#2 chahun naa phir kyun naa tujhe,pt 17 on pg 144 updt on 13/8 - Page 80

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Posted: 5 years ago

PART 14

Raman was waiting for ishita since last half an hour and finally said going near to her room-ishita,how much time u r going to take.hume aaj hi date par chalna hai,bachchon ke aane ka wait kar rahi ho kya,make it quick. He was saying when the door get open and she walked out slowly looking down while her cheeks were red with blush.

Raman look at her and got lost in her angelic beauty,she was wearing the blue floor length gown he picked for her along with the jewelleries,while her hair was tied in a messy bun.she has done minimal makeup ,still she was glowing under his gaze.

Ishita-kaisi lag rahi hoon,mujhe bahut ajeeb lag raha hai.pehli baar aisi dress pehni hai ,kaafi awkward lag raha hai,am I looking funny,she was asking when he kept his finger on her mouth and said-shh,kitna bolti ho tum.let me admire u,itni khoobsurat kabhi nahi lagi,yaa phir shayad hamesha se lagti thi ,maine dhyaan hi nahi diya .he said making her blush and she look down smiling.

Raman-yaar,kya kar rahi ho,kya karna chahti ho ??he said and she look at him all confused .

Raman-ek toh itni khoobsurat lag rahi ho ,uss par aise katilana andaaz mein muskuraogi ,toh mera toh qatl hi ho jayega .

Ishita-kuch jyada hi romantic mood mein hai lagta hai .

Raman-bahut mehnat ki hai iss andaaz ke liye,ab yeh mere saath hi rehne wala hai hamesha,waise bhi kaafi time waste kar diya hai maine idhar udhar,toh achcha hoga agar ab main sirf tum par concentrate karun.

Ishita smiled and asked-aap chahte kya hai,Raman??

Raman-bahut jaldi samajh mein aa jayega .come with me.

Ishita-kahan??

Raman-jahan main le chalun,he said and blindfolded her.

Ishita-yeh kya kar rahen hai ,raman.its not needed.main nahi chal paaungi aise .

Raman-no need to walk,I am here to help .he said and picked her in his arms.

Ishita-raman ,Raman,kya kar rahen hai ,stop it.neeche utariye mujhe,it's not needed.

Raman-its needed aur chup raho warna ek hanky tumhare muh par bhi baandh dunga.kitna bolti ho yaar,chup raho warna date cancel.

Ishita nodded and said-achcha ,ab nahi bolungi.

Raman-good,he said and start taking it out to the destination.

Raman was walking and said-waise agar main romantic nahi hoon,toh tum bhi nahi ho.

Ishita-ab maine kya kiya??

Raman-jab koi kisi ko godh mein uthata hai toh kaise behave karte hai yeh bhi nahi pata tumhe.he said irritatedly.

Ishita smiled at his remarks and rested her head on his chest wrapping her arms around him .

Ishita-ab thik hai??

Raman-better,aata sab hai but karna nahi hai.he said making her smile when she asked-hum terrace par kyun jaa rahen hai??

Raman-rain dance karna,maine baarish ka intezaam kiya hai,he said and she said-huh??

Raman-ohho,can't u wait.chup raho and enjoy the moment ,and yes let me enjoy too.he said and she just nodded.

Soon they reached the terrace and he made her stand.

Ishita-ab aankhen kholun??

Raman-bahut jaldi hai naa,wait.let me set the ambience.he said and went while her nostrils got filled with fragrance of flowers.

Ishita-umm,lilies, roses wow, lagta hai kisi ne bahut preparation ki hai.

Raman walked to her and said removing the blindfold-just wait and watch .now open ur eyes slowly.he said and she opened the eyes slowly .

Her lips curved in smile seeing the scene infront of her eyes.the whole terrace was decorated beautifully with red and white balloons,along with red roses and white lilies .a round platform was set in the middle with a table and two chairs with food .

She looked around and said -kya hai yeh ,raman??

Raman-apni biwi ko khush karne ka tareeka,he said and throw colours in the air.

Ishita closed her eyes happily and he started the music.he hold her hand and made her turn.

Raman hugged her from back and asked-may I ??

Ishita nodded and the song started .

Woh rang bhi kya rang hai
Milta na jo tere hoth ke rang se hubahu
Woh khushboo kya khushboo
Thehre na jo teri saanwari zulf ke rubaru

Raman hols her tight and pulled her to him swaying on the song.

Tere aage ye duniya hai pheeki si
Mere bin tu na hogi kisi ki bhi
Ab ye zaahir sar-e-aam hai, elaan hai

Jab tak jahaan mein subah shaam hai
Tab tak mere naam tu
Jab tak jahaan mein mera naam hai
Tab tak mere naam tu (x2)

He picked her in his arms and twirl her around while she was just laughing hard .

Uljhan bhi hoon teri
Uljhan ka hal bhi hoon main
Thoda sa ziddi hoon
Thoda pagal bhi hoon main

Barkha bijli baadal jhoothe
Jhoothi phoolon ki saugatein
Sacchi tu hai saccha main hoon
Sacchi apne dil ki baatein

Dastkhat haathon se haathon pe kar de tu
Naa kar aankhon pe palkon ke parde tu
Kya ye itna bada kaam hai, elaan hai

Jab tak jahaan mein subah shaam hai
Tab tak mere naam tu
Jab tak jahaan mein mera naam hai
Tab tak mere naam tu (x2)

He went on his knees and made her take round around him.

Mere hi ghere mein ghoomegi har pal tu aise
Sooraj ke ghere me rehti hai dharti ye jaise
Paayegi tu khudko na mujhse judaa
Tu hai mera aadha sa hissa sadaa

Tukde kar chaahe khaabon ke tu mere
Tootenge bhi toh rehne hain woh tere
Tujhko bhi toh ye ilhaam hai
Elaan hai…


At last he went on he took her hand in his and kissed it slowly.

Ishita was just looking at him and couldn't stop herself from smiling.she look around happily and said-yeh sab kya hai, Raman??kyun hai,aap kya chahte hai??

Raman-kaha naa,I wanted to surprise u,tumhe khush karna chahta tha,taaki tumse tumhari sabse keemti cheez maang sakun.

Ishita-kya matlab,kya chahiye aapko.

Raman-tum ishita,yeh sab kuch tumhari liye aur tum mere liye chahiye mujhe.u wanted a dreamy proposal naa,ek bahut romantic husband,so here is ur Raman,going down on his knees and proposing u.he said settling on the ground and said holding her hand-hey ishita,I was complete jerk in past and hurt u alot.but now,all I want is u ,coz I can't see beyond u.meri zindagi mein business ke siva kuch aur important hai ,toh woh hai meri family jiska hissa tumhe phir se banana chahta hoon,please naa mat karna .I know I was pathetic in past ,ishita,but now I am changed,changed for good,so say yes and be mine forever again.so miss Ishita iyer,mere do chote chote cute bachchon ki mumma,mujhse dobara shaadi kar lo aur meri bikhri hui zindagi ko dobara maayne de do.trust me this time,only u and our kids will be my priority.baaki sab uske baad,so ishita,please say yes and marry me again.he said sitting on his knees while ishita was surprised hearing his heartfelt confession.

Ishita-raman,yeh aap kya keh rahen hai??

Raman-wahin joh main bahut din se kehna chahta tha,ishita.

Ishita-aap Ankush se jealous ho kar yeh sab kar rahen hai,trust me it's not needed.meri zindagi mein uske liye koi jagah nahi hai.

Raman-its not for him,but for me,for us ,ishita.pichle do din mein main jitna khush utna pichle teen saal mein nahi hua.meri zindagi adhuri thi ,ishita.jisse maayna tumse aur bachchon se milne ke baad mila hai,please mujhse meri khushiyan dobara mat cheeno.now I understood ur value in my life,so please become a part of my life and then my life.i want to make u my life,wanna spend my life with u.tum mein jeena aur tum mein hi kho jaana chahta hoon,please mujhe ek mauka do.

Ishita-aapko kya chahiye,raman.bachchon ke saath rehne ka mauka,trust me I will never stop u from meeting them.please yeh sab mat kijiye,mujhe umeed mat dijiye.

Raman-mujhe sirf adi-rooh nahi,tum bhi chahiye meri zindagi mein.iss baar galti nahi karunga,tumse bahut pyaar karunga .please marry me.he said and she looked away wiping her tears.

Raman-dont cry,I don't wanna see u crying.just say yes once ,ishita .

Ishita-iss baar nahi bolenge naa mujhe??

Raman- nahi,bilkul nahi .

Ishita-mujhe akela nahi karenge naa??

Raman nodded in no .she sat on the floor to his level and said-mera haath nahi chodenge ab??

Raman nodded and opened his arms for her,she just smiled and hugged him tight .

She burst into tears and said-mujhe chod kar nahi jaayenge naa,mujhe aapke bina achcha nahi lagta ,Raman.

Raman wiped her tears and said-kabhi nahi,kabhi bhi tumse dur nahi jaaunga aur naa tumhe jaane dunga.hum ab hamesha saath rahenge,main,tum aur hamare bachche .ok.

Ishita nodded saying ok while he kissed her temple softly yet lovingly while she hide her face into his chest.

That's all for now,enjoy.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Wowww..woowww.woowww....

So so so so.......soooooooo... .amazing update dear.. .

Loved it thoroughly.....

It felt like some movie is running in front of me....

I was so connected with the update...

Thank you for the pm di... Love you

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Posted: 5 years ago

It's so beautiful love the confession part and how ishita cried that part is so emotional yet beautifully described loved everything

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Posted: 5 years ago

Beautiful update

Loved it

Lovely ishra moments

Eagerly waiting for their marriage

Can't wait for next part

Plz continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

A very awesome update the proposal was really beautiful please update next part soon to know more about their date and their parents and kids reaction knowing about their marriage again

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome update 👏

Pls continue soon Pls Pls pls

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Posted: 5 years ago

Superb update

loved it

Update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome...beautiful update di...

Loved raman proposal...

The way he proposed her....

Ishu said yes....happy for ishra...

Continue soon plz

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Posted: 5 years ago

Beautiful update di

Raman lost in ishita’s beauty❣️💖

Udd gaye hosh💖😉

Ishita was so happy and surprised seeing all the arrangements 💞💕

He finally became the romantic husband ishita always dreamt of❣️😍

Loved how he proposed her 🥰💘

Ishita finally said yes!!!!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Loved it

Lets see what happens next

Ty 4 d pm too di

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Posted: 5 years ago

Beautiful update

Thanks for the pm

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