later on in the story).


5. Anamika should come stay in the house for few days. (Idk how but that should happen)


6. Sahil and Pooja should have a good conversation.


7. Pooja will get jealous of Anamika when she sees her with Anmol


8. Aditi can start calling Pooja Mama. It would be cute.


This is not a suggestion for the next episode but it is for pooja’s.


I know that she has been through a lot and all the trauma’s she has faced and I don’t want to disrespect that. But when in every episode she goes on about how she doesn’t deserve anything, it seems like self-pity. To me, it’s kinda not needed to make her question everything she deserves. Maybe in the next episodes, show her as being more grateful for what she has now.

Hi, Srishti.

You will see different Pooja from this week for sure...

Your suggestions will definitely be incorporated in the upcoming story...


Whenever you have idea pop up, share here...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Hello everyone...🤗

There's a kind suggestion for all participants and viewers....!!


📍Please post the scenes you wish to see in the upcoming weak.


📍 You can post all kinds of scenes from different genre.


📍Whenever any idea pop up in your mind post it here between Monday to Wednesday night.


📍We will shortlist all the scenes on Thursday and will together discuss and choose the scenes for the Week.


📍The precap will have your suggested scenes sequenced according to the progression of the story.


📍Your ideas, suggestion matters to give a good highlight to readers.


📍You can suggest any scenes to any character. It's doesn't mean that you should suggest only your scenes rather you can post ideas and scenes for other characters too..


📍Try to post the scenes as the characters were enacting not as always they're speaking to themselves as per feedback .


📍Emotional, Intense, Passionate, Villainous, Dramatic, Sadistic and Happy and cute scenes are welcomed....




Waiting for your ideas and suggestions. Ignition of many talented stars will make a meteorite which will hit hard to all the loyal readers and viewers......!!!!



Then I have more scenes.


1. Abir's emotional breakdown before Pooja revealing his past.


2. Pooja to save Abir from Chandelier falling on him.


3. Seeing Pooja's hidden talent, Anmol insist Pooja to join in Abir's Business work.


4. Abir and Pooja to get stuck in landslide where they have to spend whole night in jungle unintentionally ( typical ekta shows) . Anmol worrying for both in home helplessly.


5. Abir to turn savior of Pooja again and again hinting symbolism.


6. Aditi to be the cupid of Abir and Pooja.


7. The cute moments between Anmol and Pooja


8. Anamika's emotional dejection. Her Villanova take an another turn.


9. Anmol started falling for Pooja which unease Abir and Anamika.


10. Anamika and Pooja to be good friends in future.


11. Business trip of Abir and Pooja.


12. Abir should do something out of line with Pooja which will make her to tell everything to Anmol. But Anmol should distrust her.


13. Tashn between Brothers.


14. Anmol confession to Pooja regarding his love.


15 . Bua's bond with Pooja.


16. Drunken Pooja where Anamika will spike his drink.


17. Pooja supporting Anmol.


18. Anamika and Pooja confrontation scenes.


19. Anmol's breakdown knowing his brother's love for Pooja.


20. Anmol to sacrifice his love for brother which bothers Pooja.


Many more to add in the list.

Edited by RoyalDreams97 - 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


Aaaaaaaaah, so that’s the problem. That must be why our story is moving so slowly.


Don’t worry. I will start my action mode soon.

Then it is done deal.

Rooting for more Abir and Pooja scenes.

I am a Abir lover.

I am a Abir and Pooja shipper like others.

I have posted my wish list of scenes being a " # JaBir " Lover.

Tell me how is it.

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Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Then it is done deal.

Rooting for more Abir and Pooja scenes.

I am a Abir lover.

I am a Abir and Pooja shipper like others.

I have posted my wish list of scenes being a " # JaBir " Lover.

Tell me how is it.


I saw it Nithya and I can see how much of a #Jabir fan you are smiley36


All the scene you suggested were really good. At first I was kind of shocked that more than half of your suggestions were about Pooja and Abir.


I was like where is Anmol?


But they will really help the story move on in a more interesting way. I kind of feel like the readers and the participants need something Interesting going on. While the episodes go on, I kind of see an lack of interest in some of the participants. I don’t blame them, our story is really slow and kind of boring rn. But if we do include all your scenes or most, it will be really interesting to read.


About Vasundhara, oh my god, I so want her and Pooja to have a really emotional and heartfelt conversation. Pooja can talk about her sufferings with you and you can tell her about your struggle of talking care of Abir, Anmol, and Arushi all by yourself. It would be such a good scene to see smiley27

Edited by AnonymouslyS - 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


I saw it Nithya and I can see how much of a #Jabir fan you are smiley36


All the scene you suggested were really good. At first I was kind of shocked that more than half of your suggestions were about Pooja and Abir.


I was like where is Anmol?


But they will really help the story move on in a more interesting way. I kind of feel like the readers and the participants need something Interesting going on. While the episodes go on, I kind of see an lack of interest in some of the participants. I don’t blame them, our story is really slow and kind of boring rn. But if we do include all your scenes or most, it will be really interesting to read.


About Vasundhara, oh my god, I so want her and Pooja to have a really emotional and heartfelt conversation. Pooja can talk about her sufferings with you and you can tell her about your struggle of talking care of Abir, Anmol, and Arushi all by yourself. It would be such a good scene to see smiley27

It's not only me but there are many many Abir fans and # JaBir shippers. Many are rooting for JaBir scene. In fact, some only peep in to read their scenes. JaBir has created an impact from the first scene where Abir stops Pooja from falling in the epi 1. It is eveident and symbolic that he is a saviour of Pooja all time. Again when he save Her from fire. Want more scenes of them.

Yes the story is going very slow.

But we can add these kind of scenes to create a hype among many ardent readers.

Pooja and Bua's bond is a good content.

You too suggest some scenes for JaBir and Anmol and Pooja too.

Edited by RoyalDreams97 - 5 years ago
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Hey everyone Please suggest some interesting scenes to make a hype and enthusiasm among ardent readers. The story should now move from boring sad drama to thrill, love and attractive content.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

It's not only me but there are many many Abir fans and # JaBir shippers. Many are rooting for JaBir scene. In fact, some only peep in to read their scenes. JaBir has created an impact from the first scene where Abir stops Pooja from falling in epi 1. It is eveident and symbolic that he is a saviour of Pooja all time. Again when he save from fire. Want more scenes of them.

Yes the story is going very slow.

But we can add these kind of scenes to create a hype among many ardent readers.

Pooja and Bua's bond is a good content.

You too suggest some scenes for JaBir and Anmol and Pooja too.


I never thought so symbolically of Abir and Pooja scenes. It’s interesting. I always just thought about it as Abir’s feelings for Pooja growing more stronger making him do unthinkable thing.


I am always debating to myself how bad and negative do I want to make Abir’s character.


I never thought Abir and Pooja would get such fan following and the last proper nice conversation they had was like the time they first wen to Amritsar. After that, it all went down with that confession. I expected many people to ship Anmol and Pooja, they have such a nice empowering story. Shaheen and Mishtu really need to add lots of cute scenes for them.


I am sure that this week the story will become much more intriguing and interesting. I like this new system that we made.

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