Suvan Drabble: Promise...

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Suvan Drabble- Promise


She crashed on my chest and started sobbing. Warm tears rolled down her cheeks. My heart broke to see her like this. Never ever in my life I had imagined my Sumo to be like this. My shirt was wet with her precious tears.

I put my arms around her to calm her, to soothe her. I don't know till how much we were in that position, but by the time she stopped, it was near evening and the sun was about to set. I cupped her cheeks and we looked into each other's eyes and they spoke for us.

' Promise me Shravan that you won't leave me, again.'

' I promise never to leave you. Never ever. Nothing can pull us apart.' I said and our foreheads touched. This time we both cried. The tears were not of pain or agony, but of happiness and contentment.

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This Drabble was entirely for Shravan's point of view.

Hope you like it.

Waiting for your replies! ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aww

so cute

Ending was

thanks for writing

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It was extremely cute ....

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Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Aww

so cute

Ending was

thanks for writing

Thank you❤️

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Originally posted by: sambag

It was extremely cute ....

Thank you❤️

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This is beautiful! Loved it Mishti ❤️ It was very simple yet serene! Amazing work!

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Originally posted by: alina.b

This is beautiful! Loved it Mishti ❤️ It was very simple yet serene! Amazing work!

Thank you so much❤️!!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It's amazing Mishti!❤️

It's subtle and sweet!

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Originally posted by: Pranushka_723

It's amazing Mishti!❤️

It's subtle and sweet!

Thank you!!!❤️

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Loved it! How brilliantly do you fit in all emotions in a crammed word space! It's amazing ! Great job yaar!👏

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