MiNeil new story "Embrace the Love" Epilogue on pg 111 - Page 89

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Posted: 3 years ago

Love changes people and love did change Neil and Mini also here.I shall not say fully but they did change thoda thoda automatically for each other in love but he is still bully , arrogant and Mini is still cute ,childish , stubborn which you have not shown in last part but left to readers and I liked this .😉  well written. Good thing is you did not drag the FF and ended it on right time.

Am looking forward for your other crisp story and strong MiNeil.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Nayaab_Cheez

Love changes people and love did change Neil and Mini also here.I shall not say fully but they did change thoda thoda automatically for each other in love but he is still bully , arrogant and Mini is still cute ,childish , stubborn which you have not shown in last part but left to readers and I liked this .😉  well written. Good thing is you did not drag the FF and ended it on right time.

Am looking forward for your other crisp story and strong MiNeil.

Thanks a lot for all the appreciation and love

Yes i have nit written here about mineil being same and yet changed with time. I only focused here on their changed habits but there were subtle hints like neil stopping mini from working on sunday and mini defending her office were tje proof that they haven't changed fully😆

After neil's mom story nothing was left much to drag this story thats why i ended it

Will surely come with another mineil story soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful story... Last part and epilogue were amazing. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful happy family..... 


Mineil are incomplete without arya.... ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Hannie_Fan

Beautiful story... Last part and epilogue were amazing. 

Thanks a Lot🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Beautiful happy family..... 


Mineil are incomplete without arya.... ❤️

Yes arya ko toh aana hi tha❤️😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow anjali 🤗

Beautiful story 🤗

Arya is ff me bhi 😳

Beautiful chand family charo ki



Baaki tumhe bhi thanks 🤗

 itne acche inspiration Vale ff likhne ke liye😆


P. S. Mujhe Agar koi shayriya or ryminng dil me aa rahi ho to  me rereading me jarurur likhungi or shole jaisi koi theory ho to vo bhi

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Sushdvj

Wow anjali 🤗

Beautiful story 🤗

Arya is ff me bhi 😳

Beautiful chand family charo ki



Baaki tumhe bhi thanks 🤗

 itne acche inspiration Vale ff likhne ke liye😆


P. S. Mujhe Agar koi shayriya or ryminng dil me aa rahi ho to  me rereading me jarurur likhungi or shole jaisi koi theory ho to vo bhi

Thanks

Arya ke bina mineil ki family adhuri hai

Bilkul you are most welcome to write shayri and shole like scenes😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Fabulous epilogue

Love it

Thanks

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Yes but i liked that pehle wala arrogant weirdo more🤣


Next story keep him like that and fulfill your wish . 😉 you are the writer .You can take advantage of being writer .