FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thrd2 Part 27 Pg-122 Updt. 24th May - Page 91

Originally posted by: Discolights

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Hello meenu update coming kya yayay

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Hello meenu update coming kya yayay

Hellooo 🤗

Na na abhi kahan.. kal ya parso.. work in progress.. I miss my laptop now .. phone pe type kr krke hath pak gaye 😒

Originally posted by: ilazyair

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Hey look who is here... Riyaaaa 🤗

How are you???

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Hey look who is here... Riyaaaa 🤗

How are you???

Do we know each other?😒

I have long-term-memory-loss🥺

Originally posted by: ilazyair

Do we know each other?😒

I have long-term-memory-loss🥺

Awwww... please don't say that.. 😘

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I know only 1 jupiter wasiii.. 😍

🥺 do na update

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

😁thank you!

You are welcome.🤗

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

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Hey! I am finally going to begin with chapter 1 of your story. Will be back with my thoughts soon...

Chapter 1

I finally read the chapter 1 and I can't understand why I did not do that earlier, missing such a beautiful creation.

The story begins from where Bajaj1 ended and you have so beautifully expressed the farewell scene with little additions and interpretations of you own, like Rishabh asked Masi to hand over the parting letter instead of giving it himself, because he himself was in a mess and felt guilty of his actions.

His dilemma to leave her forever and his little gesture to let Kukki and Prerna spend some more time together because he didn't have heart to separate them.

The best part is restlessness felt by Prerna, as Bajajs were leaving her behind. Her reaction when she heard their cars move.. beautiful.

Attention to such little details made it even more beautiful.

I liked how attention to other characters like Anurag, Tanvi, Masi etc was given. I didn't feel like skipping their parts not even Anurag's that I usually do 😛

And the ending is so intruiging.. Bajajs leaving for Mumbai instead of London. Thank God it's not a live update else I'd be hanging to know what happens next 😃

Beautiful beginning.. looking forward to reading next chapters.

PS. I was sold at how beautifully you wrote Bajaj2 reentry in "I Am Home". With this one you had me at Bajaj1 exit. This is how it should have been ❤️