Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi,Last part on 78,4/12 - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Belated happy birthday raksha di......

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Interesting prologue di.....

Ruhi called ishu as mumma....raman is not her father....

Interesting....

Continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#42

Intriguing prologue

Looking forward to read

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 5 years ago
#43

Lovely prologue

Update soon

Belated birthday raksha

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi friends here's tge first shot of my new TS.


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Soon the baby completed her milk and slept while ishra looked at eachother with a look that " She is sleeping ,now we can talk ."

I- haan to Mr Raman ,now we can talk ,aap jaldi bolo ,I have to go to my hostel .

R- so you are a student .

I- Yeah I m final year MBA student .

R- thats great .then why do you live in hostel .

I- leave that ,atfirst tell me who are you and who is this girl,why she is calling me mumma and why do you want me to let her call that ?

R- I m so sorry if you are feeling suspicious but there is nothing like that . I m Raman bhalla ,you must have listened about Bhalla corporates .

I- I m sorry ,I hadn't listened about it .

R- koi nahi ,let it be . I m owner of Bhalla corporates .

I- ohh .

Saying so she looked at the little girl, Raman caressed her and spoke " I don't know who this girl is ."

Ishita got surprised listening to him , she turned her face curiously towards him while he continued " few days ago ,I was in a dinner meeting with one of my client . I completed my meeting and was returning home. I had just settled in my car and was about to ignite my car when I heard a tap on my window. I opened the window and found her (the girl) standing in front of me in very disheveled state ,dirty cloths, messy hair but her eyes were sparkeling . I got surprised seeing such a small kid in night , I couldn't form a word to say anything to her . Its not that I hadn't seen any such kid but it was too late for a begger kid to beg at that tome ,moreover her cloths were good and most importantly she was crying for her parents. I asked her where are her parents ?. She is so small that she can't even tell me who her parents are and where they are . She just pointed towards a turning and said " mummy papa khana lene gaye ."

R(continuing)- I held her hand and asked about some of the people about her but they all said that she is there from hours and they had hadn't seen anyone with her . Though I didn't had any connection with her but mera man nahi kiya ise chodne ka wahaan ,so I took her with me . On the way she told me that she is very hungry ,so I bought few chipa and cakes for her ,she ate them quickly ,tillthen we had reached the police station . I lodged a missing complain for her and was returning but she was not leaving me . The moment I told her to stay with cops and turned to go,she started crying loudly . I didn't had heart to leave her there ,so I took her with me with the cops permission . From that day she is living with me , my helps take care of her when I m at work, after that she stay with me all the time . Today she only wanted to come here not because she need to buy something but to bring a mother for her .

Ishita was surprised as well as impressed with Raman .she amiled listening to him and asked " you mean to say ,you don't have any connection with her ."

He shook his head in negation while she was still in not able to believe him .

I- and what about her parents ,didn't cop got any lead about them .

R- not yet ,she is too small to help the sketch artist to make their sketch and police has asked everyone in that place and nearby places ,but thwy hadn't got any lead till now .

I- she calls you papa .

R- humm , i told her many tines to call me uncle but she never says so because she only remember mummy and papa .

I- ab aap kya karoge .

R- will wait ttill cops investigate about her parents .

I- don't think that ,I m talking negatively but what if they never found her parents .

R- then nothing ,I have enough money , I will raise her ,give her good life .

Ishita smiled listening to him and spoke " thats so nice of you ."

R- She is too innocent to be left alone in this cruel world .

I- humm ,but why she called me her mother .

R- I don't know ,may be you look like her mother ,or may be she likes you .

I- see Mr Raman , its a nice thing you are doing by supporting this girl but I can't help you in this .

R- even I don't want you to drag in this ,its just Lui liked you ,so I wanted you to play along for sometimes .

I- Lui ?

R- its her name .

I- Lui , ye kaisa naam hai .

R- ab jo hai yahi hai ,she told me that only.

I- now lui is sleeping ,so can I go now ?

R- I guess you can go .

Saying so he tried to take ruhi from her hut in the mean time she got up and started crying hugging ishita tight. She tried to free herself from ruhi's hold but instead her hold became more tight .Ishuta looked at Raman for help ,he again tried to take ruhi, but couldn't. The more he pull ruhi from ishita ,the more she held her tight, ishita was getting hurt by her nails ,so Raman stopped and said " please be with us for sometimes . May be lui with leave you after sometimes then you can go . "

Ishita thought for sometimes and then got ready . They completed their shopping and went out ,then settled in her car and drove away . They crossed ishita's college and hostel too,she wanted to leave but tge moment she tried to shift ruhi from her , ruhi got up and this time she was wide awake . Ruhi smiled fully seeing ishita holding her and touched ishita's face softly , she closed her face feeling kids soft touch and held her tiny hands when it reached her lips . Ishita hold ruhi's hand and kissed on the back of her palm lovingly ,while she giggled and said " mommy ".

Ishita too smiled listening to her jingling voice while ruhi opened her little hand and tried to hug ishita . Seeing this ishita herself hugged ruhi while she rested her head on ishita's shoulder and started sucking her thumb producing a humm sound . Ishita looked at Raman ,he smiled at her and said " I think she likes you ."

The moment Raman completed herself , ruhi lifted her head and spoke " papa mumma ghar chalein ."

R- humm beta .

Saying so he continued driving while though ishita liked ruhi and Raman too but at the same time she was not liking this situation.

Thats all for now ,enjoy reading and do comment

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Posted: 5 years ago
#45

Updated new part ,enjoy reading .

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Posted: 5 years ago
#46

Awesome chappy Di

Lui😆

Update soon Di

Thanks for Pm Di

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Posted: 5 years ago
#47

Lovely starting di....

Who is ruhi parents ....

Ruhi called ishu mommy and raman papa....

Continue soon plz

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Posted: 5 years ago
#48

Awesome fab fantastic chap

Too good lui is so innocent

How will she come out of this situation

Please cont soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#49

Interesting start..

Waiting for the story to unfold more..

Continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#50

Fantastic update

Baby slept having her milk ishita looked at raman she asked him to tell asap she have to go back to her hostel he asked if she is student she said Yes MBA final he asked why she is staying in hostel she said it's not important she asked him tell her why this little girl was calling her mumma and he let her he asked her not to be suspicious he asked if she knows bhalla corporate she said no be said it's ok he is owner of bhalla corporate he said he don't know who this girl is he told her everything from the time he met little girl ishita was surprised and was impressed with raman she said she can't help him in this he said he even don't want her to get stuck in all this Ishita asked if he got any lead about her parents he said no she asked what if police will never be able to find her parents he said he will raise her ishita liked that she said she should leave now but ruhi was not leaving her she started crying raman asked her to stay with them for sometime ishra were in car ishitas college and hostel was left behind she wanted to go but ruhi was not leaving her loved ishru scene Ishita liked raman and ruhi but was not liking the situation

Please update soon

Thanks for the pm

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