Ariya ETF AU An Imperial Affliction pg 31 27th Dec - Page 15

Originally posted by: BitterBerry

Rahane ji ☺️

I always enjoyed Ri- Sha heated moments 😛

LOL I was thinking today I write hate chemistry good. Like Vir and Ri and in the Trials wala ayega another cop who hates Ri. Maybe I should make them even more masaladar😆

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

bold- who knows

Man I reread the story and think Ri was such a badass and she was probably since always WTH did she see in him. And honestly I never thought to make Neal an interesting character to justify. Looking back probably should have added some flashbacks to justify her 'love'This is insane as to how can she love and lose her years over this dude.

Ariya 😆 Ri is only half of the hurdle. Do you think Jun will go for a girl who is still into her ex and is broken? Maybe not. He also deserves a chance with someone who has no baggage. Someone who is normal.

Thank you for commenting.

@bold

Omg plz no need

Plz don't glorify her past love

We don't want to read about that neel guy

She already wasted her 8 years for that filthy man

She is still not out of that mess yet

About ariya hope u won't bring someone between ariya

It's role reversal right, that means riya also doesn't deserve arjun in all the stories, what u say???

Maybe it's riya's choice to go for such a guy who is burdened with his past baggage

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

Did you really mean Sha or Vir?

LOL I was thinking today I write hate chemistry good. Like Vir and Ri and in the Trials wala ayega another cop who hates Ri. Maybe I should make them even more masaladar😆

I meant Ri-Sha ❤️

That officer who'd interrogate her na 😆😆 She really gave the man a tough time, though I liked Ri-Rahane more. 😆😆 like with all her honesty 😆and the man was like how to even get her to talk 🤣

Awesome update

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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

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Originally posted by: BitterBerry

I meant Ri-Sha ❤️

That officer who'd interrogate her na 😆😆 She really gave the man a tough time, though I liked Ri-Rahane more. 😆😆 like with all her honesty 😆and the man was like how to even get her to talk 🤣

Haan I know you ship RiVi more than ariya😵 *blasphemy*

Originally posted by: Mdmadona

@bold

Omg plz no need

Plz don't glorify her past love

We don't want to read about that neel guy

She already wasted her 8 years for that filthy man

She is still not out of that mess yet

About ariya hope u won't bring someone between ariya

It's role reversal right, that means riya also doesn't deserve arjun in all the stories, what u say???

Maybe it's riya's choice to go for such a guy who is burdened with his past baggage

Haha you know it's bad to read comments sitting in office. Whole say I kept thinking about this comment.😆

Ew I don't even want to write Neel-Ri romance, but you think like a story POV, even Arni had their romantic scenes. Those helped us to understand he really loved her and how driven he was for revenge. We had how Rosh met him and Sam-Jun friendship scenes, but in this story there is no Aisha Ri scenes from old days. But this was written years ago kon karega itna rewrite😆

There is none between Ariya and there is no need to bring. They are complex people (Ri more so than Jun) hence they need to sort out themselves before the are even in that level.

@bold- this is a complex question. In stories Arjun is a broken man who did not see himself beyond his revenge, as Ri is in this one. Does someone who is good, 'unbroken' deserve them? Maybe not, maybe yes once they fix themselves and see there is life beyond their mission. Also there is this complex thing called- the heart wants what it wants. Who cares deserve or not. Also you mentioned choice. Anyways, that was something I felt, characters and how I write have no impact of that.

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

LOL you remember the other dude? Such an assh*le he was.

Haan I know you ship RiVi more than ariya😵 *blasphemy*

yeah i remember him😆 also that hacker guy who was excited for spy jobs, also was beaten by S and A🤣🤣

You know why I always choose Sam-iya over Ariya in your stories. damn you, you write so well that I cant stop myself from looking at these unlikely pairs

i could wait for some more masala here with Ri-Rahane-Jun, you know. I know your way of writing jealousy as your characters are beyond that, but i'd love to see Ri-Rahane scene where Jun is all green🤣🤣such sadistic phantasy i have🤣

Originally posted by: BitterBerry

yeah i remember him😆 also that hacker guy who was excited for spy jobs, also was beaten by S and A🤣🤣

You know why I always choose Sam-iya over Ariya in your stories. damn you, you write so well that I cant stop myself from looking at these unlikely pairs

i could wait for some more masala here with Ri-Rahane-Jun, you know. I know your way of writing jealousy as your characters are beyond that, but i'd love to see Ri-Rahane scene where Jun is all green🤣🤣such sadistic phantasy i have🤣

Unlikely pairs ya lovers 😆 you gave the name only. My oldest fan ☺️

Ew ew why you would want jealousy. Poor Jun, he was competing with a dad guy now another? No need. Also Vir is not someone who shows feelings, and not like Ri will give any bhao. Rather it's time she should feel the heat.

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

No no I meant the other police dude who was interrogating Ri for helping Sik. John is not in the picture sadly😆

yeah i remember him too😆

john was just funny🤣 and that time also how Jun and Raghu sir were surprised that Shree can't do the hacking?😲😲😲

Unlikely pairs ya lovers 😆 you gave the name only. My oldest fan ☺️

you never made lovers out of them okay😵 so pairs hi sahi😳

Ew ew why you would want jealousy. Poor Jun, he was competing with a dad guy now another? No need. Also Vir is not someone who shows feelings, and not like Ri will give any bhao. Rather it's time she should feel the heat.

dil and logic dont go hand by hand🤣🤣so dil mange this thing🤣

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haan haan why not😈

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