FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thd#3 (Chapter 28-34) - Page 65

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Posted: 5 years ago

Rishabh's turmoil when she acted all happy for Kukki wad beautifully shown. I could feel how restless he was and he even doubted himself for time if he was imagining or hallcinating. Good deviation from his Mr. Perfect Bajaj image. Makes him more human and relatable.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Heyy Sunshine!!

This was such a loaded chapter. The last few chapters have been quite intense. It feels as though everything was slow before and now it's all in 3x speed. Kukki broke my heart in the previous chapter. And now you broke my heart 💔😭 by stopping where you did😢. I love the maturity that Prerna is slowly coming to. I really liked how for the first time ever Shivani was useful for trying to clear Prerna's head instead of muddling her mind for the nth time. Rishabh was asking Prerna the right questions. I feel that all this time Prerna was/is trying to fill the void that was created by losing Anurag, the baby and her worldview about the Basu's by clinging to Kukki.

At first I disliked how you wrote Menka because it's very easy to dislike a character when they're one dimensional. And you did the opposite. I think Menka has started to grow on me. And I don't want her to. Hope I made sense.

I usually don't read slowburn stories but I'm glad I continued with this one. Especially with the thoughts you put to and turns you've taken in story progression and character development (Prerna). Your writing style is quite different and fresh from all that I've read before. And now with all the casting drama with RB/KSG and insufferable twists on the show, it's writings like yours and Nor's that keep me wanting to connect to PreRish.

Also I've been wanting to review for quite some time now, but I gave into the lazy,badme karungi habit.The updates were so hard-hitting that I forced myself to write my thoughts as soon as I was done. Too many feels. I will try be more regular with my appreciation of your work.

Until next time.

Take care!

-Rekha.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Kukki's sand house only gets complete when her mom and dad come together. Such a beautful way to show how they both complete her family when they are together. I hope I haven't been reading too much into the sand house 😃

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Posted: 5 years ago

So, Prerna didn't tell him. And Bajaj was in confusion about what happened with her.

Kukki's sand house with her papa & mama❤️smiley27

Her thoughts wouldn't leave him and he wants to know about her.

Post dinner - Kukki was enjoying a cartoon movie with Tanvi and Masi?? Tanvi is not here right?

He is so restless to see her in pain.

She is finding reasons to tell him, yaa as if he will believe😆

Tanvi is falling for Adi, she has a long journey to reach him now.

Prerna was happy that he won't come to the office and here he came early only to know about her🤪

She finally gave in and told that marriage never happened but without informing anything about Basu and what Basu's did to her.

I loved how she wanted to thank him for his advice which helped her when she lost everything.

He is feeling guilty for he unknowingly hurt her mentioning about her family.

And he guessed it, isn't it?

Kukki & her papa, she knows he is restless and worried about something, so she did what she could, hugging him and assuring him that everything will be alright❤️smiley27smiley27

He lost all the carrom rounds to Kukki🤣smiley37

Finally, she said and she cried for losing her child, for unable to share this pain to anyone all these months, for neglecting her child for her love, and he was there for her, holding her, letting her cry, supporting her.

They cried for losing their child and she slept in his arms

He laid her on the bed beside Kukki

He is so damn hurt and he is blaming himself😒

He is already sick & he started smoking and drinking. It will worsen his condition😭

His letter is back and his questions are valid. He accepted her child as his, he would have saved their child. He is grieving for his lost child.

He got to know everything from her.

He is such a sweetheart, he asked whether to find Basu for her.

His questions whether she will not leave Kukki even after Basu is so valid.

Even his point is also correct that she never would have thought about Kukki if she was married to Basu and had her own family.

And here the Kukki's father is asking her all the questions for his daughter's benefit. He doesn't ask Prerna not to meet Kukki. But he doesn't want Kukki to hurt in the end.

All the things she has been avoiding came back when he said about his plan to move to London. And he gave her a choice to do what needs to be done to not hurt Kukki and her.

I really liked his points here. He is hurt about their loss, but he is Kukki's father who would never let anything hurt her even if it's Prerna's love.

Let's hope Prerna will find a way to stay in their life.

He is feeling so guilty🥺

She is angry at her fate💔

And he is super sicksmiley38smiley38

I am actually worried about the next chapter. I hope he will recover soon. And most importantly Kukki's fear of losing her father will come true if he is sick. I am feeling so bad for Kukki alreadysmiley38smiley38smiley38. And I feel another emotional update is on our way.

Finally, One of the most awaited updates of the story, awesome Meenakshi, continue soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago

On one side, Prerna is determined to hide but on the other side Rishabh is determined to seek. It's like a hide and seek game they are playing being far from each other. She is finding ways to not tell him about his past and he is leaving no stone unturned to know everything. A virtual tug of war with these two at either ends of it. Wonderful. I can read so much into all these little details or should I say I want to read and interpret and reach the depth. 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine


wow what a chapter. Yeyyy.. 🤗, thank you so much for reading where to start though.kahi se bhi.m :) I'm glad P stuck to her word & had a mature conversation with RB about her life decisions. She did.. she said she is learning and she is applying her learnings. I am so happy you liked it. I'm glad she's realised that most of it happened because of her own decisions. Yess.. whatever happened with her post Bajaj leaving could have irrespective of Bajaj se shaadi or no shaadi. Bina shaadi ke bhi Anurag missing ho jata to bhi Mohini migt have done the same.. she only tolerated Prerna and Sharmas because of Anurag. I'm liking this new & somewhat improved P, i knew you were making her more likeable (that's saying alot). Time for a happy dance for me 💃i kinda have some idea about the solution she might come up with but know it might take a while for her to realise herself. I'd love to know what you have in you mind as far as her solution is concerned. If you have time and wish tp share do PM me.. it could give me a different perspective in case we are not thinking on same lines. Loves hearing ideas. But only if you want to.🤗

damn it RB's ill 😒.he is.. can't wait to see how everyone reacts, especially P & Meneka. You got it, Menaka will make a come back 😎 all there reactions will be for both RB and Kukki (most impacted) i just hope he's not too severe, a poorly RB with no one to take care of him (like a wife would😉) gets me all angsty. He is kind of but I won't kill him yet 😆

can't wait to read more.

I will begin soon...giving my brain a little break. It's exhausted feeling and writng all the emotions.🤯

p.s i really hope the replacement of ksg won't get you down. I'm gutted but kind of relieved, KZK was injurus to health ☢️ but if he returns i know i will too 😆.

Ohh it is sad yaar.. I am just getting used to it.. but it's hard not to see him as Bajaj. Thabk God this story has nothing to do with current track. I only have to back in time and waha to Bajaj won't change 😁 I can only imagine him whilr writing..

hey love that you take the time out to go through the and comment on my comments, very appreciated plus it's nice to know someone else feels or thinks similar to me. looking forward to all what's coming, will be very interesting.

Regarding RB, I'm glad your looking back for inspiration & that your story has nothing to do with the current track. that RB will not change & stay KSG's version forever...hyyyyy thinking about that wasted potential is 🥺.... oh well there is your story to look forward to 🥳.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hi Meenakshi. Hope you are alright.

It was a lovely update. You have shown the pain of Prerish in a perfect manner. So now finally Rishabh knows that Prerna is not married to Anurag and that she has lost her child.

Rishabh's guilt for destroying Prerna's and her daughter's life(according to him) was shown in a brilliant and emotional manner

The PreRish hug was heart-wrenching.

So now Tanvi is falling for Aditya😳

Loved the mother-son relationship between Sharda and Rishabh.

Hope he gets well soon. I can't see him in pain.😃

Don't forget to send me a pm for the update.

GREAT UPDATE

WITH LOVE

-PRAPTI

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Posted: 5 years ago

Loved the update! Very well written the pain and the guilt. Also RBs apprehension on Kukki filling the void only etc was well brought out and needed. His questions and the whole conversation was much needed and expressed through your writing - on point. Thanks and thanks also to listening to us and coming back to continue this story! Take care

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanku so much u r so prompt🙂.

Where do I start I like the fact that RB knows about it too. And I have a feeling Anurags whereabouts will be revealed soon.

Rbs apprehension of kukki being used to fill a void was so brutally put forth but so apt. I had almost forgotten their home us London.


I hope he is ok☹️ don't like hospitalised rb

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Posted: 5 years ago

Amazing update... I hope RB gets well soon...

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