FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thd#4 Ch-36 Pg-62 4thAug DTRem. P - Page 56

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

kitna bola maine but isko toh sunna hi nahi hai 😑 old age what's that? She plans to kill him in a year's time. 😑

hain?? itna jaldi??

chhan se jo tute koi sapna...

jag soona soona lage..🤪

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

I know 😆 but let him live at least thoda apne pote potiyon n natu naatin ko khila le god mein... then uska bhi time aayega who denies it?? --- wohi toh maine bola but no 😑 usko har roz ek hi raata marna hai 😑 infact she made me improvise on the scene and I had to imagine and give her inputs 😑 and I did 😑

I don't mind if someone else DIES in your story...🤣 --- I mind. I want Meneka & RB. ,😑

But abhi usko sedatives wali neend se jagaao... -- phir se sedative wali neend mein so jayega uth ke hi. Poor thing kitna dard ho raha hoga usko 😭🥺 💔 no khana upar se 🥺😭 ab toh oxygen mask bhi lag gaya 😭 halat raat ko kharab ho gayi 😭💔

@D you got a very sweet DP who are they? Tell me Meneka & RB when they were babies I mean to say from green room 😂

Originally posted by: oa2019

Hey there. It's been a while. Hope all is good 🤗

first of all thank you for updating, i can understand with KSG's version of RB gone how the inspiration must have dwindled.

Dwindled??? It flat lined. It was on ventilator barely surviving the trauma. It was mercilessly killed. 😭

now for the analysis. it was a good chapter. all that introspect was needed, yes I guess, something before she gets into action. Menaka's flashbacks provide us with a different version of RB. I hope the differenciation was visible because it connects to a conversation how Rishabh turned into Mr. Bajaj. So it will only work if there was a slight differnce visible in his two versions. Prerna's introspect allow her to progress as a character & realise her growing feelings for RB & provide the reader with the growth she deserved but never got. it'll be interesting to see whether how she realises these feelings & whether she acts upon them. She has to act now before it's too late and not just because of Menaka but Kukki more importantly and the family she came back to Mumbai for. She needs Rishabh for all that.

loved the fact that you give each character their moment to add to the story & portray their emotions well. Thank you sooo very much :)

the icu scene was written very well. Meneka's feelings are relatable, she loves RB soo much but has made a mistake that he can't seem to forgive. it must be heart-breaking to be soo close to someone you love but not be able to actually be close, the phrase 'so close yet so far' comes to mind. I wish I could sum it up so well myself. Thank you. She was closest in that moment yet soo far. She wouldn't even be there if he was awake.🥺

i know that the end game is PreRish & we have more affinity towards P just because we know her but still heart feels sorry for M.

May be because her love at present is unconditional.

Prerna has also become more independent & strong, loved the conversation she had with her mum. this is the progression a character realistically goes through (shame KZK never allowed her to do this)

KZK ka yaad bhi nahi karna hai mujhe. Prerna ko kya progress karte. Unhone to jo tha woh bhi ajeeb kar diya. But yes here she is way more clear in her mind about Rishabh. Now she can take steps in his direction knowing he could be anything but he is not a bad person as everyone back Calcutta projected

can't wait for the next update. want to hear more of Prerna's conversation with a sleeping RB & her attempts to become friends with him once he awakens.

The conversation where it ends will continue. From a single sided monolgue to proper conversation between two individuals is where we head next.

Thank you soo much for alll your time and for being so patient with me. Appreciate it 🤗

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

wohi toh maine bola but no 😑 usko har roz ek hi raata marna hai 😑 infact she made me improvise on the scene and I had to imagine and give her inputs 😑 and I did 😑

😆 Its like Meenakshi on an mission RB ko mukti do...😆 Bechaare ko dard se mukti do jeevan se nahi...( just kiddin)

I mind. I want Meneka & RB. ,😑

Arey not them re... someone else... Ara is already dead no.. so not her.

But abhi usko sedatives wali neend se jagaao... -- phir se sedative wali neend mein so jayega uth ke hi. Poor thing kitna dard ho raha hoga usko 😭🥺 💔 no khana upar se 🥺😭 ab toh oxygen mask bhi lag gaya 😭 halat raat ko kharab ho gayi 😭💔

Actually you know what hospital mein sab ki haalat raat mein hi kharaab hoti hai.. personal experience so bol rahi hoon...😆

But bechaara kitna sahega...😕

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Itni jaldi kisi ko mat maaro haan uska bhi time aayega... but budhaape tak usko shaanti se jeene do.. struggled for so long itna toh banta hai,,

Budape tak kaise wait karenge. Jeene denge thoda but budapa ka shayad confirm nahi hai 😆

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

RB it is 😑 she has planned to kill him in the most sadistic way 😑

Hahahahaa. Mera sara plan disclose ho gaya..

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

@D you got a very sweet DP who are they? Tell me Meneka & RB when they were babies I mean to say from green room 😂

Aww thank you...😳🤗

Actually they are from the angrybirds movie...

I can say its little RB and little kukki.. from meenakshi's story..❤️

Greenroom wale RB and Menaka were college going adults naah not kiddos..😆

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

itna lamba lamba maine comments after comments diye kabhi yea nahi suna. Koi value hi nahi bachi hamare comments ki huh

Hawww. Ye to galat ho gayaaaa.. is galti ka bharpayi to karni padegi. 🤗

Aur ye na kaho value nahi. Ek line ke comment ke liye poora ka poora story mein change kar deta hai main. Wo kisi ko nahi dikhta 🥺

Itna value hai wo koi na dekh raha 😒

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Budape tak kaise wait karenge. Jeene denge thoda but budapa ka shayad confirm nahi hai 😆

abhi aadha toh cross kar liya hai 35-40 years more till budhapa...😆