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Posted: 5 years ago
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Forgive me for such a late update. But It's finally here! (extra long to make up for making you wait)

Took me quite a few trial and errors to get the mood and style right.

Hope you all like it!😳 WARNING: you may need ice to cool down from the hot n steamy aura😉☺️

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PART 2:(Final)

It was close to midnight by the time the two ajeeb love birds reached home. Before Abir walked through the RV sadan gates, Mishti interrupted

“Abir ruko! Let me down first, we can’t enter the house like this.”

“Kyu? What’s the big deal? I carried you all the way here, it’s only a few more steps to the entrance.” Abir replied, puzzled.

“Arre nahi yaar, what will everyone think? Look at us! I can already hear Ketu’s teasing ridicules for the rest of the week. Aur maa, naanu, maasi?...no no way. Put me down right now!” she demanded.

“Isme kya sharm? Tum meri wife ho, and you’re injured." Abir continued to butter up, "So as a good husband it’s my duty to take care of you…” He then, grabbed her hands tighter around his neck and pulled them together securely, and asserted, “aur mera haq bhi angry chorni.”

“Offo!”Mishti winced, as she rubbed her forehead after colliding with Abir. “Pagal ho kya Abir!?” she said, giving her husband a small tap at the back of his head.

“Whaat?” Abir groaned. “Besides, I’m sure no one’s going to be up this late. Sab soh rahe honge.”

“Nahi Abir. I’m sure they’ll be up waiting to congratulate you for your award n all. Come on, please just let me down,“ she requested one more time.

“Okay fine.” Abir gently placed her on the ground and they walked together towards the house. As soon as they opened the front door, everyone eagerly waiting, immediately rushed to the couple. Abir noticed his wife staring back at him with those I told you so eyes, but then embarrassingly chuckled together thinking about their potential alternative entry.

“Congratulations bhai. You deserve this award and many more accolades for the future,” Kunal proudly hugged his brother.

“Ofcourse bro! mera naati jo hai,” naanu gloated. Abir bent down to touch his grandfather’s feet “God bless you Abir beta.”

Meenu and Parul maasi both hugged and congratulated their beloved son. “Aur kitna handsome lag raha hai mera beta,” Meenu praised.


--Abir's suit-- (Ignore Shah's rocking specs😉😎)



“Haan benba sach mein, nazar na lage,” Parul said.

Ketu started asking about the party and celebrations and everyone became busy taking pictures with the man of the hour. Mishti decided this was the best time and so she secretly escaped the crowd and quickly hurried upstairs.

A little while later, everyone began to feel tired and decided to retire for the night. “Arre Mishti bhabhi ajaanak kahan gayi? Ketu asked.

“She must have gone upstairs to change Ketu. It’s been a long night, and her feet were paining on our walk back home. Don’t worry she’ll be fine.” Abir replied.

Everyone agreed and bid each other a goodnight and returned to their rooms.


Abir gently opened the doors to his room, trying not make any sound and carefully tip-toed inside. Expecting to see his wife sound asleep after a long tiring night, he glanced towards the bed. However, he was surprised to not only see an empty bed but also surrounded by pretty glowing fairy lights. Abir continued to look around his bedroom and found scented candles lit up and the curtains swaying softly to the sweet breeze from the windows. Upon examining the unexpected romantic atmosphere, his eyes still searched for his other-half.

“Mi-sh-“, before he could finish calling out her sweet name, his voice got stuck in his throat. He couldn’t believe the sight his eyes laid on at the top of the stairs. On any other day, even just a small glimpse of her was enough to bestow sukoon to his heart. But right now, he couldn’t tell whether his heart had completely stopped or was fluttering like 100 butterflies. Abir just couldn’t believe that the person standing at the top of his bedroom, was his wife, his angry chorni.

-Mishti's dress-😳



'Mujhe nahi pata tha ki angry chorni yeh bhi kar sakti hai' Abir said to himself.

Meanwhile Mishti herself who felt like she had a stomach full of fluttering butterflies, soon began to covertly smile to herself, satisfied with her husband's observed reaction.

She then slowly cat-walked down the stairs, and playfully questioned;

“main kya Shah Rukh Khan hu?

“Aishwariya rai hu?

“Katrina kaif hu?”

But mr. A.i.b.e.r here, was too mesmerised to even respond to her questions. Halting at a step, she leaned in equalling her height to his and continued her game, whispering “tho itni hairan (shocked) kyu ho?” She teasingly closed her husband’s dropped jaw.

With Abir still remaining silently lost in her sparkling eyes, and enchanting beauty, Mishti snapped her fingers to wake him out of his trance. Unable to form proper words, “Mi-mish…Mishti tum..uhm..yeh…k-kya?” stuttered.

“Kyun,achchi nahi lagi kya?" she asked nudging him. "If my husband can graciously dedicate his rightful award to his wife in front hundreds of people, tho kuch tho return gift milni chaiyye haina?”

Abir timidly smiled, and grabbed her hands securing them around his neck. Bouncing his eyebrows, “Tho what’s the plan madam? Tumhari irradhe tho kuch teekh nahi lag rahi hai?”, he smirked.

Instead of replying, she simply turned him away and immediately pulled him closer. Before Abir could say anything, Mishti whispered--

“Shhhh, no more questions just wait and watch ajeeb rajvansh.” The tender warm breath against his ear, sent shivers down his back. And the things she did next, only continued to make his heart flutter. As she began to gently caress his shoulders she confessed, “Do you have any idea how handsome you look in this suit?” Gradually pulling the blazer down his shoulders, Abir felt a sparkling tingle with her soft lips on his neck. “And your cologne is so intoxicating," nuzzling herself into his soft wavy hair, "You have no idea how hard it was to hold myself back during that piggy-back ride home.” Abir let out a quiet moan and tries to grab hold of her arms around his neck, alas he forgets how quick his little wifey is.

Tossing his coat away, Mishti walks down the remaining stairs, holding Abir’s intense gaze with hers. Music begins to play from the surrounding speakers, with the click of a button from her phone.

*A/N - As a tamilian, I ofcourse prefer the original tamil song version❤️. But if you prefer the hindi version, I've linked it below too*

(Tamil) - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x12WuPDlklw

(Hindi) - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bzv2EvgH3SY

She holds out her left hand adorably, asking for a dance. Abir wastes no time and grabs her delicate hand, interlocking fingers ready for their duet. Guiding his other hand to her hip, she takes a step closer towards him, but Abir tugs her even closer and slides his arm around her entire waist. Swaying to the serene flutes, they begin dancing together around the bedroom.

Zara zara behekta hai, mehekta hai

Aaj toh mera tan badan

Main pyaasi hoon

Mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein

He gently twirls her out for spin….

Hai meri kasam tujhko sanam

Door kahin na jaa

Yeh doori kehti hai

Paas mere aaja re

And quickly pulls her back in close…

Embracing the love, passion and peace they continue to sway to the romantic track.

Engeum Pogamal Thinam Veetilee Nee Vendum,

Sila Samayam Vilaiyataye,

Un Aadaikkule Nan Vendum


Mishti clenches her hands around his shirt collar, to balance herself as she gently steps on to his feet. Abir holds her securely with both hands around her hips, placing a soft kiss on her forehead. Resting her head against his chest, they continue to feel one with the music.

Vaseegara En Nenjinikka,

Un Pon Madiyil Thoonginal Pothum,

Athe Kanam En Kannuranga,

Mun Jenmangalin Aekkangal Theerum


Soon, Abir opens his eyes to find his wife teasingly biting her lip as she slowly creeps her foot up his right leg. “Ohw! Mishti squeals, instantly feeling a sharp sting from her husband’s playful pinch on her waist. They both share coy smiles at one another.

…Bechain karke mujhko

Mujhse yoon na pher nazar

Roothega na mujhse

Mere saathiyan yeh vaada kar

Tere bina mushkil hai

Jeena mera mere dilbar


Quickly swivelling her around, Abir traps her in a tight back hug, with their hands locked together around her waist. Her heart soon begins to beat rapidly with his tender kisses along her shoulder and neck.

Thirudan Pol Pathungiye Thideer Enru,

Pinnalirunthu Enai Nee Anaipaye Athu Kavithai


In attempt to calm her nerves and fluttering heart she wriggles out of his embrace and starts running up the stairs. But Abir manages to grab hold of her hand and pulls her, losing her balance she falls straight into his safe arms. Melting under his loving gaze, Mishti hides her face shyly in his chest and wraps her hands around his neck.

Vaseegara En Nenjinikka,

Un Pon Madiyil Thoonginal Pathum,

Athey Kanam En Kannuranga,

Mun Jenmangalin Aekkangal Theerum,


Nan Nesipathum Suvasipathum Un Thayaval Thane,

Aengugiren Aengugiren Un Ninaival Nane Nan


As the song gradually lulls into completion, Abir takes his wife towards their bed and puts her down gently amongst the delicate rose petals. Their eyes twinkle together in happiness, whilst keeping their eyes fixed on each other, Mishti sneakily grabs a handful of the petals around her. She playfully tosses them at her husband’s face, answered by a hearty chuckle. Abir responds with the same, and they soon become involved in a little childish game. Having enough of the silly mood, Abir decides to take charge and shift the mood back. So, he pins her down on the bed, with his hands caged around her, whilst slowly locking his fingers around hers. Mishti’s heart continues to race, with Abir peppering kisses from her forehead, down her nose and on to her cheek. Somehow releasing a hand from his grip, she quickly grabs on to his tie. Pulling him close with one tug, she surprises him by going straight for the lips. He instantly feels his body melt with the rising heat between them, as their lips move together like their bodies moved to the music before. He caresses her cheeks with his fingers whilst she runs her hands along his neck and chest. Angry chorni unwraps the tie from his neck and flips him over to get on top of him. She gives him a lil peck on the lips,

“I love you so much Abir.”

Abir reciprocated with a slightly longer kiss.

“I love you too Mishti. Thank you for the lovely surprise.”

Her sweet smile swiftly turned into a puzzled frown. “Who said we were done? The night is still young ajeeb rajvansh,” she winked. She starts to unbutton his shirt.

Raising an eyebrow, Abir smirked “acchaa? Tum tho bilkul Prem chopra, Ranjit saab mood mein ho angry chorni.”

“Shut up, ajeeb rajvansh. Aur haan, Prem Chopra nahi…Emran Hashmi,” Mishti chuckled. Her giggles soon stopped and was replaced with a sharp gasp - with the tender feeling of his fingers tracing her smooth legs up to her thighs. Not to go unnoticed, his other hand glided smoothly across her back and slowly tugged the zip at the back of her dress. Her heart continued to race rapidly and his husky voice only added more trouble,

“Whoever it is…I like it.” He muttered softly. Lightly pricking her soft skin with his stubble, “No one beats meri angry chorni.”

Her face covered in a pink hue, Mishti hid herself blushing timidly in his chest. Abir soothed her nerves with a tender, loving good night kiss on her forehead and safely wrapped themselves together underneath the blanket.


--And that's all she wrote-- leaving the rest for your imagination😉😆

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Thankyou for reading! Please do comment and share your thoughts below, love reading feedback.

I'm not sure if I ended the story properly, I had a couple of other idea, but didn't know what would work. Not very good with writing romance (still learning), so bear with me.


Hope you liked the song selection! It's personally one of my all-time favs❤️

If you haven't listened to the Tamil version, please do try it out🤗

Love you all

xx

Edited by yrhpk_aus - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#32

wow...nandu,..this is so amazing...

mishti and her questions are of improved version..😆

bold and naughty mishti...😉

she completely flattered awwbir...☺️

as u said will definitely my dreams gone wide and im in mishbir land..

common bring me down... warna i cant handle this hotness..

Edited by ruhi19 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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So chweet very nice . 👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Keep writing Nandu. This was amazing! I heard the song in hindi only recently. Used to spend hours listening to vaseegara when it first came out 😊. Can totally imagine MishBir with that song.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Response to part 1 of OS:

This is really too cute and romantic! ❤️

Loved their conversation, Abir's teasing is very apt, true to character 😆

Mishti looking for a stool to reach him is so adorable, thats one of my favorite part abt Mishbir, their height difference, everytime they showed that in previous episodes I would go Awww, 😳.... it reminded me of Jaya standing on a stool and fixing Big B's tie in K3G 😆

Chalo, OS mein toh ek kiss mila, Bechara Awbir kabsey kiss maang raha hai smiley19smiley17😳

Show mein toh kabhie kiss milega hi nahin, sanskari DKP show jo hai 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
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OS last part:

Wow! Phew! Fanning myself....that was steamy ☺️

Can totally imagine the Bold and coquettish Chorni seducing her handsome hubby with her alluring dress and sensuous moves and Abir totally under her spell

Emraan Hashmi 🤣 Love our bold little chorni and her romantic eveready Ajeeb lover 😳

Thanks for getting Mishti out of her night time tents 😆 and giving her a tantalizing night dress. We will never get to see such scenes in the show (not even close) but with your vivid descriptions, our imagination ran wild and fulfilled our desire to see them romance post marriage and celebrate their SR ❤️


PS: Zara zara mehekta hai is one of my most favorite romantic song ever, it goes so well with this scene....Great choice!

Edited by pallavi25 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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This is so sweet and hawt at the same time smiley16smiley16 good going nandu you are becoming a pro in writing certain scenes smiley4smiley2 well done buddy !!

Nothing can stop when angry Chorni takes over smiley42smiley43

Mishti's 3 questions

The catchy teasing song

Ranjit n prem Chopra ke baad ab emraan hashmi 🤣


Keep writing 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovelycolour

So chweet very nice . 👍🏼

Thankyou dear!🤗


Originally posted by: angelfire78

Keep writing Nandu. This was amazing! I heard the song in hindi only recently. Used to spend hours listening to vaseegara when it first came out smiley1. Can totally imagine MishBir with that song.

Thankyou Daya😊👍🏼

I didn't know there was a hindi version until few years ago too. Haan, even now if I hear vaseegra I can't stop re-playing on loop😳

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Originally posted by: pallavi25

Response to part 1 of OS:

This is really too cute and romantic! ❤️

Loved their conversation, Abir's teasing is very apt, true to character 😆

Mishti looking for a stool to reach him is so adorable, thats one of my favorite part abt Mishbir, their height difference, everytime they showed that in previous episodes I would go Awww, 😳.... it reminded me of Jaya standing on a stool and fixing Big B's tie in K3G 😆

Chalo, OS mein toh ek kiss mila, Bechara Awbir kabsey kiss maang raha hai smiley19smiley17😳

Show mein toh kabhie kiss milega hi nahin, sanskari DKP show jo hai 😆

Originally posted by: pallavi25

OS last part:

Wow! Phew! Fanning myself....that was steamy smiley43

Can totally imagine the Bold and coquettish Chorni seducing her handsome hubby with her alluring dress and sensuous moves and Abir totally under her spell smiley42

Emraan Hashmi smiley37 Love our bold little chorni and her romantic eveready Ajeeb lover smiley9

Thanks for getting Mishti out of her night time tents smiley36 and giving her a tantalizing night dress. We will never get to see such scenes in the show (not even close) but with your vivid descriptions, our imagination ran wild and fulfilled our desire to see them romance post marriage and celebrate their SR smiley27

PS: Zara zara mehekta hai is one of my most favorite romantic song ever, it goes so well with this scene....Great choice!

Hi Pallavi, nice to meet you🤗😊

aww thankyou for reading the other OS parts too Glad you enjoyed them.


Hifi! Mishbir's height difference always makes me blush😳 It's just so adorable. Makes me feel good about my short height.😆

Sanskari dkp nahi hai yaar, dono mishbir ek dum sanskaari hai😆😛


hehe it was about time Mishti had a proper make-over with her night suits😉😳

@Bold: aww thankyou for such sweet words❤️ especially with covid now, our imagination is our only source of comfort😆


p.s I know it's such a lovely song - beautiful balance between sensual and subtle romance

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Originally posted by: Onyourface

This is so sweet and hawt at the same time smiley16smiley16 good going nandu you are becoming a pro in writing certain scenes smiley4smiley2 well done buddy !!

Nothing can stop when angry Chorni takes over smiley42smiley43

Mishti's 3 questions

The catchy teasing song

Ranjit n prem Chopra ke baad ab emraan hashmi 🤣


Keep writing 🤗

Uru!!!

aww thankyou! I'm trying my best, still learning👍🏼🤗


Uff no one win over angry chorni!😎


🤣had to bring back the filmy references. And who better than the iconic on-screen kisser?😉😛

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