FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thrd2 Part 27 Pg-122 Updt. 24th May - Page 98

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

never say never. Ho jayega you can do it 👍🏼 Accha quick updates nahi diya toh main bhi apna story likhna shuru na karungi 🤷‍♀️

Iske liye never hai.. because phone pe nahi ho pata.

Aur jaha tak you writing your story is concerned you were never going to start till poll reaches 50 votes.. apun ke vote ka kidhar bhi koi value tha-ich nahi😒😭

Originally posted by: yogakshema

Ohhh My God!!

It's like all of my thoughts are not only mine. Glad that you understood what I had in my mind. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Hahaaa. Yeyyyy... we are thinking in the same direction I guess. Let's see how I have planned to execute, if that meets your epectations or not.. :)

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

@bold THAT SPEAKS ME MYSELF & I

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@red : the limitations that SS/FF brings. Fact. Which is why I prefer not to write FF/SS. Only one of my FFS are completed rest I couldn't just write or finish because the disconnect happened and I knew nothing can do justice to the stories.

I agree.. I wasn't disconnected with the story I had in my mind but haan beech mein poora IF se hi disconnect ho gaya tha to ye bhi maine socha discontinue kar du. Let's see and I hope this one finds its end..

One thing to say, no one is a born writer. They write learn & relearn & improvise & produce bit biggest of all PUBLISH. So in a way everyone is a writer only they need to share their work..

I agree we all can write but I still don't feel like a writer.. I just type jo dimaag mein hai 🤗

Originally posted by: eishe10

Nice update!

Thank you vey much Eishe for reading.

Love🤗

Originally posted by: yanka

Hello Yanka... thank you for reading :)

Great update.

Glad you liked it..

But would you be also delving into Rishabh's emotions/feeling for Prerna a bit more? I don't get an idea as to what he feels when he sees Prerna...

He seems to be so in control around her and he cannot think beyond Kuki and her equation with Prerna.

Honestly he has no feelings or emotions for her. She is a person who happened to be a part of his recent past for a few months (3 as per this story). His daughter loves her as a mother and that's the only connection that brings them together, and that was the connect that brought them together in the first place. When he left Calcutta post divorce, he was guilty of his action (chaku event) because he ended up hurting his daughter. He gave up on revenge too because his daughter is too precious. Kukki almost hated him but Prerna kind of saved him. He moved back to Mumbai, his old place that has kind of revived his own uncomfortable memories from the past. He doesn't even use a lot of area of his huge house to keep himself in check. His own past stood in front of him in the name of Menaka and Aditya, when the latter deliberately attacked his business but end mein he got his best friend he had lost long back. He started AMRA, a dream project of Ara.. so he has his life to live, his own demons to fight in the past 8-9 month of this story. Isliye he has noo feelings for her.. all he cares about is his daughter at this stage

Now that Prerna is back, he feels she is married with Anurag and living a happy life with their kid.

And why the hell is Prerna not letting him know that there is no Anurag!!!

She is back in Mumbai and just a week has gone. She was the one who wanted to run back to Anurag at any cost when she was married. She left Kukki even after making tall claims as to how much she loved the 5 yr old.

With Anurag gone she had time to invest in herself, reflect on herself and her life. In that process she started her professinal journey, met people from different walks of life. That made her realise how she failed as an individual, she had no identity of her own.

Then she lost her unborn child, losing her child made her realise worth of Kukki. She told her family that she wronged Kukki and want to make things right. She even defended Rishabh and made them (sharmas) realise that they were wrong too. But all this doesn't mean she loves Rishabh.

She lands in Mumbi to get back to Kukki but meets Menaka. And now after seeing Menaka's love for Kuki she is feeling kahin wo mother-daughter ke beech to nahi aa rahi hai.

Is sab ke beech mein I don't think she will go and tell him. She will when she is pushed or triggered to do so. I feel it will be odd that she just goes to him and tell him that Anurag is gone and I want to be back. Because Rishabh and Kukki are not an option, she has to choose him and that will happen when she knows him. I want them to know each other a little, to talk without any influence or sympathy for each other.

Hailaaa I have written so much.. so sorry if any of it made no sense.. 🤗

Thank you again!!!

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Yes why is Prerna making things more complicated and not telling Bajaj about Anurag 😠

Waise usey bas 1 week hua hai Mumbai aake.. let's say she goes to Rishabh and tells him Anurag is gone.. uske baad kya? I would love to know how this angle is playing in your mind as a reader and a writer ..

I'll share mere dimaag mein kya chal rha hai based on characters and their progress ab tak..wo abhi bata bhi degi to Rishabh ke following reactions ho sakte hain..

1. She left his daughter once, she can so it again if Anurag comes back. He becomes over protective if he isn't enough already. So nothing happens

2. He feels a bit of sympathy for her and they mourn the lost child.. uske baad should he take her back in his life? All that he and Kukki went through in those 3 months that they were married wo bhool jayega and starts a life. Prerna ko sab itne aram se milna chahie..

Ab aap batao what kind of outcome are you expexting post revelation. Each one of us interpret situation in our own way, kya pta mujhe kuch naya hi angle mil jaye jo maine socha nahi.. 😊

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Waise usey bas 1 week hua hai Mumbai aake.. let's say she goes to Rishabh and tells him Anurag is gone.. uske baad kya? I would love to know how this angle is playing in your mind as a reader and a writer ..

I'll share mere dimaag mein kya chal rha hai based on characters and their progress ab tak..wo abhi bata bhi degi to Rishabh ke following reactions ho sakte hain..

1. She left his daughter once, she can so it again if Anurag comes back. He becomes over protective if he isn't enough already. So nothing happens

2. He feels a bit of sympathy for her and they mourn the lost child.. uske baad should he take her back in his life? All that he and Kukki went through in those 3 months that they were married wo bhool jayega and starts a life. Prerna ko sab itne aram se milna chahie..

Ab aap batao what kind of outcome are you expexting post revelation. Each one of us interpret situation in our own way, kya pta mujhe kuch naya hi angle mil jaye jo maine socha nahi.. 😊

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

I have a different approach altogether. Where do I sayhere or in pm??

Kahi bhi chalega.. :)

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Kahi bhi chalega.. :)

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

😠 aao udhar "haveli" pe

Do we have a haveli 😱

Address de do 😁