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Chapter 3

(A girl made her way out of bathroom, fixing her hair aside, by look it was clear she was retiring for night, however before she could get on bed, her attention went on cell kept on bed table. A message notification, the profession she's in not every time, her work come through calls, hence she didn't dare to ignore it. Picking up the cell she went through her message box).

"A news worth TRP"!.."check mail"!..

(Again a new number, however the girl didn't dare to ponder upon, person who sent this message, but in anticipation to get good news, she went through her Email, there pics of drug consignment being caught, the ass***le who was carrying out the dirty task were tied and unconscious, caught by cops. There was article over it as well. She continued going through entire message, at end "You're worth to Telecast this news"! "Naina Sharma no else could entertain me"! either than you"!. She didn't wasted minute and forward it to other person, then minutes later went through her contact list, dialing a number, she set the phone on her shoulder with her head bent sideways. And rush to get cloth out of almirah. Surely it's not time for her to stay at home. But go out on office to telecast the news on channel. It's been month, she's coming across such a news, with full proof fact's check. Surely it's get her channel receive huge TRP. But it was getting mysterious for her as well. "Who this person could be"? Why it's always me"? who get these news first, "with this same cheeky line"! no one can Telecast this new better then me"?..her thoughts comes to halt by the robotics answer of women from other side).

"The number you're trying"! currently not responding"! please try after sometime"!

(Muttering few colorful words, She threw the cell on bed rush to Bathroom, hurriedly stepping out in white U-cut top and red Sweet-pant holding red blazer in hand come running and picking her cell up again try the number, this time the person received the call. Without going on formal greetings she directly asked at once).

"Is it true"?...

"Evening to you to Naina"!..

(She sigh a relief, getting in her car by now she ask again, realizing it beforehand it's true, by the panting voice of person other side, driving speedily, of-course like Always he must be one to take charge of such case).

"Is it true Ajay"?..

"Yes it is "! I am the one who is going to take report on this"!..

"Great"!..

(Saying this Naina Sharma cut the call making Ajay sigh in relief, stepping out of car he inspected the scene of crime, while his men had covered the area already. The men were still unconscious and tied up on truck only. But they all seems mere worker the leader is nowhere at sight. Either he ran away or he will be out in open day later, dead like previous one. This is going on for Months, someone is working for them, helping them to caught black world smuggling consignment, be Human trafficking circuit, drug, weapon smuggling. Not only they will get to caught it, but they will find the leader who will be charge of carrying out such job, dead day later always. As cop he knew in such circumstances he's ought to investigate, but here they're even working day night cannot get clue behind about person who is helping them. Nor they able to show such a Excellence in work. One thing they're sure the person who help them and the one who kill the leaders are two different person. Cause The person who caught these mission or help them surely non-violent person , the number of time they caught people , not even single drop of blood will shed of them. They will be unconscious tied up always at the time of their arrival. But the leaders dead body when they find they will be always Astonished by the brutally Bestowed upon them. And this had him very much cautious, "What intention the person held behind helping them"? Why he/she doesn't come out in open, why this person wants sharp news about such crimes"? As if the person is aiming for big fish to come, the real Owner of this black world, which will surely happen soon , when they will see their business being destroy, their root's being uprooted from here. If that's the case then this person surely an ally of them, if not then they needs to be wary of this person. But presently he have no choice but to go ahead with the task he have in hand. And no matter what battle he have with his own self, he's other name of perfection when it's comes to his action of carrying out his duty. Fixing his cap he walked further towards one men ,who was being interrogated by his colleague).

"No we didn't saw anyone"! Nor we heard anything"!..

(Again no use to intro-gate them about the attacker, clicking finger he gesture his men to take them away. A look at his face anyone can say how exhausted he's, but none can discard the truth he's isn't one to rest, until he gets done with his job, Ajay Singhania a most sincere and dedicated cop they could ever work with).

"Sir what we're supposed to do now"?...

"Investigate"!.. dig deeper Rohan I am sure we can get clue about this person"!..

(Rohan gave a nod, however a yawn escape from his mouth, which he try to prevent but failed miserably. Ajay stare at him then smilingly shook his head at him. But before he could speak anything, sound of screeching tires halt, made his attention snapped on the arrival of car. There she's Naina Sharma, anyone on her place getting nod from officer that news is true will, proceed with telecast but here she will take first look into it herself. But again this is how dedicated she's to her work).

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(Paridhi walked around the hall searching for her father, while constantly thanking others for congratulating her, She was starting to feel bored, and found her foot ache cause of heel she wore, it wasn't comfortable for her anymore spotting her father at the other side of hall, with some of bussiness associate, she made her way through discreetly spaced-tables to outside, all aglow with it's neon lights. The night sky was so beautiful, air was cool on her skin, the night air caressed by the scent of jasmine and the crepe myrtles in bloom. At this time she was the only who is not inside at the party. That also means there were no other persons around her. Standing out on there, letting a cool breeze blow across her bare shoulders, Pari exhale a sigh in relief She looked around the big yard,there was a small sitting area that dwelled in the trees, still in the sight line of the restaurant. It was a nice spot. She liked it. Enjoying view she didn't heard footsteps approaching, a voice called her but she didn't turn around. The person chocked again unfortunately result was the same. Therefore when a hand came to her elbow, she got started and responded fearfully. Assuming it to be her own father she spoke out loud turning around).

"Oh hell Dad you scared me"!..

(But When she turned around to take a look she trailed off on her words, sighting a charming Men standing before her with raised hands defensively and giving her apologetic look. Outside in the relative quiet he spoke in a guilty tone).

"Pardon me for scaring you"! But in my defense I will say I did called out for you"!..to wish you"! "Congratulations for winning Most prestigious annual Bussiness award"!..

"That's Alright and thank you Mr"!..

"Rajat Singh Rathor"!..

"Thank you Mr Rathor"!... Don't tell me you're not party person"?...

"Honestly yes I am not"! but for sake of bussiness we learn to adjust"!...

"You're right Mr Rathor"!...

"Call me Raj Mr Rathor sound way to formal term"!..

"Are we really aquinted with each other enough"? to use informal endearment to conduct conversation"!

(Ask Paridhi with a raised brow as she take appearance of Rajat, even if he had smile on face, it wasn't enough to hid his dominant aura of authority. And that's itself was enough to get her guard up. Where's Situation was quite different on Rajat side , he never had a way with words, especially around drop dead gorgeous Girl like Paridhi, and sparkling conversation was not his forte. However here he knew what he needs to say and how).

"Not yet but we should always be ready for such informality in bussiness world"!...

"Ofcourse"! we never know who we rely on later as ally or stood against as Foe"!..

"Excuse me Madam"! Sir"! May I bring you some coffee? Or Liqueurs"?

(The waitress approached them from nowhere before she could finished herself. She waited for quite while incase He wants to order first. But what happen next was left her speechless in very annoyed manner).

"Yes please. Just coffee for me, but bring a glass of vintage Armagnac for Miss Rajput"!.

"Right away sir"!

(She was gone before Pari increasingly frantic signals of disapproval could be articulated. Even if she's if fond to drink then it's just to savour taste never much but from the time they arrived she had quite good shot of wine. One more shot won't work for her and she found herself getting cautious about her surroundings).

"You'll love it. Honestly. Once you've tasted it, you'll understand why I insisted. Trust me"!..

"It's not about liking"!.. I don't like other making decisions for me"!

(Surely you don't"! but You will in future"! thought Rajat inwardly as he sighted the waitress coming back drinks. she took the first sip of the drink which was served in an enormous brandy balloon. Her face melted into a grin and she closed her eyes. Relishing the taste of first sip).

"This is I am speechless"!..

"Told you"! Besides it's good to let others take a lead"!..

(His words caught her off guard, as she realised the depth of his spoken words, the change of Expression didn't escape from the observing intense gaze of Rajat but he waited to let her speak up).

You aren't"!...

"Here's my Daughter"!.. Pari meet my former Bussiness associate Mr Ajit Singh Rathor"!..Mrs Natasha Singh Rathor"!..

"I believe you already met My son Young lady"?...Rajat"!..

"Greetings Mr And Mrs Rathor"!.. um yes I did"!..

"Hopefully we didn't disturb you both"!...

(Rajat just shrugged his shoulder, while Paridhi glance at Prithvi then Mr Rathor then spoke calmly with smile on face. Trying to make a observing glance more judgemental but the neutral expression on Paridhi face made it clear. Nothing much happen between her and Rajat yet. Nor even close to good conversation and this made him little bit wary of his own decision. He shared a glance at Prithvi and watch him giving a loop sided grin. As if telling him told you she's isn't one to get impressed so soon).

"No not at all"!.. "It was just formal introduction nothing important"!...

"Alright but congratulations Paridhi"!..

"Thank you Mr Mrs Rathor"!.. Pardon me but we will like to leave now"!.. "Dad"!.

(Ajit Natasha didn't said anything just gave a nod, Whereas Rajat smirk inwardly at her words. As the three of the watch the retreating back of Paridhi and Prithvi walking hand in hand more like Paridhi was leaning on Prithvi for support to walk further. Breakings his stare Ajit spoke in firm tone which was more like mocking one at end).

"You look quite fancy by her"!..."wish could say the same about her for you"!...

"You will Dad"! soon very soon"!.

(His determined voice ,made Ajit little surprised but he mask his emotions before other could caught. He try to judge his son behaviour but none make sense to him. Something is up"! "But what"? As much he wants success he doesn't want it at the cost of someone joyous life. So watching the firm determine entirely bussiness men persona of his son left him little bewildered).

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"Dad"!.. "I am not able to sleep"!..

(Spoke the girl rubbing her eyes, as she wounded her hands around the neck of men sitting on couch, going through some paperwork in hand. Smiling he closed the files and put the paper aside then tilted his head up on right side grinning).

"Who is reason behind you being sleep deprived Pari"?...

"Mr Rathor's son"!..

(The smile wiped of from his face as he look at front, pulling Pari besides him on couch, who made herself comfortable on couch, by half laying on couch keeping her head on his lap. Prithvi caressed her head while running his finger on her hair as she closed her eyes).

"He seems good but"!.."however I do feel good vibe around him"!.. "he possess Dominating aura of authority"!

"He's in bussiness world Pari"!..

"I know Dad but I he scare me"!...

(Prithvi gaze hardened up, as soon he heard her words of getting scared he was ready to fire her with question. About what he did to make her scared his fatherly protective feeling kicked in. But before he could speak he heard her words).

"Like seriously first he startled me" by coming before me out of nowhere"! then he dare to make decision of ordering wine for me"!..

(Listening her words Prithvi end up chuckling out loud, making her eyes snapped open as she stared up at him. She made a face watching how he's having fun at her annoyance. Earning her attention starightly Prithvi tried to stop himself from laughing further but her look break his resolve and he start laughing more. Making her whin in annoyance as she spoke further to make her point clear).

"Stop laughing Dad I am serious"!... It's not amusing such a people are dangerous"!.. the risk of dealing with them is high"!... Specially in matter of having faith"!..

(As soon the words reach his hear his laugh stopped on own accord, staring back at Paridhi he realised she's indeed right, where's Pari who from all the way at home and time after meeting Rajat was thinking about him his words, wad surely gotten work up if one day she's isn't affected by his charm his personality then it's white lie. Or only she was impressed by his look but extremely affected by his ways, she found him intriguing as well dangerous, he shown his clever and dominant. With so much ease he taken liberty of her lost thoughts, before she could even express her displeasure or disagreement over his action. And this gotten her thoughtful for first time she felt like she net her match in competition however she was wary of him even in mild exchange of civility she happen to sense intention behind his act of conducting conversation with her).

"Don't worry Pari it's not like you needs to meet him often"!..

"That doesn't ease me Dad"!.. i I fail to pin point but he's it's look like he's fire whoever will get close will burn with him"!.

"Pari"!..

"Dad I I never felt this way"! But his gaze his look his expression his voice his words his body language all of them"!.. "Seem to intrigue me at same time seems to warn me"!.. I know I am not making sense by my word but"!..

"Take it easy Princess"!.. first calm yourself"!.. "it's not good to get worked up cause one meet with someone"!..

"That's what I am saying dad"!.. it's not good to feel interested to meet person again from heart"!. "Get warning signal from mind against same wish"!.

(Advise Prithvi finally understanding the dilemma of his daughter, the boy is manipulative dominant, even offending others , he could make others guilty , when they will express their sentiment over his action. And this is surely not good and he could find himself against Rajat being companion of his daughter. However watching his daughter , back in mind he could visualise the mocking smile of Ajit Singh Rathor, as if conveying him told you it's hard resist from getting intrigued by my son. The reply he received from her got him speechless, how could someone intrigued her at one meet, frown deepen on his forehead with concern. However him running his hand on her head and the silence, him being lost in thought provided protective comfort which push Paridhi to sleep. Deciding not to wake her up he carried her In arms soundlessly without much efforts. perk of her being heavy sleeper was, she didn't waked up at all).

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"You're awake Prithvi"?..

(Ask Gayatri approaching him , in the garden where Prithvi was walking barefooted, with hands crossed behind, dressed in full sleeved knee length white Kurta and pajama. Her query halted him on his step as well his thoughts , as he turned around to face her. His lips curved up in smile watching her taking off her cap rolling her stick in hand).

"Welcome back"! I never slept without seeing you back at home"!..

(Sensing slight hesitation in his eyes, she knew there's something eating him up from within. "But what"? What made him so unsure or concern"? Knowing analyzing on own won't help she spoke out loud).

"What happened"? "Where's Pari"? Is everything alright"?

"She retired for night"! And yes everything is fine"!

"Then what's bothering you"?

"I received proposal for her"! Marriage one not straightly but the intention was oblivious"! But I don't know how to convey the same to her"!..

"Seriously Prithvi"? Why would you want to spoil an innocent life"? By marrying your naughty Princess with him"? you will ruin the poor soul's life Prithvi"!

(Ask Gayatri straightly making herself comfortable on Swing, While Prithvi who was ready to speak why he's feeling low, frowned listening her word's and turn to her, watching her sitting on Swing he walked closer to her and started giving slow push to Swing).

"Care to Elaborate"! how Marrying my gem of Daughter"! could ruin the life of Men"?

"Your daughter Lacked everything a men want's from his to be companion of life"! She know nothing about House Chorus don't even know the C of cooking"! Have no fondness towards decent cloth's"! Emotion such as shyness are foreign words to her"! she's outspoken, Blunt, Stubborn, Reckless and Spoiled"! Because of you your love"!

(Prithvi Silently hear her words, slowly keep pushing the swing, He try to find some reasonable excuse behind her words of saying the men's life will be spoiled, but ironically he found none. whatever she said it's true, but this doesn't feel wrong to him, Cloth's doesn't define character, After leaving her home accepting new home new people in life, cause of one person, is enough sacrifice and adjustment on her part. why she have to go through the situation as compromise"? it's sheer injustice on her. "what's wrong in Being outspoken or Stubborn"? when it's always favorable for her happiness"! thought Prithvi inwardly but didn't spoke for long minute, but sensing the gaze of Gayatri over himself. he opened his mouth then slowly halted the swing by holding it from behind then come in front before her and spoke firmly).

"I expected Better Opinion when it's about my daughter"! Decency of person isn't define from their cloth's, outspoken, outgoing and blunt behavior"! but from their Gestures Their Kind heart"! There's no definition of perfect companion of life"! Which book it's written that if you're girl"! you need to be shy, Obedient, sacrificial, Cook and well acquainted with House chorus"?

"Prithvi I"...

"I am not done yet"! you know I know"! People of Our Society turn orthodox Biased and Evil"! Not Our Religion it was never Orthodox or Biased"! I raised her well enough to make her stood up for herself"! I will make sure Whoever will held her hand will be worthy"! Cause he will be lucky to get her as the Companion of life"!

(Gayatri inhale sharp intakes of breath, as she stared at Prithvi look he wasn't looking enraged his face was calm, but one look at his eyes one can clearly understand the annoyance and anger. He doesn't appreciate Anyone speaking against his daughter, doesn't matter the speaker is mother of his daughter or owner of his heart. And for second she got intimated by his stare, He could be truly dominating at times but that's cause of who he is, realizing she have nothing to say on this, not cause she's isn't left with any point to put forth to retort him. But because she know, that's least he will appreciate she change the topic).

"From whom you received Proposal for her"!

"Rathor's"! But That doesn't matter who put forth the proposal"! what matter is how to convey her about it"!.

(All color drained from Gayatri face, listening his words one look at him she knew even he's isn't happy. But she wasn't Upto look into his show but her own daughter. "Rathor's"? Natasha and Ajit's son Rajat"? That rich close dominant boy"! Have he lost it"? How could he even consider their proposal for Pari"? Why he didn't rightly rejected it"? Thought she inwardly as she rose from swing getting on ground matching Upto his eye level she ask straightly).

"How could you Prithvi"? "Why you didn't reject"? "Don't you know how he's"?..our daughter isn't one to tolerate reserved closed book attitude"!...

"Unbelievable here I am concern how to pull this topic before her"! And you're bother about them"?

(Listening this Gayatri closed her eyes, to calm her ragging nerves, inhaling sharp intakes of breath. She open her eyes minute later then spoke staring straightly in his eyes. Making him retreat one step away from her).

"You acknowledge their proposal"! Didn't rejected cause of their proposal you're ready to talk with her"! And you're indirectly calling my concern unimportant"?..

"No" if I hadn't rejected I hadn't accepted either"!. It's just I want to let her know she have to think about her life"! apart from business and outings with friend"!.. and most importantly they just talk about it"!.. to make me give thought to about them"!..

(Gayatri nodded in agreement, realising she indeed over reacted. Ofcourse being close to Pari he will be first one to reject if the guy isn't worthy. She averted her gaze then walked a little away from him. Walking near the jasmine flower plant).

"So what's matter"? "You can talk with her"!

"I can but I don't know how to"!..

"By use of toungue move of lips"! Ofcourse by mouth Prithvi"!.. have you forget how to talk"?..

"Can you get's serious for once"?...I am aware how to speak but don't know how to bring this topic before her"!..

(Gayatri nodded but said nothing this time, obviously understanding the situation, talking with their daughter about marriage is something both have no idea how to do so. It's not like they didn't try before, they did, but she will always make up excuse or straightforwardly stop them. Not to talk further on the subject, she stare up at Prithvi and then got idea what to do, watching her expression Prithvi sense her success in getting some idea so he ask impaitentily).

"What"?..

"Her friends could help us in this"!.. "we will talk with them"!..

"why I didn't got this idea"!

(Gayatri smirk then spoke in trading manner staring up at him, while Prithvi scoff inwardly realizing how he gave a chance out to Her To tease him).

"Admit it I am smarter then you"!..

"Ofcourse I am"!..

(Replied Prithvi hugging her from side, the way he said ofcourse made her, think he admitted out to her that's she smarter then him. But as soon he said I am got her frown in disbelief she immidately push him then glaring at his way yell his name. Making him chuckled out loud at her reactions and expression. As they both made their way to their own room).

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Originally posted by: James12

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Originally posted by: Aishu.R

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Thank you for a long and wonderful update...

Loved the whole part

Finally they both met...

Being bold & confident girl why did she felt insecured?

She didn't like anyone taking decision for her & he is completely opposite Dominant n Authoritative...

They looks like Poles Apart ...

How their future will be???

He invaded her mind n sleep in short meeting with her ❤️in which no one succeded till now...

Instincts of their parents were so correct like...

No can get away from his charms.

No one can impress her easily

Liked the convo of Pari's parents..

Worried for their daughters future...

What is all that with smuglers n drugs? n who is that mysterious helper?

Is he related to our leads or he is someone of them?

Originally posted by: Aishu.R

Thank you for a long and wonderful update...

"Awe 🤗 and i thank you 🤗 for your time and such a sweet long 😛review😊

Loved the whole part

"I am glad 😃you enjoyed it 😳

Finally they both met...

"Yup they did not for long but they did left impression of their upcoming life for readers 😎

Being bold & confident girl why did she felt insecured?

"It's very common for one to get little be cautious😆 over the sight of stranger as well powerfull persona

She didn't like anyone taking decision for her & he is completely opposite Dominant n Authoritative...

They looks like Poles Apart ...

"True 👍🏼 "Yup they're truly poles apart 😆but again opposite attract 😉 but yeah he's indeed opposite of what she expect and like but likes can change with time

How their future will be???

"Well how will I know perhaps full of fight boom boom 🤣

He invaded her mind n sleep in short meeting with her ❤️in which no one succeded till now...

"Absolutely and he's ought to do it😎 he's hero after all 😆 just see how soon his words comes true sure you don't but you will even finding him extremely repulsive🤓 she's forced to think about him 😆cause of her own heart and mind😎 sure this mean something 😉

Instincts of their parents were so correct like...

No can get away from his charms.

No one can impress her easily

"Surely you're absolutely right 👍🏼 I agree with your point parents cannot be wrong they sense the danger for their child aware of their every nerve of them 😉 that's why they're held on high regards in every religion 🙏🏼

Liked the convo of Pari's parents..

Worried for their daughters future...

"Every parents biggest concern always lies in the future of their kids which sometimes annoy us then we love it to 😳 lucky those who have them and truly make a worth of time they got with their parents 😊

What is all that with smuglers n drugs? n who is that mysterious helper?

Is he related to our leads or he is someone of them?

"Hold your rein of horse my dear😆 we won't want to reveal the mystery before the update 😎 beside if in story the mystery is being introduced in one or other way sure it's going to be related to leads😉 after all the story resolve around them 😎

"Thank you so much 🤗for being second one 😍 to gave such beautiful long review this push me to write next sooner 😳 thank you stay safe 🙏🏼 stay bless 💐 take care 🤗

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"Hold your rein of horse my dear we won't want to reveal the mystery before the update beside if in story the mystery is being introduced in one or other way sure it's going to be related to leads after all the story resolve around them

»» How can i hold when my horse is without Reins " Be-lagam "🤣, It can run as it wishes Cause you keep on creating Suspence n it is getting Unbearable for it...😆

"Thank you so much 🤗for being second one 😍 to gave such beautiful long review this push me to write next sooner 😳 thank you stay safe 🙏🏼 stay bless 💐 take care 🤗

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