Suvan Drabble/Short Poem: I Shall Never Tell - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pranushka_723

You're welcome!

The pleasure is all mine😳

BTW read on Sam's post that you are going to post an OS🥳

Can't wait for it


Lavy you're the sweetest!❤️ Very soon I'm gonna adopt you as my sister!🤗


Yes an OS is in works. It's gonna be a bit dark. I hope it turns out well😃


These days I'm getting too many ideas! The other day I had a full blown Suvan scene in my dream and I wrote it down. Let's see if I can post that as well😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bucky


Lavy you're the sweetest!❤️ Very soon I'm gonna adopt you as my sister!🤗


Yes an OS is in works. It's gonna be a bit dark. I hope it turns out well😃


These days I'm getting too many ideas! The other day I had a full blown Suvan scene in my dream and I wrote it down. Let's see if I can post that as well😳

I will happily turn into your sister❤️😳😆


It will be good! I have confidence in your work!👍🏼 And at least I prefer all genres. So even if it's dark I am eagerly gonna read it!😳


I too have so many ideas but time isn't permitting me to write them down😭

Post all you ideas as per your schedule!👍🏼 I'll patiently wait for them!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pranushka_723

I will happily turn into your sister❤️😳😆


It will be good! I have confidence in your work!👍🏼 And at least I prefer all genres. So even if it's dark I am eagerly gonna read it!😳


I too have so many ideas but time isn't permitting me to write them down😭

Post all you ideas as per your schedule!👍🏼 I'll patiently wait for them!


Aww you poor thing😭

I'm gonna wait for your works too!😃

Can't wait to read what's more in store for us!😉

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bucky


Aww you poor thing😭

I'm gonna wait for your works too!😃

Can't wait to read what's more in store for us!😉

Will try to shorten the wait!😳👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Lovely poem. SuVan's feeling penned down beautifully. By the way Zindagi Gulzar hai is also one of my favourite serial.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow Bucky 👏 this was super deep! I loved the parallel lines: For I fear I may lose you and For I fear I may lose myself to you. There is this irony of how they both need each other yet are afraid to admit it. You portrayed it beautifully! Amazing job! ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Veenapain

Lovely poem. SuVan's feeling penned down beautifully. By the way Zindagi Gulzar hai is also one of my favourite serial.


Thank you Veena!🤗

I'm truly touched with the number of lovely responses here! Makes me wanna write more👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: alina.b

Wow Bucky 👏 this was super deep! I loved the parallel lines: For I fear I may lose you and For I fear I may lose myself to you. There is this irony of how they both need each other yet are afraid to admit it. You portrayed it beautifully! Amazing job! ❤️


Thanks Alina🤗❤️ Aww you noticed the parallels too🤗

Honestly I feel Suman is going to be the one more affected in love post-leap cuz of her strong, somewhat firm personality. I would love to see every single gut-wrenching scene on screen.

I hope the show's writers are working out their charm on paper while in lockdown to bring something even more marvelous to the screen!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Back to reading this...it's just fab...

The way your write is magical

It leaves us spell-bound...❤️

The words you use amazingly capture emotions👏👍🏼

It's beautiful❤️

You should post it in the Writer's Forum!

Edited by Pranushka_723 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pranushka_723

Back to reading this...it's just fab...

The way your write is magical

It leaves us spell-bound...❤️

The words you use amazingly capture emotions👏👍🏼

It's beautiful❤️

You should post it in the Writer's Forum!


Ayee thanks Babu!❤️ Makes me so happy! Thanks for re-visiting the thread😳


@b Is that one of the forums on IF? Sorry my ignorance is off the charts


P.S Now that I re-read it, it seems a little cheesy I feel😆

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