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Posted: 5 years ago

Kaun story update karega kaun kaun kaun .

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I am soo sorry I am late. I was supposed to read it last night but I was so sleepy after formating an update. But I am here after reading not just 1 buy 2 updates.. no cliff hanger for me smiley17

Chapter 6

Moloy Basu surprised me a lot. I wasn't expecting anything like this from any member of Basu Family. Would be interesting to know why he is such an exception in the entire family. I mean he was happy when Bajaj told them about Sneha's birth.

Well as per my last ff from where I am 1 I have written that Rishab had went and told the enitre truth to Moloy and he was regretful. He even believes Sneha to be Anurag and Prerna Child but since his son is not ready to believe he cannot do anything about it. He had even blessed Prerna and Bajaj relationship. My Reason for having this window was because Moloy was always a good person at heart its his wife that is the problem.

Ohh .. I am sorry I must have missed.. my apologies... I will have to go back and re read.. thank you😊

Now about about Bajaj going to Anurag for donor match. When I read for the first time it didn't settle down well because as a reader we already have a few expectations and it can over ride a writer's pov. Words can be interpreted differently. Also I haven't seen S1 so I can't imagine Bajaj-Sneha relationship. I have not created any liking for Rishabh-Sneha relationship from the show yet because they didn't show anything and it will be very hard to overpower Kukki-Rishabh because their bonding was the best till date in the show. In fact I liked grown up Kukki (uptil now) in the show more than Sneha. So these prejudices also lead to me thinking that why did he even go to Basus.

I am not trying to follow S1 relationship but I feel that even with the leap that they have done in current show Bajaj and Sneha can have a very heart to heart relationship. Two people wronged no parents growing up alone against the world when they don't need to be it their fate that destroyed them. They can understand each other and that is why I am trying to show that Rishab sees Sneha in him. A kid wronged by his father alone deprived of love

I know dear.. I was sharing all the thought in my mind that made me think "ki Bajaj ko kyu Jana tha Basu Badi" when I read it first time. Shayad ye question nahi ata agar Kukki was in place for Sneha because uska bond I know and adore. Sneha's character is yet to do anything for me from the show... so iske liye when I read it for the second time keeping my own prejudices aside tab I could relate to why Bajaj toook such an extreme step for sneha. All I had to do was separate show wala sneha from your story ka sneha and it all made sense.

But after reading the following conversations where you have explained your thought proc.ess I read it again with your pov as a writer in my mind. And then I understood that you did this to show how and to what extent he can go when it comes to his family. He kept Bajaj at the backfoot and let Risbabh take over in that moment for his little girl. Perspective changed as I stepped into your shoes.

Its a transplant you need the parents it had to be Prerna or Anurag and that is why Rishab didn't even consider him or Kukki at first. Yes he could have forced the basus manipulated them done a deal but it would have taken time which he didn't have and there would have been a window of error and that could have costed her life. So he did what had to done the safest way possible. Plus he asked once rest if any issues he would have done the deed.

I have to agree on this. Because in all this he didn't even consider ki wo khud bhi match ho sakta hai ya someone related to him. But I am so happy Anurag or anyone from Basus was a match. Like Kukki has a part of Prerna (she saved her life) similarly sneha is now just Bajaj's.. no ehsaan no nothing :)

He even manipulated Komolika. I always imagine Hina Khan wali komolika when I read yours:)

Thanks

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As mentioned as guess in my last comment fortunately Anurag didn't end being a match. Agar wo save karta Bajaj ki newborn ko to faltoo mein ehsaab ho jata uska.. glad aisa kuch nahi hua.

Trust me I know that is also one reason to show Rishab going to the Basus,because had he attacked they might have had an upper hand as what deal do you offer for a small kids life. The Basus would have been more insufferable but this way he is the bigger person. He has the upper hand.

Exactly. So you played it smart.. Bajaj ka wo side bhi you showed that he can go to any extent to protect his people and Basus se bhi bacha liya 😃

Now I have to read the next one.. though I would loved for Bajaj to be the match but Kukki it is, it seems..

Yup kukki it is. He did all this for her and now life has come a full square back to him.

Yassss... but poor Kukki. She is so small yet so strong..

Be back with next one.

You are so quick with updates smiley4

It was weekend had time and plus this one I had written both almost together as they go with the flow and then divided them into chapters. So the next one I haven't even started yet.

Even then you are pretty quick with updates.. and I am happy for you.. because some people like take miserably long and have to disconnect with almost everything to write.. islie aaj I have decided to read stories I am following.. aaj no update day..

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Chapter 7

I can totally relate with Bajaj when he couldn't blv how Anurag wasn't a match and he wanted the tests done again. When you brought Basus in to the picture I had a feeling that he could be a possible match.. but also didn't want him.. but acha hua he wasn't even after retest and no foul game was played manipulating the reports. He was genuinely not a match.. such a relief..

Mohini Basu got a chance to taunt Bajaj because he is in a messed up situation himself. But koi nahi.. he has more important stuff to take care of than engage with her..

So finally doctors announce that Kukki is the perfect match. Though both Prerna and Bajaj had sane reaction in the beginning that Kukki is too young to go through this but after a while Bajaj got all practical which was the need of the hour.

What I liked the most was how far Prerna has come that she has taken Kukki as her own and she is even ready to put her interest above sneha. She is looking for other options but not ready to risk Kukki's life because abhi to she has got her voice and began a normal life like every child of her age..

So the tough decision was taken.. 😒Kukki is finaly going for a surgery alongwith Sneha wo bhi Prerna ko bina bataye.. I loved how Bajaj told her about everything even the pain she will have to bear for sometime post surgery. But his girl is braver than he thought.

Prerna slepy peacefully while other three were going through a lot worse and she isn't aware or part of it. I get it how mad prerna is going to be..


Wonderful chapter.. Going to re-read the next one.. :)

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Like I mentioned earlier too, what a dard se bhara chapter it is..😒

Biggest relief is both the girls are past complications and recovering under the care of their parents. Parents who are aware of what the other one is going through but won't say a word. Because what ever happened and the way it happened took a toll on them a big time. Totally relatable.

Prerna's silence/ indifference/ sorrow/ anger whatever we may call it is absolutely justified. Anyone would do that.

Also bajaj responding with silece is also understandable. Because it a time for question and answers, fights or accusations or explanations. Focus is well being of his family..

Moloy came to see them. But Anurag should may be focus on his life with Komolika if he has nothing to say other than his harsh words in such circumstances. He should possibly sit alone and reflect on his own actions..

Everyone is so tired and exhausted and may be angry tooo with themselves .. sply Bajaj .. wo decision lena wasn't easy on him.. but he had to in lack.of any choixe. All that seemed to have bottled up, ko gusse mein nikal diya bande ne..

Lets see aage kya.. Prerna will be deeply hurt but I want her to understand ..

A great chap bringing out a lot of emotions the family is going through.. looking forward to what happens next..

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Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Chapter 7

I can totally relate with Bajaj when he couldn't blv how Anurag wasn't a match and he wanted the tests done again. When you brought Basus in to the picture I had a feeling that he could be a possible match.. but also didn't want him.. but acha hua he wasn't even after retest and no foul game was played manipulating the reports. He was genuinely not a match.. such a relief..

Mohini Basu got a chance to taunt Bajaj because he is in a messed up situation himself. But koi nahi.. he has more important stuff to take care of than engage with her..

So finally doctors announce that Kukki is the perfect match. Though both Prerna and Bajaj had sane reaction in the beginning that Kukki is too young to go through this but after a while Bajaj got all practical which was the need of the hour.

What I liked the most was how far Prerna has come that she has taken Kukki as her own and she is even ready to put her interest above sneha. She is looking for other options but not ready to risk Kukki's life because abhi to she has got her voice and began a normal life like every child of her age..

So the tough decision was taken.. 😒Kukki is finaly going for a surgery alongwith Sneha wo bhi Prerna ko bina bataye.. I loved how Bajaj told her about everything even the pain she will have to bear for sometime post surgery. But his girl is braver than he thought.

Prerna slepy peacefully while other three were going through a lot worse and she isn't aware or part of it. I get it how mad prerna is going to be..

Wonderful chapter.. Going to re-read the next one.. :)


Thank you so much for the amazing comments.

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Thank you so much for the amazing comments.

I am really sorry I was too late..

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Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Like I mentioned earlier too, what a dard se bhara chapter it is..😒

Biggest relief is both the girls are past complications and recovering under the care of their parents. Parents who are aware of what the other one is going through but won't say a word. Because what ever happened and the way it happened took a toll on them a big time. Totally relatable.

Prerna's silence/ indifference/ sorrow/ anger whatever we may call it is absolutely justified. Anyone would do that.

Also bajaj responding with silece is also understandable. Because it a time for question and answers, fights or accusations or explanations. Focus is well being of his family..

Moloy came to see them. But Anurag should may be focus on his life with Komolika if he has nothing to say other than his harsh words in such circumstances. He should possibly sit alone and reflect on his own actions..

He cannot take any actions that is why he goes around making accusation on other people for his problems.

Everyone is so tired and exhausted and may be angry tooo with themselves .. sply Bajaj .. wo decision lena wasn't easy on him.. but he had to in lack.of any choixe. All that seemed to have bottled up, ko gusse mein nikal diya bande ne..

Lets see aage kya.. Prerna will be deeply hurt but I want her to understand ..

They both have to understand each other and maybe they both need to walk away from this madness and reflect on themselves

A great chap bringing out a lot of emotions the family is going through.. looking forward to what happens next..

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raat main sorry aaj thoda kaam hain and I have to make some changes on the chapter also

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Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

I am really sorry I was too late..


Thats ok 😊

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Chapter 9 – Let go of the past

“Aap log dono ghar ja rahin hain abhi isi waqt. 4 weeks se isi stress main ghum rahin hain aap dono.Kab last soye the theek se aap dono yaad hain aapko. Kukki aur Sneha ke pass main aur Sharma family hain. They are perfectly fine Doctor has said they will discharge them on Monday. You will go home. You both need to go away and you need some rest.”

“No” Rishab and Prerna said it together

“Mr & Mrs Bajaj agar aap theek nahin hongi aap un bachiyon ka khayal kaise rakhenge. We are here. We are here. Please” Mr Mehra

“Fine let us meet them both” Prerna and Mr Bajaj together

“No, you are going home.Abhi right now. you will not come back until Monday and take rest. Thak gayi hoon aap logo ki aise faces dekh dekh ke. Fix whatever it is and comeback. I am here for Sneha. Now” Kukki said from behind

Mr Bajaj and Prerna reached home and she asked Chandu to get dinner ready. She went to freshen up in her room and sat at the table for dinner. When Mr Bajaj didn’t come for along time, he prepared a food tray and went into the Study. Without saying she took another glass and poured herself some. Mr Bajaj was surprised.

“You don’t need anything food or anything else if you have this, it makes you feel better after this so maybe I will too.” She drank all in one go and start coughing and spit out half. Mr Bajaj smiled at her reaction, he poured another glass of water and gave it to her which she finished in a moment.

“Thanks. This!!! how do you drink this?” Prerna

“Aap khana kha lijiye aur rest kijiye mujhe bhuk nahin hain” Mr Bajaj

“Isse pet nahin bharta.Please kuch kha lijiye. Please”. And was leaving when she heard Mr Bajaj

“Main sirf Komolika se Mrbasu ka pata chahta tha woh tab tak nahin batati jab tak Mr basu ko khone kadar nahin hota. Uske liye mujhe jo sahi laga maine kiya”

“Na maine kuch pucha na mujhe janana hain. Jo Rishta aapka Sneha aur Kukki se hain who mera bhi hain,jis tarah you wanted to protect Sneha I wanted to protect Kukki, isme aapki meri life main ya meri aapki life main importance se kuch nahin hain. Doyou know what it felt like when I woke up and found out about everything? All went well but what if it…? Do you how scary that thought is ki main nahin”

“Do I know Do I know”Giving a sarcastic laugh

“We cannot keep doing this again and again. Please aap khana kha lijiye aur jaake rest kijiye you need it”and with that he poured another drink.

Frustrated she left. She tried to sleep in their room but she just couldn’t so she went to Kukki’s room.

In Kukki’s room Prerna found Kukki’s scrap book that she had made with her. She saw all the moments that they had spent together and every time he looked at Mr Bajaj in any pic her heart skipped a beat. At one time she had thought of him as a curse but today this man was a blessing. The way he fought for Sneha, what he was ready to do for Sneha. She had to get him out of this madness. But somewhere her tiredness took over and she slept.

Mr Bajaj missed her he missed her in his arms her rants her stupidity her smile. He had drunk a little too much and the hunger made it worse so he finished the last drink in a shot and went to his room. During his path he saw Prerna in Kukki’s room asleep on her bed. He put a blanket on her and kissed her head. He wanted to join beside her but she was sleeping peacefully and he didn’t want to disturb her. Prerna woke up just as he left.

He went to his room and since his head was spinning, he went and stood under the shower. He put on the stream to hot and kept increasing the temp. The sharp droplets were hitting him like needles and he liked it. Thinking about the whole month about what he had said to Prerna and what they are going through. Just then Prerna walked into the room. She could hear the stream and called for Mr Bajaj but when Mr Bajaj didn’t respond she got scared and went in and found Mr Bajaj under the stream.

“Mr Bajaj?” Her hands went into the stream and she jerked it out realizing how hot it was.

“Mr bajaj kya kar rahin hain bahar aaiye bahar aaiye ” but he didn’t budge and she went near beside him under the stream and tried to change the temp but he kept moving her hand away.But Prerna kept fighting and was able to make the temperature as cold and they both stood like that in the shower for a long time. She took his face in her hands.

“Rishab” and held his face in her hands.

Rishabh held her hands near his face “Woh 8 hours jab who dono OT main thi, Kukki aur Sneha ke saath saath aapka aur mera Rishta was at stake. That fear that fear of losing you all”

She grabbed him by his arms “Isi baat ka to gussa hain mujhe ek baar aur koshish to karte samjhane ki,nahin manti to daant lete chila lete aur phir karlete apni manmani waise bhi kiapne akele kyun suffer kiya and you are right main yeh decision nahin le sakti thi kabhi bhi nahin. but I wish I wish main us waqt strong ban pati aapke aur Kukki ke saath hoti aapke saath khadi ho pati. aakpo akele sab kuch kaise handle kiya hoga aapne kaise.” And hugged him and Rishab hugged her back.

“Isse jyada dar mujhe zindagi main kabhi nahin laga. par Sneha ki jo halat thi mujme himmat nahin thi ladne ki aapko samjhane ki. mujhe laga jo hoga dekh lunga, bas Sneha aur kukki theek thak bahar aa jaye sab dekh lunga. Mujhe laga yeh mera decision hi hona tha, mere liye ek decision ki wajah se yeh sab kuch hua hain so.”

She broke the hug and looked straight at him “Aapke akele ka tha decision, wasn’t I a part of it.Apne proposal rakha tha maine mana in that way meri jyada galti hain. Nahin”

“Prerna?”

“What Prerna Please Stop punishing yourself. Hum yahan hote ya wahan yeh sab hota par Agar aap nahin hote to aaj Sneha nahin hoti mere pass who nahin hoti so please stop. Manti hoon aapne mujhe kuch dino ka dukh diya hain par aaj meri har Khushi aapse hain aapki wajah se hain. Sirf aapse. Aur dusri baat You are not alone anymore. Aap ab akele nahin hai main hoon, aaj ke baad kabhi aapka koi bhi decision aapka nain hoga hamara hoga. You will never do anything alone. Never. I will be there always. Ladke jhagad ke shayad be man se par hum saath lange“and Rishab nodded“Aur Aur Kukki meri beti hain suna aapne. Suna apne. AAj sun liya dobara agar aapne bola”

“AApki beti hain sirf aapki beti hain, aap hi ne to di hain mujhe, aapne hi ne to di hain mujhe” and he hugged her

“I missed you. I missed you so so much.”

“Maine miss nahin kiya aapko. Naraz aapne kiya tha aapko manana padega. Us din to bade shaan se Aapne bola tha aap mujhe mana lenge har baar har b…” And before she could finish MrBajaj kissed her as if saying to her “Sorry for not telling you about Kukki”but no words coming out

“for not saying this before” and he continued

“for taking so much time tosay this and I missed you I missed you so so much” and somehow after weeks they both felt like they could breathe that they were whole. But as much as Rishab wanted to continue stopped and was about to leave when Prerna hugged her from behind.

“Please don’t go please.”

“Prerna I don’t want tohurt you; you are not well, you are weak and.”

“You are my strength and y oucan never hurt me. I am fine, I am fine”

and that is all that he needed to hear.They freed each other from the wet clothes that they were wearing and Mr Bajaj picked her up not leaving her lips for a second. Prerna tied her legs around his waist and hands around his head and they moved to the room where they both drowned themselves into one another forgetting everything. No words were necessary between them. At first Rishab was restless, impatient, demanding but Prerna matched him at every point surrendering everything. She knew It was his way for holding onto something, forgetting his pain, making himself believe that she was there and would always be. She trusted him And just like that when Rishab realised that it became too much for her he slowed down making her feel loved, making her feel cherished and erasing any doubt that she ever had in her mind and then went on to marking each and every inch of hers as his and she let him because she was his with every fibre of her being she was his Prerna and he was her Rishab.

It was almost as if they came to a conclusion that they were done, they were done being apologetic for their choices for their circumstances for other people’s mistakes for other people’s opinions.

After some hours while they were lying next to each other and Mr Bajaj was telling Prerna about his talk with Kukki before the transplant.

“Meri beti bahut stronghai” Prerna

“Haan sirf aapki?” MrBajaj

“Hamari Rishab Hamari”Prerna and MRBajaj didn’t say anything and just looked at his eyes pleading and Prerna understood.

“Rishab Rishab Rishab” and she started trailing kisses on his face every time she said it

But just then Mr Bajaj suddenly got up as he remembered something.

“Kaha?” Prerna

“One minute” Mr Bajaj

He went to get his and took out a small jewellery box from it.

“Yeh?”

Rishab opened it and Prerna found his mother’s ring that she had been wearing for so many days. They had removed in hospital for some tests and she had given it to Rishab and in all the madness that followed she hadn’t worn it again.

“May I?” Prerna nodded with teary eyes.

Rishab took it and put it on her finger just like their wedding day. Prerna noticed that now it had two stones.

“Kukki and Sneha. Aap Kukki aur Sneha sab kuch hain mere.” And he wiped a tear “Prerna?”

“Mere baba kahte the jo apni marzi se na ho usme ishwar ki marzi hoti hain, hamari Khushi chupi hoti hain. It is destiny and you are mine Rishab” with tears in her eyes.

“Please aap phir se rona mat suru kijiye. Actually, acha hain mujhe manane ka mauka mil jayega”

“No Rishab chodiye” and with this they continued.

Rishab woke up in the early morning hours to find Prerna missing. She was sitting in the balcony floor having coffee and looking at rising sun. Rishab came from behind and sat next to her on the floor and engulfed her in his arms.

“Coffee? Maine Maa se baat ki thi Kukki aur Sneha theek hain. We can go around afternoon.” Prerna and MrBajaj nodded.

“Kukki has issued orders.She was missing us but uska reason tha ki akele main hum ek dusre ka murder na karde so bula lo.” And both started to laugh.

“Can we do this every morning just 10 mins you and me and nobody else?” Prerna

“Yes, if the turn of events remains the same every night?” and smirked.

Prerna smiling turned her face away. Mr Bajaj tried to move her hair to one side of the neck and whispered into her ear

“Aap theek hain? Jyada hurt to nahin kiya maine aapko?” Prerna turned around and hugged him tightly andsaid

“Just do a shave, please.”While caressing his face and they started laughing and he touched her head to his and they sat like this drinking coffee and that is how this whole scenario became a ritual.


Chapter 10 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5163074?pn=29#153393256

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