AkdhaOS -Anniversary & their 50th celebration -page 13 -27/aug/2020

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Hi dearies ,One more story from my craziness,enjoy guys ..Collection of My OS


First OS story

Kahan Dhoodhan Meri Beti Ki Maa


PART 1pg -1

part 2 pg - 2

part 3 pg - 4

Last Part - pg 8


Second OS


Anniversary & their celebration- Page 13



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Character Sketch



Jalal Mohammed Khan : 26 yrs old,running KC , he was kind , humble with his lovable person not for his enemies .




Jodha Sharma : writer , mother of mishika.




Mishika: 3 yrd old child, love her mummaa so much & love her dad lot

Savitri : grandmaa of JMK




ISHAN: Friend OF JMK


ISHIKA: Friend of Jodha sharma




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PART 1

London

In London,everyone were rushing to their daily routine work, A man with calm face has enjoying his vacation. Long back he is enjoying his freedom life without disturb from his daily schedule , meeting,file special thanks to his dadi,without her compelled,he never leave from his robotic life or came to london for his little vacation.he such a lonely person. His world only for his business and his dadi.she was one only lady inhis life except her,no one in his life.she was his mother, girlfriend ,best friend,philosphoper everything for him..he never denied her any wish even she never ask anything from him..she want his happiness nothing else.

He don't know why he was strong feeling today,something happen in his life.

(let see what happening in his life )

Evening , London city was more beautiful through lighting,people crowd .A place more beautiful in night view . A man sitting in near of foundation bench while cherishing night view of london bridge.if he have any girlfriend or wife with him.that place was more romantic one . poor guy henot interest with any girl in his life time .

Some baby voice disturbed his mind , his eyes searching there and here .his ears caught slow lovely melody crying voice .his glimpse fallen corner side of foundation. One little girl crying .she look like littleangel or say cute doll but her eyes has swollen,her pinky cheeks look like morning snow droplet in flower buds when in crying also ,she look so cute while rubbing her eyes through her little palm ,her melody voice choking insake of continuous crying.he don't know why heart have pain seeing her crying like someone pinning heart through lot of needles.his legs move automatically to her side and he kneel down in front of her level while softly held her both shoulders through his hard palm..already his mind alert , shelook like soft feather so he handle her softly.he remove her rubbing hand from her eyes while wiped her crystal tears through his thumbs. Her almond shiny eyes look at man face, her lips crept on smile . after seeing her little smile , his heart jumping like he got any awards ..little girls hugged him while his hand wrapped her soft body in his broad chest like he held his precious treasure.girl one word making him shock even corner of heart it become true one . he come out from hug while held her shoulders ..doll was sobbing lightly.

Girl: Daddy ...with choking voice.

Man become numb in his state (mind): why doll calling me to daddy ..why with confused state.

Girl: daddy.. I need mummaa...with dragging voice.

Man:mummaa..

Girl: yes, daddy ..mummaa with sobbing voice

Man wiped her tears : shhh.. I will find ur mom..

Girl nods her head lightly ..

Man stand up from his kneel down position as his eyes look atsky : dadi ki babaji , what happening in my life , why doll calling me to her dad . yeah babaji don't get confuse,I fixed her little girl name to doll..yeah come back to my matters, why doll calling me to her dad even where is her mother , where will find my daughter s mother .opps why I am addressing myself, iam her dad..oh god , I am not understand anything

Girl tucked his pant and his eyes lash down ,look at doll ,his eyes gestured what ..

Girl: what are u doing , daddy with innocent face .

Man pickup doll in his arms and placed his hand in her cheeks: I am praying , I will find ur mummaa soon.

Girl : whom are you praying , daddy.

Man: dadi ki babaji .

Girl : oh.. dadi ki babaji .. I am also praying with dadi ki babaji..so he will help u soon, mumaa said , god love children ..i am babyright , he love me , he accept my prayer soon with innocent babish tone

Man admiring her babish voice : yes, god love children..he love u more.

Jalal ...sound come from behind.. man turn back look at person..

Man was none other our one only Jalal Mohammed Khan .

Jalal : ishaan ..what are u doing here ..with surprised face.

Ishaan hit his shoulder playfully : I am only ask this question with u , not u , my dear friend

Ishaan eyes caught little girl in his arms : omg, u married , u did not send ur marriage invitation. How dare u while little punch to his stomach with angry face.

Jalal shout : ouch..before Jalal clear ishaan misunderstanding, Jalal ka doll hell angry with ishaan..

Girl: why u hit my daddy with angry face.

Ishann jerk up to back : opps, Jalal , u have sherni daughter like u

Girl eyes glaring to ishaan and Jalal enjoying her flight with ishaan.

Ishaan: I did not hit ur daddy , baby with pout face.

Girl angry face: u r liar , now only u punched my daddy stomach..my poor daddy with sad tone while her almond eyes moist .

Jalal cupped her cheeks: baby , nothing happened to me..uncle play with me .he did not hit me dear..i am right na , ishaan.

Ishaan nod his head : its just game , baby.

Girl : really daddy ..with popped eyes

Jalal chuckled seeing her face : yes baby.

Girl: ok .. sorry uncle ..with cute face

Ishaan: why u asking me , sorry dear..

Girl: mummaa said, without mistake , never scold and angry with anyone. I got angry with u , without ur mistake , so iam sorry with pout face.

Ishaan: Jalal, really , she is ur daughter with teasing look

Jalal glare to ishaan and ishaan continues , how she maturely she was speaking in his little age ..i think she resemble ur wife. By the way , where is ur wife .

Now only Jalal realized doll not his daughter: ishaan , I needur help to find her mumaaa..

Ishaan with confused face: her mummaa..

Girl excited face: yes, meri mumaaa. With possessive voice.

Jalal blinked to ishaan signed talk later : baby, I think u rhungry..what u like to eat.

Girl: pasta..but mummaa not like pasta with chuckling face.

Jalal smiled , she have same taste like me : ok .. ishaan,u too join dinner with us.

Ishaan nods his head ..three left to near Italian restaurant.

Jalal ordered baby favourite food three of them.. baby busyin her food , little gap Jalal said everything to ishaan.

Ishaan shocked expression: Jalal, u don't know anything about baby.Jalal nod his head .. are u mad.. Jalal eyes glare to ishaan.

Ishaan: why u angry with me, u angry with ur self .. first come with me, handover baby to near police station ..its good for baby and u also.

Jalal accept his suggestion (mind): may be baby parents worried about her and may be chance they complaint to police station .

Jalal take long breathe : ok ..ishaan.

Girl pushed her food plate to little bit forward :daddy ..enough .

Jalal cleaned her face through tissue paper and ishaan surprise Jalal behavior with baby..he take care baby like he was her ownfather.

Both reached police station with baby..ishaan explainedeverything to cop . lady cop take baby from Jalal arms..baby look at Jalal withmoist eyes and Jalal heart shrinking like his essential part leave from him .

Jalal look at lady cop: wait , where r u taking baby with worried tone

Ishaan touch Jalal shoulder : Jalal, cop handover baby to orphanage. they need time find baby parents information ,until baby stayin orphanage.

Jalal shout : orphanage..why doll stay in orphanage with angry face

Ishaan : baby safe in orphanage ,don't worry.

Jalal: I am not allow my daughter to orphanage with warning tone

Ishaan confused face : ur daughter.

Jalal : no .. but I am not allow her to orphanage with stubborn face.

Ishaan talk to cop and gave his address and Jalal ka detail to cop as well assure , baby was their responsibility until they will find parents of baby.cop also accept ishaan request.

Jalal : what happened, ishaan.

Ishaan give relief sign : they accepted Jalal, if anything happen to baby , I am the first one going to jail with horror face.

Jalal smiled face : thanks ishaan.. he nod his head with fear face

Ishaan: Are u staying in hotel or some where.

Jalal: no I am stay in uncle mansion and uncle not here , I am only person stay in mansion except some servant with me

Ishaan : then who take care of baby with fuming face.

Jalal : me ..with causal tone.

Ishaan: I will kill u sure ..u don't anything about baby nursery ..how could u handle baby alone in mansion.

Jalal: ishaan , she is not born baby , may be she is 3 yrs old.

Ishaan taping his foot with angry face: I am not convinced..wait first u know her name with doubting face.

Jalal sheepish smile : nope.

Cop bring baby to infront of Jalal and ishaan .. Jalal showing his whole tooth to ishaan,,he replied , weird look to Jalal .. baby angry glare to Jalal & Ishaan. ..they left her to cop right, so baby angrywith them

Jalal and ishaan put pout face while Jalal pickup baby in his arms..three left the place.Jalal driving car, baby sitting in next seat with him and ishaan sit in back seat.

Baby not look at Jalal nor gave single smile to them .. Jalal driving car but his look for baby only , he craving for her single look with eager face.ishaan understand his friend dilemma.

Ishaan: baby, what is ur name , sweetheart ..

Baby : Mishika with grummy face.

Ishaan: u don't like ur name , sweetheart ..with chuckling face.

Mishika : I love my name ..with babish angry face.

Ishaan: why u calling Jalal to daddy ..

Mishika : who Jalal with confused face.

Ishaan : u don't know , who is Jalal..great JK with dramatic shock . Jalal glaring to ishaan.

Mishika pout face and look at Jalal side : daddy, who is Jalal ..

Jalal smiled :my name is Jalal,baby .

Mishika :oh ..then, who is CMK.. with confused face.

Jalal : My name is JMK not CMK with chuckling face

Mishika shocked face: u have two names but I have only one with little sad face.

Ishaan : mishi darling , u say one thing , who said u ,Jalal is ur father with curious tone even Jalal also engaged their conversation.

Mishika: mummaa..

Jalal put sudden break while ishaan hit to front seat .

Ishaan: Jalal, why u applied sudden break while rubbing his forhead ..with angry tone.

Jalal ignore ishaan : baby , u mummaa said ..i am ur father ..with shocked tone.

Mishika nod her head and ishaan glaring to Jalal , Jalal not understand anything. He start driving ..

Car stopped in mansion ,three of them enter in big mansion..

Ishaan: I need talk with u , Jalal Mohammed Khan.. with angry tone .

Jalal give baby to one of lady servant and give proper instruction to servant ..

Ishaan waiting in Jalal room and Jalal enter room with confused face .

Ishaan : what is this, Jalal ..u cheated innocent girl and u have baby also with angry face. U r not cheated only her ..ucheated me , dadi and everyone with fuming face.

Jalal weird look at ishaan (mind): why he behave like.he was my wife.. I spoiled his life ..why he overreacted ..

Ishaan: Jalal, I asking u..whose that innocent girl,where she is now ..tell me Mr.CMK ..

Jalal: I am JMK not CMK with angry tone

Ishaan : Mishi darling saying right , u r culprit Mohammed Khan / CMK Or LMK..liar Mohammed Khan

Jalal : I don't know,ishaan, trust me ..really I never relationship any women in my life except dadi . she is only woman in my life .trust me

Ishaan : hmmm..i trust u because u r my friend , u never cheat any woman but why mishi mom said that u r her father ..

Jalal : even I want know that ..

Ishaan: hmm, first , we need to find her soon then we willbe get every answer from her .

Jalal: par, kahan Dhoodhan Meri Beti Ki Maa..

Ishaan: it really tough task find ur wife with serious tone.

Jalal: she is not my wife , Mr.Ishaan rathode with angry voice.

Ishaan sheepish face: yes, she is not ur wife ...in murmur tone but u should addressed meri beti ki maa as urself accept she is ur daughter .

Jalal: why u murmuring , speak loudly ..

Ishaan: go check ur beti ..

Jalal : yes, I need check her ...he almost run out to check his doll

Ishaan weird face: what going on yaar..

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Jalal layed sleeping mishi in his bed and wrapped blanket properly below her neck .in mishi right side, ishaan sleeping like baby posture and left side Jalal sitting admiring her sleep without remove his eyes from her.

In sleeping state , ishaan tried to place his leg to baby and Jalal pushed him forceliy as he rolled down from bed ..

Ishaan rubbing his back : why u pushed me,JK with fuming face.

Jalal: better , u go sleep in that couch .. ishaan cursing Jalal through his mindvoice ..

Ishaan settled down in couch (mind): he behave like he is her real father..uff plz god save me from over protective father no..noduplicate father .

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Ishaan sleeping peacefully in small couch ..ok uncomformtably.sunrise hit his face ..he wake up , his eyes turned to bed side..oops no onein room. Ishaan jerk up from couch and search whole mansion .. Jalal and mishika not anywhere in mansion.

Ishaan(mind): Jalal , where r u.. if u left with baby anywhere or he kidnapped to india..oh no..then I am only going to jail.. no ..idon't want my entire life spend in jail.. plz god save me.

Jalal enter in room with more packet in his hand and baby is playing games in his mobile .

Ishaan: where r u went in early morning with mishi ..with fuming face.

Jalal: shopping ..

Ishaan: early morning shopping..what the hell .

Jalal: my dear friend, its not early morning..its 9 clock..

Jalal look at mishika : doll , let go we have our breakfast..u Mr. ishaan.. go freshup and come join with breakfast soon with ordering soon

Dinning table

Jalal and mishika sit next with each other ..Jalal feeding her food with his own hand and after few second ishaan join them.

Mishika cough heavily and ishaan tired give water to baby..baby stopped him

Ishaan look at Jalal with confused face.. Jalal raise his shoulder as gestured him I don't know.

Ishaan: what baby..

Mishika : its hot water or cold water with straight face.

Ishaan jaw touched to ground and Jalal giggled seeing ishaan face.

Ishaan : cold water

Mishika hit her forhead through her little palm : uncle ,u r buddhu ..if I drink cold water na..germs playing with my throat with innocent face

Ishaan confused face: kya..

Jalal hit his back : she said, she will get cough and cold .

Ishaan : oh.. wait , I bring ur hot water ..

Mishika: soon with bossy tone.

Ishaan: yes mam with respect voice

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Jalal playing with mishika and mishika sharing her friend detail with Jalal..yeah kid garden friends.

Ishaan : I don't know after mishika go to her parent place,what will happen to Jalal..he attached with mishi so much same like mishi also.. god why u play with his feeling ..first I need to stop him

Ishaan: mishi darling, plz say anything about ur mom.

Jalal doubting face to ishaan

Mishika: mummaa , she look beautiful like me ..with proud herself

Ishaan: then ..ur mom name , where u both stay in London .

Jalal phone ringed, he attend call far away from ishaan and mishi and before ishaan anything to baby

Jalal : ishaan , we need go hospital now ..with panic voice ..


Wait for Next parts guys

Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 5 years ago
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Congratulations for new story Akka


Interesting CS

Awesome chappy Akka

Interesting too

When will jo give entry

Update soon Akka

Thanks for Pm Akka

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Superb chapter dear

Lovely one

Waiting for jo entry

Continue soon

Thxv 4t pm

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Lovely chappy akka

Really interesting story

Update soon akka

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Awesome chapter akka interesting story update soon akka congratulation for new story
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Congratulation for new story akka🎉

Really interesting story

Cute mishi

Funny ja kick ishaan🤣

Pls update soon akka

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Beautiful start dii👏...


Would love to read more of it...


Continue soon...


Thanks for PM🤗

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Nice start dear

Awesome😊

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

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