Perfect Picture/scene 7/pg22/13 nov - Page 7

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by khwaishfan


Shot 3

emotional update! beautifully written.

feeling for Geet.

sad seeing what she is going through! 

hate that Maan does not understand her.

how dare he try and slap her?

why must women always be treated like this?

great that Geet stood her ground.

her feelings are well portrayed.

women are expected to adjust but men.....

update soon



Then what we do with man

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by priya_21


HEY FRIENDS TELL ME ONE THING, 

AB HEADING KAISE CHANGE HOTI HAI

EDIT ME HEADING TOH AA HI NHI RHI 


I am unsure... ask suhaaana

Posted: 4 years ago

Too wonderful dear

Every parts all well written

Feeling sad for geet

Maan behavior towards geet are not good

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by Charanjeetkaur


Too wonderful dear

Every parts all well written

Feeling sad for geet

Maan behavior towards geet are not good

Thanks for pm

Watting for update


Thanks dear

Posted: 3 years ago

Hi Priya... update when you can 

Posted: 3 years ago

Shot 4


From where to start , not getting anything to.write 

How can I convey my feelings like this

.

Today am just standing in kitchen while working thinking about love marriage or arrange marriage 

All have two sides 

Love marriage 

Two people meet and fall in love and end marriage happen 

But after marriage family and that man whom you love plays different role.

First family already is angry on you, you snatched his son and make own

Now main part of MAN come how he take this

He going pressurize her you have to only adjust 

Ek.toh maine tujhse shaadi.ki 

Now u showing attitude 

Ya he going understand everything peacefully and become the path which connect his family with her...this is same happen into arrange marriage too 

But most husband only fails to protect or understand the wife 

Tears going fall from.geet eyes before its fall she realise where she standing and stopped the thoughts for sometime...

In arrange marriage mother give own son to girl hand only for VANSH , if it's not going happen so soon... more problem start coming in your life.

.

I dont get when u not able to leave husband wife alone for sometime except the bedroom time how she going live happily here,

U both gone around 6 now coming

1.5 hour lag gya

Jaroor kuch khane lage honge

Ya khi aur leke gyi hongi mere bete ko ye

Now am thinking my husband driving on road or we going by air 

Can't you leave us alone for sometime 

I want his attention 

I.want some quality time alone outside from this 4 wall ..


Here this part ended .... 

Posted: 3 years ago

hi Priya

thanks for updating


Shot 4

marvelous update.... greatly written

Indeed Love or arrange marriage have two sides.

Geet's thoughts are reasonable.

liked how the differences between love and arranged marriages were portrayed.

she wants to spend time with her husband.

feeling for Geet

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by khwaishfan


hi Priya

thanks for updating


Shot 4

marvelous update.... greatly written

Indeed Love or arrange marriage have two sides.

Geet's thoughts are reasonable.

liked how the differences between love and arranged marriages were portrayed.

she wants to spend time with her husband.

feeling for Geet


Thanks dear for always being here 

I know it's just so sort 

But its random scenes which I write not like proper story

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