Asya Nobody But You FF - Page 13

Even though I have read this long long ago, It absolutely slipped from my mind to comment for university reasons I guess (the best i could do bro sorry).

The first I started off read everything but this laddu business irked me to no measure ! SO I skipped a few chapters with laddu in it.

But Asad figuring out was such a good good good thing I tell you !

Cannot tell you how much.

The Cvs reluctance to bring out any other potential villain or a possible new track to the show got it to deteriorate in so many ways than one !

Towards the end you can actually feel that the story was of TANVEER rather than that of AsYa or any main character. What started off as a small cameo took off to a LOOONG drag.

Now when I read this and so many other stories with TANNU PARDAFAASH I couldn't help but say just how MANY ways were there for the show to stop getting ruined and before ASAD was shown SLEEPING with the billi.

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Even though I have read this long long ago, It absolutely slipped from my mind to comment for university reasons I guess (the best i could do bro sorry).

The first I started off read everything but this laddu business irked me to no measure ! SO I skipped a few chapters with laddu in it.

But Asad figuring out was such a good good good thing I tell you !

Cannot tell you how much.

Thank you love! I really wished to see a jealous asad in qh. Would have done him some good

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

The Cvs reluctance to bring out any other potential villain or a possible new track to the show got it to deteriorate in so many ways than one !

Towards the end you can actually feel that the story was of TANVEER rather than that of AsYa or any main character. What started off as a small cameo took off to a LOOONG drag.

Now when I read this and so many other stories with TANNU PARDAFAASH I couldn't help but say just how MANY ways were there for the show to stop getting ruined and before ASAD was shown SLEEPING with the billi.

OH MY GOD, the ending was so trash. Realistically there were way too many loopholes, and smart main leads to let her get away with bs. And razia so protective about her daughter didn't care she was poisoned and then zoya knew but just waited for her to attack her again likeee!!!!! Even after tanveer was revealed, asad was shown so casual about it like....bro!!

@ euphoricdamsel Thank you thank you! Do have so many ideas. hopefully i can use them up properly in the one I am writing too

Also, thanks for taking time out to write and making it worth while <3