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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Arey! Trust me yaar daily I am pmed them regarding.

But it seems Briti is busy with other works.

And sharmi who is playing Aditi role is suffering from fever unable to make it.

In fact, daily I am editing precap and their scenes due to their last minutee absence....

I have set a very different story of Arushi and Sahil but didn't work out due their absence since day 1...


Any suggestions regarding how can we make it.?

No yaar, you're not rude. In fact I am happy that you're really interested in our activity...


Can you give me an outline of Arushi and Sahil’s story as you planned earlier?


Aditi’s character’s dialouges and actions can always be shown by us like how you were doing earlier to show your bonding with Aditi. However, it would be good to see Aditi’s own perspectives on the situations. Sharmi, in the first episode, was really good at describing Aditi’s loneliness and longing for love. I would have loved to seen more of her.


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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

I have many things to say yaar

I'll point out it later but one thing I want to say Anami needs a strong support system in Singhania family for her plottings. Not necessarily she must be aware of Anami's intentions but should be supportive of her.

One more thing Anmol is completely indifferent towards Anami. It's not giving childhood friendship vibes

And we need more scenes of Sahil and Arushi here I guess.

Without Arushi's character, we cannot show Sahil and her story. But the one who play's Arushi is busy with some other important commitments so she couldn't make it out on time... It's really a potential story which can be endeavored beautifully but things are not working out exactly due to absence.... Arushi would have been a great support system to Anamika as Briti potrayed her so strongly and wonderfully... She would have made beautiful jodi with Anamika in creating all kinds of chaos and dramas which will make Singhania's to bow down. But.......



@bold I feeled that... But it depends upon the person who play's the role and how is he progressing his role...


I am really upset that this time too things didn't work out properly as planned..

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

I have many things to say yaar

I'll point out it later but one thing I want to say Anami needs a strong support system in Singhania family for her plottings. Not necessarily she must be aware of Anami's intentions but should be supportive of her.

One more thing Anmol is completely indifferent towards Anami. It's not giving childhood friendship vibes

And we need more scenes of Sahil and Arushi here I guess.


I agree with everyone that you’ve said Prit. At first, the support system was going to Ben Arushi but since Briti has been away for some work, we really do need to find a support system for you. I thougt Vasundhara could have been one of them.


I never realized that Anmol and Anami was missing that childhood friend vibes and now that you have pointed it out, I can see it. First of, Anmol should have a very heartfelt conversation with Anami and maybe a sorry for his indifference towards her lately.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Without Arushi's character, we cannot show Sahil and her story. But the one who play's Arushi is busy with some other important commitments so she couldn't make it out on time... It's really a potential story which can be endeavored beautifully but things are not working out exactly due to absence.... Arushi would have been a great support system to Anamika as Briti potrayed her so strongly and wonderfully... She would have made beautiful jodi with Anamika in creating all kinds of chaos and dramas which will make Singhania's to bow down. But.......



@bold I feeled that... But it depends upon the person who play's the role and how is he progressing his role...


I am really upset that this time too things didn't work out properly as planned..


Don’t be too upset Shaheen. I am sure the activity will get better as time goes by and we realize the things that needs improvement.


Tbh, the only problem I see with this story is not many people participating. Unlike our old serial, the characters from this serial heavily depend on each other to take the story forward. All their stories are somehow connected so if even one character goes missing for a while, the whole story will kind of pause.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


Can you give me an outline of Arushi and Sahil’s story as you planned earlier?


Aditi’s character’s dialouges and actions can always be shown by us like how you were doing earlier to show your bonding with Aditi. However, it would be good to see Aditi’s own perspectives on the situations. Sharmi, in the first episode, was really good at describing Aditi’s loneliness and longing for love. I would have loved to seen more of her.


See, Sahil is caring, loyal and doting husband who loves her wife but Arushi is opposite. She never matters any relationship and loyalty in marriage as she considers Him as good for nothing. Sahil with his calm and loving will slowly change her perspectives that only appearance, money, reputation etc., is not everything to lead a good life... Love and understanding matters for a happy life....

She will understand that when her brother who is rich married a poor girl and set off different example.

She will do something illogical which will make her lost the position of MP where Sahil will support her strongly without letting her passion down. She will then understand that for a relationship to survive, needs trust, care, love, understanding and respect towards each other rather than background, reputation and money.....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


Don’t be too upset Shaheen. I am sure the activity will get better as time goes by and we realize the things that needs improvement.


Tbh, the only problem I see with this story is not many people participating. Unlike our old serial, the characters from this serial heavily depend on each other to take the story forward. All their stories are somehow connected so if even one character goes missing for a while, the whole story will kind of pause.

Agree Shristi....!!!

Every character is connected with each other here... So, missing one character will loss a charm of story...


Let's hope for the best..

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


I agree with everyone that you’ve said Prit. At first, the support system was going to Ben Arushi but since Briti has been away for some work, we really do need to find a support system for you. I thougt Vasundhara could have been one of them.


I never realized that Anmol and Anami was missing that childhood friend vibes and now that you have pointed it out, I can see it. First of, Anmol should have a very heartfelt conversation with Anami and maybe a sorry for his indifference towards her lately.

Haina Srishti. I am missing that childhood friendship vibes between Anmol and Anami from the very first even they aren't having a proper conversation as a normal friend.

Yeah I too thought Vasundhara would be a support system as Arushi is a powerful person he needs to be other places too. It would be better if Vasundhara would be that support system.

And yes no one literally no one is there for Amami's support.

Last day I tried to talk to Anmol I thought he will talk to Anami to clear misunderstanding but it didn't work out

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

See, Sahil is caring, loyal and doting husband who loves her wife but Arushi is opposite. She never matters any relationship and loyalty in marriage as she considers Him as good for nothing. Sahil with his calm and loving will slowly change her perspectives that only appearance, money, reputation etc., is not everything to lead a good life... Love and understanding matters for a happy life....

She will understand that when her brother who is rich married a poor girl and set off different example.

She will do something illogical which will make her lost the position of MP where Sahil will support her strongly without letting her passion down. She will then understand that for a relationship to survive, needs trust, care, love, understanding and respect towards each other rather than background, reputation and money.....


That is a beautiful story. This serial is gonna have some serious character development going on.


Maybe we can pm Briti regarding the dialouges she would say during certain situations for example, Sahil tries to make her understand that money isn’t everything, then we can tell her dialouges to Bhagu and she will design her dialouges in a way that goes with Arushi’s. Does that make sense? I Ann really bad at explaining.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


That is a beautiful story. This serial is gonna have some serious character development going on.


Maybe we can pm Briti regarding the dialouges she would say during certain situations for example, Sahil tries to make her understand that money isn’t everything, then we can tell her dialouges to Bhagu and she will design her dialouges in a way that goes with Arushi’s. Does that make sense? I Ann really bad at explaining.

But the thing is Bhagu cleared that she will be available only on Saturday and Sunday by 9 to 9.15pm....
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Haina Srishti. I am missing that childhood friendship vibes between Anmol and Anami from the very first even they aren't having a proper conversation as a normal friend.

Yeah I too thought Vasundhara would be a support system as Arushi is a powerful person he needs to be other places too. It would be better if Vasundhara would be that support system.

And yes no one literally no one is there for Amami's support.

Last day I tried to talk to Anmol I thought he will talk to Anami to clear misunderstanding but it didn't work out


You should really talk with Mishti regarding their friendship. That would help your character a lot.


I feel that Anmol’s character needs to be a bit more gentle and patient . He’s a lawyer, but his anger issues doesn’t really go with his profession.


He doesn’t try to talk with anyone to clear things up which I would expect him to do. A lawyer hears all side of the story and then takes the next action, but Anmol seems to be too rushed. Doing everything without a proper plan.


Atleast that’s what I think. Maybe that’s just me.

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