MayRa/ShivJen DT#71 "Aakhon mein Nami, Hansi Labon Par"- Page 4

Originally posted by: tournesol

Amazing, apke shayari ne char chand laga diye 👏

Thank you tiara...🤗

Originally posted by: Shruthi18

Also their frustration also filled pages with our imaginations😆

Admiration aur frustration chupaye nahi chupta 😆

Originally posted by: tournesol

Admiration aur frustration chupaye nahi chupta 😆

Woh toh hai😆

Originally posted by: tournesol

Admiration aur frustration chupaye nahi chupta 😆

aur imagination bhi...😉😆

Humne sirf qaside padhe the,

jo kisse bann gaye...

likhna chaahte the sirf ek panna,

par wohi panne aaj kitaab bann gaye,,,😎

waah kya likha hai maine....

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Thank you tiara...🤗

🤗 Missed your DT title shayaris

I literally tried to write 4 rhyming lines few days ago, ended up writing just plain prose 😆

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

aur imagination bhi...😉😆

Humne sirf qaside padhe the,

jo kisse bann gaye...

likhna chaahte the sirf ek panna,

par wohi panne aaj kitaab bann gaye,,,😎

waah kya likha hai maine....

Kya baat kya baat 🥳👏

Aaj aap sirf shayara nahi, Ghalib ban gayi hai

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

aur imagination bhi...😉😆

Humne sirf qaside padhe the,

jo kisse bann gaye...

likhna chaahte the sirf ek panna,

par wohi panne aaj kitaab bann gaye,,,😎

waah kya likha hai maine....

Arre wah ...aaj chauke se chakka lage raho ho aap😃

Originally posted by: tournesol

🤗 Missed your DT title shayaris

I literally tried to write 4 rhyming lines few days ago, ended up writing just plain prose 😆

🤗🤗

I missed them too.. but damn this site and ads popping up n then all the frustration my brain was shut off completely..

@ last line.. Dw .. whenever you want to write something will help you with rhyming,,😆

Originally posted by: Shruthi18

Woh toh hai😆

Btw, the DT title is so apt once again. 😊

Originally posted by: tournesol

Btw, the DT title is so apt once again. 😊

Yeah... My favo song❤️