Omg this is so amazing read both parts in one go vansh is so relatable and in character..
Sweetheart u r living with lion and getting scared of lizard this dialogue was mast
Omg this is so amazing read both parts in one go vansh is so relatable and in character..
Sweetheart u r living with lion and getting scared of lizard this dialogue was mast
Originally posted by: itsRitzi
Omg this is so amazing read both parts in one go vansh is so relatable and in character..
Sweetheart u r living with lion and getting scared of lizard this dialogue was mast
glad that you liked it 😳
Oh..my.. lovely sweet update.
Just loved it!
Beautifully written..👍🏼
Hayeee....Vansh...
Lizard...oh..my...moi ko bhi dar lagta hai...😆
Chalo something happen between RiAnsh!
Almost kiss...☺️
Thanks for the update Dii...🤗
Thank you so much bushra for liking the update 😳
OMG di this is so good👍🏼
Loved both the updates. VR staying in his character. 😆
Use tum adhoori Patni toh nahi ban sakti also. Pls 😳
Excellent story. Both Part 1 and Part 2.
The dialogues are really coming off the page, and I can visualize the moments. Your Vansh is exactly the Vansh we all wanna see.
Keep it up. Waiting for next part.
Originally posted by: AbhayKapoor12
Please join script writing team and add kiss in drama, with flowers covering the kiss, like they used to do in 70s movies🤣
Completely agree!
This story is better than some of the scenes the CVs are giving us.
Excellent story. Both Part 1 and Part 2.
The dialogues are really coming off the page, and I can visualize the moments. Your Vansh is exactly the Vansh we all wanna see.
Keep it up. Waiting for next part.
Hey, thanks for liking my story😳
Completely agree!
This story is better than some of the scenes the CVs are giving us.
Agreed to the level of infinity
OMG di this is so good👍🏼
Loved both the updates. VR staying in his character. 😆
Use tum adhoori Patni toh nahi ban sakti also. Pls 😳
Thank you so much amekha 😳
Originally posted by: Gaurirane366
Amazing☺️
Thank you so much😳