|SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 2| : CHAT CLUB (Note pg. 132 💌) - Page 87

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Thank you.

How am I doing my role?

Feedback please.

You're doing great yaar 👍🏼

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Abir@AnonymouslyS

How am I doing my role?

Feedback please.

I missed you today on the episode.

Abir is my favorite character. I like his attitude, anger, obsession, hardness and tough words.

Please give a powerpack performance tomorrow.

I will definitely give my best tomorrow😎

You are awesome as Vasundhara. I loved you “Itni aag kyun laagi hai ” dialouge. I cracked up when I read it 😆

Yeah, I am trying to get back Abir’s tough and rough behavior that I forgot to show because I was so focused on trying to show his love towards Pooja.

I’ll try to create a balance from now on.

Originally posted by: Home786

Shristi you're joining tomorrow na??

Sunday's episode will be incomplete without you.

See, your role has separate fanbase..

I will join tomorrow but I can’t be sure for how long.

You always ask for suggestions and i usually don’t have any but I think you should make your character Pooja a little bit more trusting and open towards Anmol.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

I will join tomorrow but I can’t be sure for how long.

You always ask for suggestions and i usually don’t have any but I think you should make your character Pooja a little bit more trusting and open towards Anmol.

Yeahh... You will see change in Pooja character from next week..

As per character sketch, it is hard for her to trust anyone based on her past experience...

Slowly, she started to open up and trust Anmol but Anamika again instigated her.. So she step back even to have open talk with him...

To trust him, She needs to knew him more. She needs to spend some time with him to realise that he is really valuable as Gold....

For that Anmol also needs to take a step forward to know her and make her know him. He should make her realize that their marriage is destiny and they're destined to be together...

As per character, Pooja is young to understand the different turmoils of life. It's Anmol responsibility to make her understand the value of the relationship they share....

Slowly you will see the bond of Anmol and Pooja blossoming in a unique and respectable way... Which will irk and unease Abir and make mad, over possessive and obsession will speak head over heels...

The story will take different turns from today's episode...

Next week, there will be Birthday party of both Anmol and Abir on the same day where both will ask something from Pooja which will a big dramatic twist in the story...

Please do feel free to point out new suggestions and opinion to make our story progress in an unique way.... 🤗

Saheen I won't be able to join before 10 Today 😒

Originally posted by: Home786

Shristi, Good Morning...!

Yeahh... You will see change in Pooja character from next week..

As per character sketch, it is hard for her to trust anyone based on her past experience...

Slowly, she started to open up and trust Anmol but Anamika again instigated her.. So she step back even to have open talk with him...

To trust him, She needs to knew him more. She needs to spend some time with him to realise that he is really valuable as Gold....

For that Anmol also needs to take a step forward to know her and make her know him. He should make her realize that their marriage is destiny and they're destined to be together...

As per character, Pooja is young to understand the different turmoils of life. It's Anmol responsibility to make her understand the value of the relationship they share....

Slowly you will see the bond of Anmol and Pooja blossoming in a unique and respectable way... Which will irk and unease Abir and make mad, over possessive and obsession will speak head over heels...

The story will take different turns from today's episode...

Next week, there will be Birthday party of both Anmol and Abir on the same day where both will ask something from Pooja which will a big dramatic twist in the story...

Please do feel free to point out new suggestions and opinion to make our story progress in an unique way.... 🤗

Sahil and Arushi’s relationship I think hasn’t been been properly set up yet. We dont know about their life as much we should know. We know that Sahil is the more mature person who wants the relationship to work but I can’t see it. He sound like he barely even meets her. Arushi we know loves the fashion glamour world and doesn’t care about Sahil but maybe there are things she likes in him but we haven’t got much scenes of her to know her thoughts, how her brain works.

Ik it must be due to the fact that Briti hasn’t been coming lately to the episodes but I just wanted to tell you that Incase you have forgotten about their story (that sounded rude but trust me I was not trying to be rude)

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Sahil and Arushi’s relationship I think hasn’t been been properly set up yet. We dont know about their life as much we should know. We know that Sahil is the more mature person who wants the relationship to work but I can’t see it. He sound like he barely even meets her. Arushi we know loves the fashion glamour world and doesn’t care about Sahil but maybe there are things she likes in him but we haven’t got much scenes of her to know her thoughts, how her brain works.

Ik it must be due to the fact that Briti hasn’t been coming lately to the episodes but I just wanted to tell you that Incase you have forgotten about their story (that sounded rude but trust me I was not trying to be rude)

But it seems Briti is busy with other works.

And sharmi who is playing Aditi role is suffering from fever unable to make it.

In fact, daily I am editing precap and their scenes due to their last minutee absence....

I have set a very different story of Arushi and Sahil but didn't work out due their absence since day 1...

Any suggestions regarding how can we make it.?

No yaar, you're not rude. In fact I am happy that you're really interested in our activity...

Originally posted by: Home786

Arey! Trust me yaar daily I am pmed them regarding.

But it seems Briti is busy with other works.

And sharmi who is playing Aditi role is suffering from fever unable to make it.

In fact, daily I am editing precap and their scenes due to their last minutee absence....

I have set a very different story of Arushi and Sahil but didn't work out due their absence since day 1...

Any suggestions regarding how can we make it.?

No yaar, you're not rude. In fact I am happy that you're really interested in our activity...

VM posted on forum.

Originally posted by: Prit_007

VM posted on forum.

Thank you Prit..

Prit, do you have any suggestions regarding our story progression??? Please put down your views.

Originally posted by: Home786

Aww....

Thank you Prit..

Prit, do you have any suggestions regarding our story progression??? Please put down your views.

I have many things to say yaar

I'll point out it later but one thing I want to say Anami needs a strong support system in Singhania family for her plottings. Not necessarily she must be aware of Anami's intentions but should be supportive of her.

One more thing Anmol is completely indifferent towards Anami. It's not giving childhood friendship vibes

And we need more scenes of Sahil and Arushi here I guess.