Suvan FF: Advices and Apologies *Chpt 11 (Pg.18)|Updt 20/07 *COMPLETED - Page 16

Originally posted by: Bucky

Aww thank you sooooo much Babu!❤️

By this time it must feel like I'm doing a thank you ka jaap but you deserve the most heartfelt thanks🤗

Thank you for liking, praising the story and always taking a moment to stop by. I truly feel over the moon!😳

Mete babu ke liye kuch bhi...❤️🤗

More than being my babu you are a fantastic writer...

I believe in this quote-

You are the amazing writer to this fab story....how can we not compliment you?

You deserve all our praises and maybe more...❤️

Originally posted by: Pranushka_723

Mete babu ke liye kuch bhi...❤️🤗

More than being my babu you are a fantastic writer...

I believe in this quote-

You are the amazing writer to this fab story....how can we not compliment you?

You deserve all our praises and maybe more...❤️

That quote is beautiful

Read chapter 9 now

it was emotional

So Shravan tried to donate blood despite his fear of needles; but poor guy fainted due to fear of needles

it was natural

Aww! Suman's worry for him❤️

Khuranna scolding Bhopali was funny🤣

Suman again felt bad that he pretended

Khuranna saying you could have said truth👍🏼

But loved how Shravan came clear

Loved Suman's outburst

it was much needed

her cries, scolding is good rather_than suppressing emotions

Bhopali is star⭐️

he said right thing- agar woh pretend karta toh abhi bhi karta!

But Suman was already hurt but she recognised his genuine effort ❤️

Kancha❤️

Glad Dadu was not there

Thanks for writing 👍🏼

Read chapter 10 now

It was lovely+beautiful+emotional

So Suman ignored that topic😆

Kancha is so cute! Loved how she told everything to Anjali❤️

Wow

Dinner setting in lawn

Love Anjali

She prepared pasta😋😋

Loved how playfully she made her understood ❤️

Analogy of sense is lost sometimes in relationship also

and her words about Shravan are so affectionate❤️

Teacger experience kaam aaya

Suman ka aisa hai ki kalta pan valat nahi😆

but she understood ❤️ and agreed to talk to him

Kancha so cute

So Shravan is here

Thanks for writing 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Read chapter 9 now

it was emotional

So Shravan tried to donate blood despite his fear of needles; but poor guy fainted due to fear of needles

it was natural

Aww! Suman's worry for him❤️

Khuranna scolding Bhopali was funny🤣

Suman again felt bad that he pretended

Khuranna saying you could have said truth👍🏼

But loved how Shravan came clear

Loved Suman's outburst

it was much needed

her cries, scolding is good rather_than suppressing emotions

Bhopali is star⭐️

he said right thing- agar woh pretend karta toh abhi bhi karta!

But Suman was already hurt but she recognised his genuine effort ❤️

Kancha❤️

Glad Dadu was not there

Thanks for writing 👍🏼

Thank you so much!❤️

Bhagu, you never fail to amaze me with your in depth noticing and analysis! It means the world to a writer honestly!😳

Thank you so much for taking out your time every time to provide me with such lovely insights!🤗

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Read chapter 10 now

It was lovely+beautiful+emotional

So Suman ignored that topic😆

Kancha is so cute! Loved how she told everything to Anjali❤️

Wow

Dinner setting in lawn

Love Anjali

She prepared pasta😋😋

Loved how playfully she made her understood ❤️

Analogy of sense is lost sometimes in relationship also

and her words about Shravan are so affectionate❤️

Teacger experience kaam aaya

Suman ka aisa hai ki kalta pan valat nahi😆

but she understood ❤️ and agreed to talk to him

Kancha so cute

So Shravan is here

Thanks for writing 👍🏼

Aww....no, thanks to you on the contrary! 👍🏼

This comment just goes on to prove how detailed your vision is! Sometimes you point out things that I myself seem to miss! Like I discover my own story in a new light!😳

I really really appreciate it!

P.S Sorry for the late reply. Had got tied up in something! Glad you enjoyed it. Chapter 11 is up😃

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Suman ka aisa hai ki kalta pan valat nahi😆

but she understood ❤️ and agreed to talk to him

You got it!👍🏼😆

Chapter 11 is beautiful

It was lovely+cute+Sweet+emotional

Dadu⭐️, he allowed him to meet Suman

Suman's mom in teacher mode😆

Shravan like disciplined kid🤣

Kancha cutie teased them❤️

Suman's laugh after long time

Glad that now she don't hide her emotions

Finally Shravan told everything without any delay👍🏼

He is so cute, the way he said I know you have forgiven me❤️

Suman said stalker, then he said said nahi observation skills

SuVan in lawn ❤️

He calling her Sumo then correcting it to Suman and she accepted she likes to be called as Sumo❤️

Aww! He donated blood without fear, Suman's worry❤️

Loved their heart to heart conversation👍🏼

Shravan learnt discipline and wants to sleep on time🥳

School scene was

Shravan waving at AniKa😆😎

Aww! Suman gifted him bravery badge❤️

This is such a nice gesture

Shravan on cloud nine

and finally Suman accepted apology

Last scene was so beautiful - Best friend❤️

SuVan 😍😍😍

Thanks for writing 👍🏼

About whole FF:

It was beautiful

Each chapter was detailed, perfect and very well written

You did not let us feel that episodes are not airing due to pandemic and provided perspective what could have happen during blood donation camp and also SuVan's patch up❤️! It felt like episodes of show❤️👍🏼

I could connect very well with emotions

Felt really good to read FF

Thank you for writing it👍🏼

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Chapter 11 is beautiful

It was lovely+cute+Sweet+emotional

Dadu⭐️, he allowed him to meet Suman

Suman's mom in teacher mode😆

Shravan like disciplined kid🤣

Kancha cutie teased them❤️

Suman's laugh after long time

Glad that now she don't hide her emotions

Finally Shravan told everything without any delay👍🏼

He is so cute, the way he said I know you have forgiven me❤️

Suman said stalker, then he said said nahi observation skills

SuVan in lawn ❤️

He calling her Sumo then correcting it to Suman and she accepted she likes to be called as Sumo❤️

Aww! He donated blood without fear, Suman's worry❤️

Loved their heart to heart conversation👍🏼

Shravan learnt discipline and wants to sleep on time🥳

School scene was

Shravan waving at AniKa😆😎

Aww! Suman gifted him bravery badge❤️

This is such a nice gesture

Shravan on cloud nine

and finally Suman accepted apology

Last scene was so beautiful - Best friend❤️

SuVan 😍😍😍

Thanks for writing 👍🏼

Thank you so so much Bhagu!❤️

I'm on cloud nine that you liked the ending!

Your and Lavy's in depth analysis/appreciation will always have my heart!❤️