My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 34 (28.07.20) on Pg 78 - Page 53

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Posted: 3 years ago

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Will post it dear... It's a long update so taking time... 

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Hume  SR b chahiye ☺️

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Duration should be long🤣🤣

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Sorry guys to keep you wait so long....🤗


Part 32


Mini and Neil thought before they tell everyone about theirdecision of getting married they will tell Arya about it…so the next day beforerani comes for work both mini and neil went to arya’s room.

 

N. Andar aa jaye choti madam…

A. arey neil…aao na…veerbalika bhi hai….kya hua…itni subahkaise…..

N. kya kar rahe ho aap…mujhe laga hume aapko jagana padega….

A. I am a good girl na isiliye khud hi uth gayi….

N. yes…u r a good girl….can we talk to u madam…

A. Haa bolo na…

 

Both Mini and Neill were gesturing each other to tell….soonarya noticed it…

 

A. uffo…kya hua…kyun ek doosre ko ishare kar rahe ho….kuchbatana hai ….

M. ah…haan chutanki…tumhare genie ko batana hai….

 

Mini cleverly passed the ball to neil’s court….finallyneil gathered all his courage and started saying…

 

N. Choti madam…wo aap us din montu ke birthday ke di apniteesri wish batayi thi na….

A. haaa…usi ke liye to veerbalika ne itna bada thappad maratha….

N. haa….very bad veerbalika….

 

Minni made a puppy face when they neil said that….

 

A. aur nahi to kya…kitni zor ki lagi thi pata hai…

M. Aww I am so sorry chutanki….

 

Saying mini hugs arya and kisses her cheeks….

 

N. Ab agra tum dono behno ka pyaar wala jhappi khatam hua hoto meri baat sunoge…

A. oh haa…neil bolo…

N. haa…to wo aapki wo jo third wish thi wo agar poori hojaye to….

A. kya….Sach…

 

Arya literally jumped out of her bed after listening whatNeil said….

 

N. yes choti madam….sach….so should I fulfill ur third wish….

A. ofcourse yes neil….yay……

 

She hugged both of them…

 

A.meri veer Balika ki shadi hogi….mere genie se…..

 

Reciting this arya left the room dancing and running allover the haveli with happiness….

 

Seeing her like this mini couldn’t stop her tears…..

 

N. mini kya hua….are you happy…

M. of course I am happy….thank you for always putting arya first….andu know aaj jaise arya naach rahi hai na meri babes aur hanuman uncle bhi aisehi nachte agar wo aaj hote to….isliye I couldn’t stop my tears neil….

 

Neil wraps his hands on her shoulder making a side hug….

 

N. Wo jaha bhi honge bohut khush honge…aakhi uni beti itnikhush jo hai…..

M. I know….thanks for coming in our life neil….

N. I love you …u don’t have to say that…infact I shouldthank god that he sent me to you and I got a family I was craving for….sayyinghe kisses on her forehead….

A. aur mein…

N. aww my baby….i love you too….

 

Neil lifts arya and starts running all around the haveliholding her…..minni cuold only smile seeing them….

 

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Soon the news was out and the elders were really happyand dadu was dancing after hearing the good news…..naembi took all the buri nazar…..preet and bobby came running to the haveli after getting the news….

 


Probably next part will be the last part.

Arya ki third wish bhi puri 

Lekin arya ne kitna assani se maan liya 

Hamne kitne prediction kiye the arya MiNeil ke maje legi🤣

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Duration should be long🤣🤣

🤣🤣 bases se start ho 🤣 

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🤣🤣 bases se start ho 🤣 

☺️ Slowly 🤣

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☺️ Slowly 🤣


🤣🤣 slow and steady wins th race 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

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Hume  SR b chahiye ☺️

Mere dil ki baat keh di🤣

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🤣🤣 slow and steady wins th race 🤣

Pehle slow phir fast🤣

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Tharkiyon ke wish ke mutabik i am extending the story a little more....😉


Part 33


The next day all were at haveli…. Mini called Ashok andmeeta and informed about her marriage and asked them to come for all the ceremonies…Beejihave called pandit ji for seeing the auspicious day for the wedding and otherceremonies. Beeji made Mini to sit beside Neil like bride and groom…..Pandit jiwas seeing the panchang for that…

 

B. Arey pandit ji kitna der lagayenge ek muhuuurat nikalneme…jaldi bataye na…

P. jajman aap dulhe nahi hai na…

B. Nahi…kyun…dulha to neil bhai hai…

P. to utawla unhe hona chahiye aapko nahi….

Preet. Arey panditji dulhe se zyada Dulhan utawli hai….

 

Neil gave a mischeveous smile to what preet said andminni could only blush to that….

 

Preet. Oye hoye meri mini sharmati bhi hai kya…..

 

Neil whisperd in Preet’s ears

 

N. Tumhe nahi pata…mujhe pata hai see…best friend…

Preet. Haw mini tu to abhi se mujhe dhoka dene lagi….

M. Chup ho ja preet kaure…

Be. Chup ab dono…pandit ji ko muhurat to dekhne do….

 

All of them became silent …soon pandit ji announced adate for marriage which was a week after and also announced the dates for roka,mehendi , sangeet and haldi. Pandit ji left the haveli giving th list ofessentilas to beeji…..

 

 Mini doesn’t wantit to be big as its not even a year Hanuman singh ad babita deid to which allelders agreed and started the preparations…

 

Be. Acha suno roka kal hai to saare tayyariyan jaldi karnahai….bobby tujhe ek list bana dungi w sab leke aa jana…

B. ji beeji..

Be. Aur Neil Beta…kal roke pe teri taraf se koun aayega….

N. Ah Beeji…itna paas ka rishtedar to koi nahi hai jo aayega…saarerishtedaron ko shaadi me hi bulaunga…

Be. Acha…par beta wo…kal roka hai aur roke ke baad na Dulhanpar chunri chadhayi hoti hai aur wo dulhe wale karte hai to wo ab koun karega…

N. So sorry beeji mujhe yeh sab nahi pata hai…aur upar semere koi rishtedar utne close nahi hai jo yeh sab arne aayenge…

L. to kya hua ji lala hai na….lala kardega wo kaam…

Nb. Arey lale…tu…

L. kyun mein nahi kar sakta kya….ab humari to koi aulad nahito hum mini bitiya aur neil ke lliye yeh karenge to hume bhi acha lagega…bolo…

N. par…aap log..

G. Kyun aap sab log rsturaurant mein mujhe geeta didi bolteho na to yeh soch lo ki tumhare didi aur jija ji kar rahe hai…

N. Lala ji , Geeta ji agar aap log itne pyaar se yeh karenegto hume aur kya chahiye….

L. to done ji…dulhe wale aa gaye…khatirdari karo….

Nb. Haa haa nigode a teri khatirdari karti hoon mein…..

L. Are naeim bi aapki khatir dari mujhe na chahiye….

 

All had a great laugh….

 

dadu said to Neil that till marriage he will stay inNaembi’s House….

 

M.kya…kyun Dadu…

D. kyunki bina shaadi ke wo yaha nahi reh sakta….

M. Abhi tak to koi problem nahi thi na…

N. Mini…chup..

M. tum chup raho…let me handle this…haa boliye dadu…why isit a problem now…

N. Mini…its ok…ek hafte ki hi to baat ha…

M. Aise kaise…tum kahin nahi jaoge…no…

Be. Mini tujhe sharmana kaise sikhau mein…

Preet. Neil ne sikha diya beeji aapko zaroorat nahi padegi…

Be. Tu chup kar

 

All smiled at mini antics….Mini then understood that whyneil was stopping her and just saw downwards embarrassed and hid herself behindNeil….

 

Be. Puttar yeh ek reet hai bas…humare liye maan jao dono…

N. Beeji koi baat nahi mein Naembi ke ghar ruk jaunga shaaditak….

 


To be continnued.....